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#review really really good one
Not a fairy tale

Once upon a time…….
For a tormented spirit ,
Points in life line,
Swiftly aligned.

A chance click online,
Brought a change divine,
Distress redesigned,
Blushing sindoor and happiness entwined,

A lush green bride,
Ready to soar with her guide,
To the lands of Varuna-assi ,
she climbed.

Fiction became reality,
Reality turned into doubtful mind,
Insidious suspicion whined,
Barren bells chimed.

What now? Should I decline?
Yes! answered logic&reason combine,
No! love and faith opine.

Confused and resigned,
Cried the crest fallen bride,
Mahadev! Where do I sign?
Ask your heart & blushing cheeks in a while,
Lord replied with a sprinkle of smile,

Her King of heart stood tall with resolute trust,
She impelled her love and faith,
To re write her barren distrust!

With lush green vibrant blush ,
Doubt twirled to wedding rush.

Rosy cheeked, Misty eyed,
Coy smile dancing on red lips,
She ran into his beaconing embrace,
Redolent of his love and grace.


Not the end ……..
#review
#poetry
#RRM
Past

Past , which is alive in our heart makes present so beautiful
Present writes a beautiful future ,
Interconnected with each other by few thoughts ,
Forms a very fine thread of happiness , liveliness & individualism .
Peeping through the past got so many dark secrets ,
Which is kept secretly in my diary with a lock in my hand .
Your life writes a beautiful future everyday with you ,
Some fill it with sorrows & sad happenings ,
Some fill it with happiness & blessings ,
It's up to us what we choose.
The life is tangled in between the threads of sorrows & happiness.
The peace is unsettled between your thoughts , happiness & sorrows .
Past can't come back , future we can't see .
Only present is with us to make us calm & hold our thoughts tightly .

#Shruti #review #poetry
#Thought #review

As a student of literature and as a over-thinker, I have this habit of writing things. Recently I was writing a poem of mine and there I felt like there is no end of it. But then again I have to complete it so I write a end. And I realize that there is end of everything, we as a human cannot understand the things that has no end. We can't understand the concept of infinity.
Money!!!

When do we take their handshakes
And when should we flee?
From them that look harmless
Like smiling little babes.
With their charming appearance
That can easily attract the heart
And cause it to walk out
To leave its owner behind.
Unless we feel too poor
To dread any thief but a snatcher of life
Then we can't just shake anyone
If our good characters still matters to us.


#review #AhmadMusa #poem
Efforts of separate from eachother or
Its thoughts, bring each other more closer.

#AkashAP #quote #review
After the mistake,
The good man spends moments in sorrow and the bad man in pride.

#AkashAP #quote #review
Efforts to get separate from each other or
Their thoughts, bring them more and more closer than before ???

????

Their Story definitely will not end in the mid!
May be today they are not as they should be..
Umm..later on they'll be! I'm sure abt it..
Yess..They're Blessed!

!!!!


🥀

-Gurpreet Bhatia
#guri #review #poetry
#review #AkashAP

Contemplating about this quote, it's quite interesting but confusing as well.
After the mistake, why would a good man spend time in sorrow instead of learning. And a bad man too...

Please describe.
"Negativity surrounds man in despair."

#AkashAP #quote #review
Mapping things

Everything we just fix gets broken again,
It's like time is itself a big loophole ,
It's difficult to lose someone ;
That terrible feeling make you lose yourself too .
Finding pleasure in things which are temporary anomaly,
Is just like finding mistakes in crimes you have not committed.
Trying to find fourth dimension ,
Which is that one perfect moment ,
When u say that this is the time ,
And u have got everything of it.
When u try to map out tiny little things ,
You get something which was missing from a long time.
It could be your that segment which makes the time fourth dimensional.

#Shruti #review #poem
I am blind not with the eye, but with the heart;
'Trust' was one of them.

#AkashAP #quote #review

Meaning : i was blind with the heart (A kind man) because of that i did trust on someone more than myself. Every good people or a kind man did it once. 👍😁
Those who say: "I'm not in love", then
Whose face comes with closed eyes?
"Love makes its presence felt even in its absence."

#AkashAP #review #words
Your persistence offers some resistance ,
You thrive on your thoughts ;
Cause you never let them die .
Comes with a purpose & goes away ,
You repose it in your mind .
Never understood what it was exactly,
But got applied to me aptly .
Someday haunting my thoughts ,got what I really wanted .
Cause my persistence also offers insistence.
Insists me to put myself in the forefront ,
So that I can confront things ,
Some things can be in favour , while some are added for savour .
Sometimes it sucks you , other times you chuckle to wipe out the things .
Wiping out things , cause I wanted to ripen it next time .
Got myself the sour taste , but some sugar also added on it .
Seems nothing is impossible , till everything seems possible .

#Shruti #review #poetry
Nigeria Independence Celebration


They said "call it the joyful day"
But why not instead the starry night?
With the few well fed stars
That glowed in peace
And the gloomy smoke
Which was filled with cries -
As eyes of the masses
Melted in sorrow,
Their stomachs grumbled of hunger
And had their hearts
Encaged with terror -
Shouldn't it be the night of mourning?
Where leaders express
Regrets
Over their failures.


#review #AhmadMusa #poem
I'm here at least for now
The sheer coming
Will it be traumatizing
Or still ill be jumping in ecstasy
The one guys are here

In ever possible race
I try to set the pace
Now everything seems nasty and hectic
But for now its stopped
The one guys are here

You will know it
When the time comes
But for now ,keep the gaze
Until the forfeited misfortune swindles,for sure
The one guys are here

This time for real
Only for the elite and professional
But the peasants will still be digging the unfathomed truth
That is written on their dusty hands
Will they unearth it?maybe
For it seems ,
The one guys are here

Why change everything?
For the folks to divide
Why seal everything?
For the truth to be hidden
Why consume everything?
For the thirsty not to quench
But as the saying goes
The one guys are here

#Linville #review
The forsaken
I'm looking for a man who says,
"Giving a relationship time doesn't break it."

#AkashAP #review #satire
"Excessive imagination destroys man"

#AkashAP #review #qoute