Hey , said a twinkling star

That appeared to be not too far

Why are you sleeping so soon?

Come out and look at the beautiful moon

I don't have anybody with me , I said

And was heading towards my cozy bed

What about the girl you message everyday?

Said the star in a cheesy way

Oh! She lives too far

To together see these twinkling stars

And buzz , I received a message out of the blue

It was none other than you

Hey there , your message read

Uh! Uh! And the star had enough said

I know you're wondering what I'm trying to say

To see the stars with you if it's okay

Be my partner in this crime

Now it's getting too difficult to rhyme

( P.S. : it's my first time writing a poem. I know it's too crude . Suggestions are welcome)

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Hey , said a twinkling star,

That appeared to be not too far.


Why are you sleeping so soon?,

Come out and look at the beautiful moon.

I don't have anybody with me , I said

And was heading towards my cozy bed.


What about the girl you message everyday?

Said the star in a cheesy way.

Oh! She lives too far

To together see these twinkling stars.


And buzz , I received a message out of blue,

It was none other than you.

'Hey there' , your message read

' Uh! Uh! ' and the star had enough said .


I know you're wondering what I'm trying to say ,

I want to see the stars together if it's okay

Be my partner in this crime ,

Oh god! It's damn hard to form the perfect rhyme.

( P. S. : I'm a total noob at writing poems. It is one of my first pieces. Please share your valuable feedbacks.)

#everyone #review #poem #midnight_thoughts