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I think you did a very good job in this writing but there's a small problem in the conclusion in which you should support two sides or give a review of two sides but you just talked about one side. The other point is that what you wrote and your bubble diagram do not match you have to right based on your bubble diagram. Other parts are very good and you have made a lot of progress. congratulations!