Why am i so addled, i seek retort through this creation.
Can't understand a thing, anymore. I just need Salvation
What am i gonna gain, if anything, why do i need revelation.
I do just fine without mass, getting back to isolation?
Why is it so important, why look for identification?
Is it the curiosity or the fear of seperation?
There is inspiration, there is recreation, there is manipulation, sensation, violation & frustration but is there anything that's necessary? Is there any elevation?
I know it bothers none but please, tell me, where am i heading to, what is my destination?
#Snowy #review
Can't understand a thing, anymore. I just need Salvation
What am i gonna gain, if anything, why do i need revelation.
I do just fine without mass, getting back to isolation?
Why is it so important, why look for identification?
Is it the curiosity or the fear of seperation?
There is inspiration, there is recreation, there is manipulation, sensation, violation & frustration but is there anything that's necessary? Is there any elevation?
I know it bothers none but please, tell me, where am i heading to, what is my destination?
#Snowy #review
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I often loved the idea
of sitting in a corner,
folded like a fatherless kid,
befriending the wrong spiders
then I learnt to love
my white fragrance,
quoted in black,
in a colorful wilderness,
lonely like an undiscovered tulip
but now,
I cage my unbridled emotions,
in words,
befriending assonance,
together hiding in metaphors,
holding quills like a father's thumb
#poetry #amtupu_ #review
of sitting in a corner,
folded like a fatherless kid,
befriending the wrong spiders
then I learnt to love
my white fragrance,
quoted in black,
in a colorful wilderness,
lonely like an undiscovered tulip
but now,
I cage my unbridled emotions,
in words,
befriending assonance,
together hiding in metaphors,
holding quills like a father's thumb
#poetry #amtupu_ #review
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The soul bleeds
The hearts what it wants
But that it can't get
So it tears crimson
Offered it did
All the light it had
For granted it was taken
Now dark it's turning
And no one to save it
As in murky waters it sinks
Drawn downwards by the heavy pain
The soul bleeds for the heart
The mind is has been holding both
For the heart and the soul it links
But it too is exhausted
It sleeps
It slips
If you blink
It will sink
And then
The end will come
That when
All will be in harm
The soul, the heart and the mind
#review
#poetry
#thesoulbleeds
#doesthepainend
#weallneedsavingfromourselves
The hearts what it wants
But that it can't get
So it tears crimson
Offered it did
All the light it had
For granted it was taken
Now dark it's turning
And no one to save it
As in murky waters it sinks
Drawn downwards by the heavy pain
The soul bleeds for the heart
The mind is has been holding both
For the heart and the soul it links
But it too is exhausted
It sleeps
It slips
If you blink
It will sink
And then
The end will come
That when
All will be in harm
The soul, the heart and the mind
#review
#poetry
#thesoulbleeds
#doesthepainend
#weallneedsavingfromourselves
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A disbeliever
Has over his eyelid another lid
Made of death,
Beyond which he sees nothing
But an endless darkness -
Like the one behind a closed eye.
Hence when warned of that
Which stands right before his nose
That is able to burn his foot
On taking another step
He tilts his head back
And his chest swells with pride
Feeling proud of his state
Of being blind
Of 'is inability to see the surroundin'
Behind death.
Should he heed the call
And be cured
He too would see
The purpose of life:
To climb back home -
The Garden of Eternity.
#poem
#review
#AhmadMusa
Has over his eyelid another lid
Made of death,
Beyond which he sees nothing
But an endless darkness -
Like the one behind a closed eye.
Hence when warned of that
Which stands right before his nose
That is able to burn his foot
On taking another step
He tilts his head back
And his chest swells with pride
Feeling proud of his state
Of being blind
Of 'is inability to see the surroundin'
Behind death.
Should he heed the call
And be cured
He too would see
The purpose of life:
To climb back home -
The Garden of Eternity.
#poem
#review
#AhmadMusa
!THE SUDDEN CHANGE !
Life has changed a lot since last time we met
Now everything thing is different ,
Yet whatever has happened will remain recurrent ,
Once I was the river through which you wanted to flow ,
But now I am the cactus which you wish not to grow,
At some point I was the reason of your smiling face ,
But now I am the cause of your disgrace ,
At some instant I was the happiness , you required ,
But now I am the sorrow, you never aspired
I wish to be your happiness again ,
I want those clouds once More to rain ,
I again desire to be your medicine for every pain ,
Eventually, like blood I want to flow through your vein ,
To force all hatred and misunderstandings to drain .
-CH.Irfan.
#review
#poem
Life has changed a lot since last time we met
Now everything thing is different ,
Yet whatever has happened will remain recurrent ,
Once I was the river through which you wanted to flow ,
But now I am the cactus which you wish not to grow,
At some point I was the reason of your smiling face ,
But now I am the cause of your disgrace ,
At some instant I was the happiness , you required ,
But now I am the sorrow, you never aspired
I wish to be your happiness again ,
I want those clouds once More to rain ,
I again desire to be your medicine for every pain ,
Eventually, like blood I want to flow through your vein ,
To force all hatred and misunderstandings to drain .
-CH.Irfan.
#review
#poem
Not in the recent past
I met a woman who is so proud, so profound.
She never looks down,
Always gaze upon the beyond.
Mesmerizing beauty and sharp as a knife,
Second to none;
Her dreams are higher than the sky,
Her words are deeper than the ocean,
Perfect in every way,She always smiles;
Her face shows how little she cares about the world.
But things weren’t so,
I didn’t know.
She dwell upon nothing,
I didn’t know a thing.
Losing herself to darkness,
She fell into an eternal slumber.
#poem
#review
~visard11
I met a woman who is so proud, so profound.
She never looks down,
Always gaze upon the beyond.
Mesmerizing beauty and sharp as a knife,
Second to none;
Her dreams are higher than the sky,
Her words are deeper than the ocean,
Perfect in every way,She always smiles;
Her face shows how little she cares about the world.
But things weren’t so,
I didn’t know.
She dwell upon nothing,
I didn’t know a thing.
Losing herself to darkness,
She fell into an eternal slumber.
#poem
#review
~visard11
I rushed down stairs. The wild energy around her was affecting me.
Not only affecting me but turning me into the perfect dumbass.
So I thought its good idea if I catch up with my buddy before a vapourising.
Reaching on the last step, I looked up at the direction of my room.
One second... What she is doing in my room? Rubbing the temple of my head, I dismiss all the cascading thoughts and marched towards the kitchen.
"Oww, Holy hell" One second I was marching with my head held high and now I was embracing the pavement.
Wow just great. I haven't been this lucky in my whole life.
And suddenly I was showered with the God's grace.
And I don't think I like it.
"Sir...what are you doing on the floor" A very confused Lola, inquired with the bucket that she just emptied on me
"I'm kissing the floor, Lola" I replied politely, well my system is shaken now, especially the one which is responsible for my emotions and feelings.
"How did you fell ?" Vivek asked in very concerned voice, rushing to me.
"No Vivek sir he is not fallen, he is just kissing the floor" Lola beamed from somewhere and I didn't even had energy to facepalm.
" And why you are wet?" He inquired
" Ohh wow he talks " My lips formed in knowing smile, well it's more like a grin.
Actually I was just taunting him.
for turning my life upside down. A if it wasn't already.
"Yeah sir he talks very much and politely" She beamed again from somewhere and I couldn't do anything more than sighing
"Why you are wet? " Vivek asked again ignoring Lola.
He is really good in ignoring people.
"It's God's grace in liquid form" I murmured, sinking my body in floor.
"No sir I just dropped water on him that I was using for cleaning" Stupid woman chirped again, it's better if she murders herself because I will do it brutally and she won't like it, I don't even need to say how ruthless I'm, That idiot doesn't know when to use her mouth and mind, but I'm not even sure if she has mind.
#Vivektavinita #Review #paragraph #novel
Not only affecting me but turning me into the perfect dumbass.
So I thought its good idea if I catch up with my buddy before a vapourising.
Reaching on the last step, I looked up at the direction of my room.
One second... What she is doing in my room? Rubbing the temple of my head, I dismiss all the cascading thoughts and marched towards the kitchen.
"Oww, Holy hell" One second I was marching with my head held high and now I was embracing the pavement.
Wow just great. I haven't been this lucky in my whole life.
And suddenly I was showered with the God's grace.
And I don't think I like it.
"Sir...what are you doing on the floor" A very confused Lola, inquired with the bucket that she just emptied on me
"I'm kissing the floor, Lola" I replied politely, well my system is shaken now, especially the one which is responsible for my emotions and feelings.
"How did you fell ?" Vivek asked in very concerned voice, rushing to me.
"No Vivek sir he is not fallen, he is just kissing the floor" Lola beamed from somewhere and I didn't even had energy to facepalm.
" And why you are wet?" He inquired
" Ohh wow he talks " My lips formed in knowing smile, well it's more like a grin.
Actually I was just taunting him.
for turning my life upside down. A if it wasn't already.
"Yeah sir he talks very much and politely" She beamed again from somewhere and I couldn't do anything more than sighing
"Why you are wet? " Vivek asked again ignoring Lola.
He is really good in ignoring people.
"It's God's grace in liquid form" I murmured, sinking my body in floor.
"No sir I just dropped water on him that I was using for cleaning" Stupid woman chirped again, it's better if she murders herself because I will do it brutally and she won't like it, I don't even need to say how ruthless I'm, That idiot doesn't know when to use her mouth and mind, but I'm not even sure if she has mind.
#Vivektavinita #Review #paragraph #novel
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White coated red
Don't think it didn't hurt
I smile, my life a facade
What is life of retaliation?
I move bruised, but time is my mender.
White coated blue
Empty within, life circling but straight i walk.
A map, a compass in hand
I look purposeful right?
Sights can be deceptive they say.
The great depression relived.
Beige on white
A door to a house
Beautiful isn't it?
Don't enter the glitter?
No gold, just everything old
Dead within, smiles of flowers in the spring.#review
#poetry
#phareal
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#review #poetry #venus
My mother
Blessed with all the might
To tolerate my naiveness
Blessed with all the courage
To withstand my mistakes
Amidst she stands with all the beauty
With all the light behind her eyes
She shows me the way
Though are beliefs aren't ever the same
Yet she acknowledges my vision
When I stumble upon in life
She has the weight to balance
Encountering all my questions away
Believe me or not she's the best in her way
No she isn't the very person
I'd remember in my toughest times
And despite all my dislikes
I believe she's the strongest woman
I'll ever meet in my life
My mother
Blessed with all the might
To tolerate my naiveness
Blessed with all the courage
To withstand my mistakes
Amidst she stands with all the beauty
With all the light behind her eyes
She shows me the way
Though are beliefs aren't ever the same
Yet she acknowledges my vision
When I stumble upon in life
She has the weight to balance
Encountering all my questions away
Believe me or not she's the best in her way
No she isn't the very person
I'd remember in my toughest times
And despite all my dislikes
I believe she's the strongest woman
I'll ever meet in my life
The poetry to my love
Hello
This is the poetry to you
My love
Don’t know where you are
What you’re doing
Which one of the emotions you’re showing
But the wishes are so strong
The heart is beating fast
The word will never chang amongst
It’s though that
I can not stay by your side
Even couldn’t be connected with
Yet you always appears
In my mind
Hopefully as the way
I’m in yours.
#philix #poetry #review
Hello
This is the poetry to you
My love
Don’t know where you are
What you’re doing
Which one of the emotions you’re showing
But the wishes are so strong
The heart is beating fast
The word will never chang amongst
It’s though that
I can not stay by your side
Even couldn’t be connected with
Yet you always appears
In my mind
Hopefully as the way
I’m in yours.
#philix #poetry #review
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Algophobia
The poet draws
Writing on the hard surface with his claws
Blood spilling
Droplets thrown away like a knife to targets
Pleasure
Irrespective of the hurt in his paws
His actions a CPR to those who relates
Replaying the awful to paint a piece
Opening and patching up old wounds with mouthful of sweets
Comfortable
But higher comfortless proximity
He draws a blueprints to this complexity of life
A duality of personality in painters of reality
Shedding light on red memoirs stored in darkness of the head
A tickling from the light is the reason for his suicidal bloodshed.
Pleasure in pain
Nothing else to gain
The writer's BDSM campaign
#phareal
#review
#poetry
The poet draws
Writing on the hard surface with his claws
Blood spilling
Droplets thrown away like a knife to targets
Pleasure
Irrespective of the hurt in his paws
His actions a CPR to those who relates
Replaying the awful to paint a piece
Opening and patching up old wounds with mouthful of sweets
Comfortable
But higher comfortless proximity
He draws a blueprints to this complexity of life
A duality of personality in painters of reality
Shedding light on red memoirs stored in darkness of the head
A tickling from the light is the reason for his suicidal bloodshed.
Pleasure in pain
Nothing else to gain
The writer's BDSM campaign
#phareal
#review
#poetry
A letter to my pain.
Hello there. What a pest you are. How dare you have greater presence that the most of my feelings. What exactly do you want since my rage is gone. What exactly do you need you seem attached to my bone. My smile and my actions try best to hide you. But how do i do so when in my speech you creep out. In my smile you're there as though i asked you. In my tears you rejoice as though i have no other. In my previous rage when trying to put my anger in a cage you still rampage. Tormenting me. How dare you touch me again, just leave me be but how do i deal with emptiness without thinking about you, how do i feel when you're always there and now I don't want you. I found comfort in your hands in the bed of your sorrow so can i have one wish from you granted and give me a vacation. A trip around love and boat cruise through the seas of my joy. Pain what do you want? Why are you always there? What have i done to have you as my best worst friend. What else do i owe you since in my time of empty you're always there. When i lost my mentor you were there, when i lost my toys you were there, when i lost my everything a definition you redefined, you were there. How messed up is our relationship. Through thick and thin you stand tall as positive things but yet you still hurt. I don't wanna lie to you, you hurt me so much in so many ways that the name pain isn't enough to define who you are. So take me away. Nail my heart with a crooked stick and twist. Let me feel all of you. Show me the greatest of your gifts and do not hold back be there another time so that when I'm used to you I'll enjoy your presence. But for now be gone. You've been here long enough. Take back all the memories and the scars that you've caused. You've taught me to be stronger thank you for that. You've been building me up and showed me how much i don't need you. I cast you away and ban you from ever trying to reach into my thoughts again. I used to feel you everytime i got asked why do i live alone. Now i answer boldly saying because i grew up and i have those who love me by my side so pain i don't need you anymore i have love. It was kinda hard to realize it's love but when my hate vanished that's when i knew the pain is gone so be gone
My tears are not worthless
#review
#spoken_word
#poetry
Hello there. What a pest you are. How dare you have greater presence that the most of my feelings. What exactly do you want since my rage is gone. What exactly do you need you seem attached to my bone. My smile and my actions try best to hide you. But how do i do so when in my speech you creep out. In my smile you're there as though i asked you. In my tears you rejoice as though i have no other. In my previous rage when trying to put my anger in a cage you still rampage. Tormenting me. How dare you touch me again, just leave me be but how do i deal with emptiness without thinking about you, how do i feel when you're always there and now I don't want you. I found comfort in your hands in the bed of your sorrow so can i have one wish from you granted and give me a vacation. A trip around love and boat cruise through the seas of my joy. Pain what do you want? Why are you always there? What have i done to have you as my best worst friend. What else do i owe you since in my time of empty you're always there. When i lost my mentor you were there, when i lost my toys you were there, when i lost my everything a definition you redefined, you were there. How messed up is our relationship. Through thick and thin you stand tall as positive things but yet you still hurt. I don't wanna lie to you, you hurt me so much in so many ways that the name pain isn't enough to define who you are. So take me away. Nail my heart with a crooked stick and twist. Let me feel all of you. Show me the greatest of your gifts and do not hold back be there another time so that when I'm used to you I'll enjoy your presence. But for now be gone. You've been here long enough. Take back all the memories and the scars that you've caused. You've taught me to be stronger thank you for that. You've been building me up and showed me how much i don't need you. I cast you away and ban you from ever trying to reach into my thoughts again. I used to feel you everytime i got asked why do i live alone. Now i answer boldly saying because i grew up and i have those who love me by my side so pain i don't need you anymore i have love. It was kinda hard to realize it's love but when my hate vanished that's when i knew the pain is gone so be gone
My tears are not worthless
#review
#spoken_word
#poetry
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Seperation lives
The life of human started from seperation,
Separation from the ocean,
Separation from the species, and
Separation from the womb of mother.
Nature is separated,
Oceans are separated,
Continents are separated, and so,
The nations emerged seperately.
Separation is the birth of new life,
Separation leads to innovation,
Separation is the worse, but
Separation is the nature.
When two persons seperates,
The heart brokes, and
Mind resides in despair, and
Life teaches the valuable lessons.
Even the origin of universe,
Started from the separation,
From one to one and another,
Separation is an unending process.
Separation begins with despair and,
End with hope.
Separation is natural and,
Separation is permanent.
PS: ignore grammatical mistakes
S NAVEEN
10-07-2022
#poetry #SN #review
The life of human started from seperation,
Separation from the ocean,
Separation from the species, and
Separation from the womb of mother.
Nature is separated,
Oceans are separated,
Continents are separated, and so,
The nations emerged seperately.
Separation is the birth of new life,
Separation leads to innovation,
Separation is the worse, but
Separation is the nature.
When two persons seperates,
The heart brokes, and
Mind resides in despair, and
Life teaches the valuable lessons.
Even the origin of universe,
Started from the separation,
From one to one and another,
Separation is an unending process.
Separation begins with despair and,
End with hope.
Separation is natural and,
Separation is permanent.
PS: ignore grammatical mistakes
S NAVEEN
10-07-2022
#poetry #SN #review
It's the silence that made me slowly drown and drift away from you. The silence that whispers I don't need you I'm fine alone. The same silence you refuse to break when I make an effort. I see you have opportunities to break it but still you don't take them. I guess I'm the idiot who thought they deserved better. I guess I was overambitious to think it could work. To think you cared. You say it but lately you don't show it. Nevertheless I drown away from you as if you'd care anyway. You'll just look and ignore like you've been doing all this time.
My tears are not worthless
#review
My tears are not worthless
#review
👍5
So yep, today my boyfriend called me two times on the line.
Firstly, he started to call me when he woke up this morning. He was somewhat messy and had a bare face. He’s so lovable! No one knows I’m happy with how he treats me like he started a day with a face-to-face with me. We did enjoy it even tho the distance seemed a bit crazy.
Secondly, In the afternoon… We hit up. As usual, we always bring up the topic of what we did today. I finally can share my happiness about the scarves that my momma brought me in the midday.
He makes me a cutie-pie compliment, and I want to hear that a thousand times a day.
Oh my goodness, he deserved what he wanted for me!
Sincerely the one who always says mi luvu,
Honey Lemon
—July, 12th 2022
#review
#maiworlds
#maijournals
#honeybee
Firstly, he started to call me when he woke up this morning. He was somewhat messy and had a bare face. He’s so lovable! No one knows I’m happy with how he treats me like he started a day with a face-to-face with me. We did enjoy it even tho the distance seemed a bit crazy.
Secondly, In the afternoon… We hit up. As usual, we always bring up the topic of what we did today. I finally can share my happiness about the scarves that my momma brought me in the midday.
He makes me a cutie-pie compliment, and I want to hear that a thousand times a day.
Oh my goodness, he deserved what he wanted for me!
Sincerely the one who always says mi luvu,
Honey Lemon
—July, 12th 2022
#review
#maiworlds
#maijournals
#honeybee
We all are one.
The sun, the moon and the earth are one (once),
But in the time they all seperated,
Being and living far away,
But they all are one.
We born on different places,
We raised in different cities,
We studied in different institutions,
But we all are on one stage. i.e,, Life.
Our handwriting may be different
But the alphabet are one,
Pens may be different,
But the ink is same,
Books may be different,
But the knowledge is eternal.
We all are separated ,
by life,
by paths,
By careers,
But our hearts are together,
and We all are one.
Our tastes,
our preferences,
our perspectives,
our thinking,
May be different but,
We all are one.
S NAVEEN
#poetry #SN #review
The sun, the moon and the earth are one (once),
But in the time they all seperated,
Being and living far away,
But they all are one.
We born on different places,
We raised in different cities,
We studied in different institutions,
But we all are on one stage. i.e,, Life.
Our handwriting may be different
But the alphabet are one,
Pens may be different,
But the ink is same,
Books may be different,
But the knowledge is eternal.
We all are separated ,
by life,
by paths,
By careers,
But our hearts are together,
and We all are one.
Our tastes,
our preferences,
our perspectives,
our thinking,
May be different but,
We all are one.
S NAVEEN
#poetry #SN #review
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#review #poetry #venus
My mother
Blessed with all the might
To tolerate my naiveness
Blessed with all the courage
To withstand my mistakes
Amidst she stands with all the beauty
With all the light behind her eyes
She shows me the way
Though are beliefs aren't ever the same
Yet she acknowledges my vision
When I stumble upon in life
She has the weight to balance
Encountering all my questions away
Believe me or not she's the best in her way
No she isn't the very person
I'd remember in my toughest times
And despite all my dislikes
I believe she's the strongest woman
I'll ever meet in my life
My mother
Blessed with all the might
To tolerate my naiveness
Blessed with all the courage
To withstand my mistakes
Amidst she stands with all the beauty
With all the light behind her eyes
She shows me the way
Though are beliefs aren't ever the same
Yet she acknowledges my vision
When I stumble upon in life
She has the weight to balance
Encountering all my questions away
Believe me or not she's the best in her way
No she isn't the very person
I'd remember in my toughest times
And despite all my dislikes
I believe she's the strongest woman
I'll ever meet in my life
👍10❤6
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