I wrote this poem some 5-6 years ago. Open for critics and feedback😊

Thank you all for the response! Here is one more poem of mine.
#RA

A Different World!

Let's make a world,
defined in a different word.
Where emotions're worth,
in the humans on this earth.

Where selfishness is a forgotten term,
and, enemies are some rotten germ.
Where love is in the air,
and, we get so much in fair.

Where eyes get full of happy tears,
and, you get cared for years.
Where life doesn't seem worth leaving,
and, you get one more day for living.

I wanna belong to that world,
where people don't act curled.
Let's define it in a different word,
and make it a different world.

By - Rajiv Anand

Ideas are the currency of twenty-first century. Be aware who you share your wealth with!
#ra // @GeekPoet

Another poem by me.. feel free to comment below👇

@GeekPoet I tried reciting my own poem for the first time. It is still incomplete, please let me know by commenting below how you felt listening to my poem in my own voice!

Hey friends, don't forget to comment and tell me what you liked or didn't like about my poem(s)?!

Now that I have... by #ra
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