Few technological advances have altered modern life the way Internet has. Although the advantages are numerous and outstanding, there are some downsides to it as well. In this essay I will examine the issue and discuss the merits and demerits of this global network. (44 words)
Internet has offered many unparalleled advantages since the number of its users took off. First of all, it saves considerable time of each user. People used to spend big chunk of their lives doing repetitive tasks ranging from lining up for paying bills in bank to reading through thousands of pages in libraries in order to conduct a research. All that have been cut short by unbelievable speed and accessibility of the services offered online. Secondly, no one can deny that more than anything else, communication has been altered. It has enabled the citizens of modern world to contact each other from faraway places in many different ways as if distance can no longer pose a problem. (121 words)
On the other hand, however, there are some drawbacks that should not be overlooked. First of all, since the early days of the internet, it has never been a safe place and even the large multinational IT corporations with top experts have fallen victim of cyber criminals ever since. Secondly, simply the nature of using the net makes people less physically active and as a result more susceptible to obesity and a long array of health issues related to that. It is no secret that the youth do not show much enthusiasm to sports and outdoor activities which can easily be linked to the excitement and appeal of cyber space. (110 words)
In conclusion, while the substantial benefits that the Internet offers has made it inseparable part of modern world, the problems can not be ignored. (20 words)
(295 words)
Internet has offered many unparalleled advantages since the number of its users took off. First of all, it saves considerable time of each user. People used to spend big chunk of their lives doing repetitive tasks ranging from lining up for paying bills in bank to reading through thousands of pages in libraries in order to conduct a research. All that have been cut short by unbelievable speed and accessibility of the services offered online. Secondly, no one can deny that more than anything else, communication has been altered. It has enabled the citizens of modern world to contact each other from faraway places in many different ways as if distance can no longer pose a problem. (121 words)
On the other hand, however, there are some drawbacks that should not be overlooked. First of all, since the early days of the internet, it has never been a safe place and even the large multinational IT corporations with top experts have fallen victim of cyber criminals ever since. Secondly, simply the nature of using the net makes people less physically active and as a result more susceptible to obesity and a long array of health issues related to that. It is no secret that the youth do not show much enthusiasm to sports and outdoor activities which can easily be linked to the excitement and appeal of cyber space. (110 words)
In conclusion, while the substantial benefits that the Internet offers has made it inseparable part of modern world, the problems can not be ignored. (20 words)
(295 words)
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