❤ تعیین رایگان نمره #اسپیکینگ شما(از خرداد ۱۳۹۵) + #فیدبک
❤️ تعیین رایگان نمره #رایتینگ شما (از شهریور ۱۳۹۶)

🔴🔴🔴 3 پرسش جدید اسپیکینگ امروز از آخرین آزمون های برگزار شده آیلتس در ایران + پاسخ های مدرس آیلتس با نمره ۸.۵ اسپیکینگ(اردیبهشت ۹۵)

❌❌ #پاسخها_را_حفظ_نمیکنیم
❌❌ #پاسخها_را_از_رو_نمیخوانیم
❌❌ #نمایشی_صحبت_نمیکنیم هدف آموزش است

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🔴 فقط به یکی از پرسش های زیر (دست کم 60 ثانیه) پاسخ داده و با استفاده از یک Recorder پاسخ را در فرمت #mp3 ضبط کنید و برای ما به این نشانی بفرستید. 👇👇👇
@PouyaAbolghasemi


🔴 What is the best age for learning to drive?


🔴 What are some jobs that require good driving skills?


🔴 what is the future of transportation in your opinion?


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🔴 Estimated Score for this Speaking sample is 6

#feedback

❌raise ✅check the pronunciation
❌having a good nursing for them ✅ providing a safe place for them
❌in a good manner✅in a good way

🔴 Estimated Score for this Speaking sample is 6.5

#feedback

❌play a crucial role upbringing✅play a crucial role in raising
❌fundamental place✅the first place
❌rising✅raising ❗️check the pronunciation

🔴 Estimated Score for this Speaking sample is 6 to 6.5

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❌well situation✅appropriate situation
❌they affected to kids✅ they influence chikdren
❌as result ✅as a result
❌can lead our children to be a good person ✅ can teach our children how to be a good person

🔴 Estimated Score for this Speaking sample is 6.5

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❌many factors to effecting your life✅many factors that affect your life
❌can improving✅can improve
❌every pupil is intelligence ✅ every pupil is intelligent

🔴 Estimated Score for this Speaking sample is 7

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❌maybe happen for each of us✅may happen for...
❌everyone saw dreams about✅everyone dreams about
❌what was the continue of my dream✅what was the rest of my dream

❤ تعیین رایگان نمره #اسپیکینگ شما(از خرداد ۱۳۹۵) + #فیدبک
❤️ تعیین رایگان نمره #رایتینگ شما (از شهریور ۱۳۹۶)

🔴🔴🔴 3 پرسش جدید اسپیکینگ امروز از آخرین آزمون های برگزار شده آیلتس در ایران + پاسخ های مدرس آیلتس با نمره ۸.۵ اسپیکینگ(اردیبهشت ۹۵)

❌❌ #پاسخها_را_حفظ_نمیکنیم
❌❌ #پاسخها_را_از_رو_نمیخوانیم
❌❌ #نمایشی_صحبت_نمیکنیم هدف آموزش است

@ielts2com در

🔴 فقط به یکی از پرسش های زیر (دست کم 60 ثانیه) پاسخ داده و با استفاده از یک Recorder پاسخ را در فرمت #mp3 ضبط کنید و برای ما به این نشانی بفرستید. 👇👇👇
@PouyaAbolghasemi


🔴 What is the best age for learning to drive?


🔴 What are some jobs that require good driving skills?


🔴 what is the future of transportation in your opinion?


@ielts2com

👇👇👇

✅ https://t.me/joinchat/AAAAAD-kV1Uz6LYQtFoKTw

✅ @Feedbackparadise

🔴🔴اعلام #نمره های تعیین شده + #فیدبک بر روی نمونه های ارسالی در ☝☝☝
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#feedback

Good work. Keep up the good work

❌Olympiad ✅ National/international competition
❌it was very pleasure✅it was very pleasant
❌lived one month✅stayed for one month

#feedback

Vocabulary 6
Grammatical range and accuracy 6
Coherence and cohesion 6
Task Response 7

✌️✌️ generally this is a very good work with clear ideas and find support the number of mistakes in grammatical structures is not considerable and it can score well in a real IELTS exam

For improvement I think the most important point you have to work on is the development of your ideas and how you support them in your essay. you should be more accurate, more coherent and more logical.

It's obvious that the vocabulary and grammatical structures can be improved in your future works and I'm looking forward to see an improvement in these criteria.

❗️ your conclusion should be a review of your main ideas

❌they can do too much work ✅they can work hard
❌the ability to doing hard work✅the ability to work hard
❌fewer health care✅less healthcare
❌is significantly decreased ✅is significantly less



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#feedback

Vocabulary 6
Grammatical range and accuracy 6
Fluency 7
Pronunciation 7

#feedback

Pronunciation 7
Fluency 6.5
Grammatical range and accuracy 6
Vocabulary 6

🔴 Estimated Score for this Speaking sample is 6

🔴 Estimated Score for this Speaking sample is 6.5