اسپیکینگ آیلتس IELTS Speaking
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🔴 Estimated Score for this Speaking sample is 6.5
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The biggest problem with your voice sample is the grammatical mistakes you have. Moreover you should work on both your fluency and pronunciation.
❌parents plays✅parents play
❌children's lifestyle✅children's lives
❌can accelerate the proxces of growing✅can optimize the normal development
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The biggest problem with your voice sample is the grammatical mistakes you have. Moreover you should work on both your fluency and pronunciation.
❌parents plays✅parents play
❌children's lifestyle✅children's lives
❌can accelerate the proxces of growing✅can optimize the normal development
🔴 Estimated Score for this Speaking sample is 7 to 7.5
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Generally this is a fine answer but you have to work on your fluency and try to talk faster with right intonation.
second point is you have to work on your pronunciation because you have quite a few mistakes in your pronunciations and
finally you have to be careful about the words or sentences that you translate directly from your first language
❌when they are infancy✅when they are infants
❌launch them on the path or antisocial behavior ✅encourage them to show antisocial behavior
❌logivpcally✅check the pronunciation
❌return you what you are✅reflect your characteristics
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Generally this is a fine answer but you have to work on your fluency and try to talk faster with right intonation.
second point is you have to work on your pronunciation because you have quite a few mistakes in your pronunciations and
finally you have to be careful about the words or sentences that you translate directly from your first language
❌when they are infancy✅when they are infants
❌launch them on the path or antisocial behavior ✅encourage them to show antisocial behavior
❌logivpcally✅check the pronunciation
❌return you what you are✅reflect your characteristics
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Very good work. There are some mistakes in the word choice. Pay more attention to grammar and by checking the dictionary try to find ways to i prove your sentences
❌imperial government✅monerchy
❌works of the country ✅the problems of the country
Very good work. There are some mistakes in the word choice. Pay more attention to grammar and by checking the dictionary try to find ways to i prove your sentences
❌imperial government✅monerchy
❌works of the country ✅the problems of the country
اسپیکینگ آیلتس IELTS Speaking
Recording (4)
🔴 Estimated Score for this Speaking sample is 6
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❌raise ✅check the pronunciation
❌having a good nursing for them ✅ providing a safe place for them
❌in a good manner✅in a good way
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❌raise ✅check the pronunciation
❌having a good nursing for them ✅ providing a safe place for them
❌in a good manner✅in a good way
اسپیکینگ آیلتس IELTS Speaking
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🔴 Estimated Score for this Speaking sample is 6.5
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❌play a crucial role upbringing✅play a crucial role in raising
❌fundamental place✅the first place
❌rising✅raising ❗️check the pronunciation
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❌play a crucial role upbringing✅play a crucial role in raising
❌fundamental place✅the first place
❌rising✅raising ❗️check the pronunciation
Helia
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🔴 Estimated Score for this Speaking sample is 6 to 6.5
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❌well situation✅appropriate situation
❌they affected to kids✅ they influence chikdren
❌as result ✅as a result
❌can lead our children to be a good person ✅ can teach our children how to be a good person
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❌well situation✅appropriate situation
❌they affected to kids✅ they influence chikdren
❌as result ✅as a result
❌can lead our children to be a good person ✅ can teach our children how to be a good person
اسپیکینگ آیلتس IELTS Speaking
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🔴 Estimated Score for this Speaking sample is 6.5
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❌many factors to effecting your life✅many factors that affect your life
❌can improving✅can improve
❌every pupil is intelligence ✅ every pupil is intelligent
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❌many factors to effecting your life✅many factors that affect your life
❌can improving✅can improve
❌every pupil is intelligence ✅ every pupil is intelligent
اسپیکینگ آیلتس IELTS Speaking
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🔴 Estimated Score for this Speaking sample is 7
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❌maybe happen for each of us✅may happen for...
❌everyone saw dreams about✅everyone dreams about
❌what was the continue of my dream✅what was the rest of my dream
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❌maybe happen for each of us✅may happen for...
❌everyone saw dreams about✅everyone dreams about
❌what was the continue of my dream✅what was the rest of my dream
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Good work. Keep up the good work
❌Olympiad ✅ National/international competition
❌it was very pleasure✅it was very pleasant
❌lived one month✅stayed for one month
Good work. Keep up the good work
❌Olympiad ✅ National/international competition
❌it was very pleasure✅it was very pleasant
❌lived one month✅stayed for one month
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Vocabulary 6
Grammatical range and accuracy 6
Coherence and cohesion 6
Task Response 7
✌️✌️ generally this is a very good work with clear ideas and find support the number of mistakes in grammatical structures is not considerable and it can score well in a real IELTS exam
For improvement I think the most important point you have to work on is the development of your ideas and how you support them in your essay. you should be more accurate, more coherent and more logical.
It's obvious that the vocabulary and grammatical structures can be improved in your future works and I'm looking forward to see an improvement in these criteria.
❗️ your conclusion should be a review of your main ideas
❌they can do too much work ✅they can work hard
❌the ability to doing hard work✅the ability to work hard
❌fewer health care✅less healthcare
❌is significantly decreased ✅is significantly less
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Vocabulary 6
Grammatical range and accuracy 6
Coherence and cohesion 6
Task Response 7
✌️✌️ generally this is a very good work with clear ideas and find support the number of mistakes in grammatical structures is not considerable and it can score well in a real IELTS exam
For improvement I think the most important point you have to work on is the development of your ideas and how you support them in your essay. you should be more accurate, more coherent and more logical.
It's obvious that the vocabulary and grammatical structures can be improved in your future works and I'm looking forward to see an improvement in these criteria.
❗️ your conclusion should be a review of your main ideas
❌they can do too much work ✅they can work hard
❌the ability to doing hard work✅the ability to work hard
❌fewer health care✅less healthcare
❌is significantly decreased ✅is significantly less
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Pronunciation 7
Fluency 6.5
Grammatical range and accuracy 6.5
Vocabulary 6
❌feed her✅fed her
❌wrote in her face✅on her face
❌I really depressed✅I felt deprrssed
Pronunciation 7
Fluency 6.5
Grammatical range and accuracy 6.5
Vocabulary 6
❌feed her✅fed her
❌wrote in her face✅on her face
❌I really depressed✅I felt deprrssed
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Good work. Try to Google the subject and use higher level words if possible.
Try to talk a bit faster by practicing each question several times
❌too much ✅very much
❌pleasable✅pleasant
❌I enjoy about that✅I enjoy it
Good work. Try to Google the subject and use higher level words if possible.
Try to talk a bit faster by practicing each question several times
❌too much ✅very much
❌pleasable✅pleasant
❌I enjoy about that✅I enjoy it
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You need to work on your fluency. Try to talk a bit faster. This it possible by more practice.
You should have more excitement in your voice! Try to have rising and falling voice.
Fluency 6
Vocabulary 6.5
Grammatical range & Accuracy 6
Pronunciation 7
❌hard attempt to find a job✅ tried really hard to find a job.
You need to work on your fluency. Try to talk a bit faster. This it possible by more practice.
You should have more excitement in your voice! Try to have rising and falling voice.
Fluency 6
Vocabulary 6.5
Grammatical range & Accuracy 6
Pronunciation 7
❌hard attempt to find a job✅ tried really hard to find a job.
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Vocabulary 6
Grammatical range and accuracy 6
Fluency 7
Pronunciation 7
❌had been fixing ✅was fixing
❌heard✅check the pronunciatio
❌what was happened with him✅what happened to him
❌a stranger woman ✅a woman
❌I know how carry them✅I know how to carry them
❌he has stomachache✅he was suffering from stomach pain
❌I did massage on his stomachache ✅I massaged his stomachache
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Vocabulary 6
Grammatical range and accuracy 6
Fluency 7
Pronunciation 7
❌had been fixing ✅was fixing
❌heard✅check the pronunciatio
❌what was happened with him✅what happened to him
❌a stranger woman ✅a woman
❌I know how carry them✅I know how to carry them
❌he has stomachache✅he was suffering from stomach pain
❌I did massage on his stomachache ✅I massaged his stomachache
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👌نمونه #فیدبک بر روی فایل های صوتی یکی از زبان آموزان کلاس آنلاین روزهای فرد.
❤️ بانک فیدبک های #اسپیکینگ و #رایتینگ 👈👈👈 @FeedbackParadise
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This is a very good work but the points you can work on is your pronunciation which should be correct and accurate for all words and the other is your grammatical structures that can be at a higher level if you want to fix a 7 or probably go for a higher band score.
Vocabulary 7
Grammatical range and accuracy 7
Pronunciation 7
Fluency 7
❌its a wrong opinion ✅ I dont think this is a right way to look at it
❌degree✅check the pronunciation
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This is a very good work but the points you can work on is your pronunciation which should be correct and accurate for all words and the other is your grammatical structures that can be at a higher level if you want to fix a 7 or probably go for a higher band score.
Vocabulary 7
Grammatical range and accuracy 7
Pronunciation 7
Fluency 7
❌its a wrong opinion ✅ I dont think this is a right way to look at it
❌degree✅check the pronunciation
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Pouya Abolqasemi:
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Pronunciation 7
Fluency 7
Grammatical range and accuracy 6
Vocabulary 6
❌cousin✅check the pronunciation
❌win his enemy✅defeat his enemy
❌competition✅battle
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Pronunciation 7
Fluency 7
Grammatical range and accuracy 6
Vocabulary 6
❌cousin✅check the pronunciation
❌win his enemy✅defeat his enemy
❌competition✅battle
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Vocabulary 7
Grammatical range and accuracy 6.5
Coherence and Cohesion 7
Task achievement 7
‼️Main idea if the second paragraph is only "limiting information"
‼️there shiuld be a short separate paragraph for your opinion
❌connect increase public knowledge ✅connect the increase in public knowledge
❌maximum sharing information ✅maximum degree of sharing...
❌cordless✅wireless
❌disconstructive✅ destructive
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Vocabulary 7
Grammatical range and accuracy 6.5
Coherence and Cohesion 7
Task achievement 7
‼️Main idea if the second paragraph is only "limiting information"
‼️there shiuld be a short separate paragraph for your opinion
❌connect increase public knowledge ✅connect the increase in public knowledge
❌maximum sharing information ✅maximum degree of sharing...
❌cordless✅wireless
❌disconstructive✅ destructive
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1️⃣❌the teenage is the happiest period of the lives of them✅the teenage years is the happiest period of life for them
2️⃣❌these years they are at the best physical health situation, generally.✅during these years they usually enjoy the best state of physical health.
3️⃣ keeping fitness✅ keeping fit
4️⃣❌they can make a lot friends✅
این مورد به ساپورت دوم بی ربط است. توضیح همان مورد باید ادامه پیدا کند
5️⃣❌make a great happiness✅
چنین ساختاری وجود ندارد
6️⃣❌ teenagers are less stressful. ✅ teenagers experience less stressful.
7️⃣❌their duties are restricted✅they have only few responsiblities.
8️⃣❌ this causes they ✅ as a result of this
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9️⃣❌they seen remarkably calm and happy.✅they usually look/seem calm and happy.
🔟❌adulthood is happier age ✅adulthood is a happier time
1️⃣1️⃣❌people have the job ✅people usually have a full-time job
1️⃣2️⃣❌and because of working feel they are beneficially important for the society.✅and because of this they feel that they are beneficial and important for the society.
1️⃣3️⃣❌as the adults have to work routinely✅as adults have a full-time job with a fixed working hours
1️⃣4️⃣⁉️makes a great pleasure to them.
این ساختار بی معنی است و در زبان انگلیسی وجود ندارد!
1️⃣5️⃣❌ employees have to be early bird and this makes them to seem ✅ employees have to get up early everyday and this makes them seem...
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1️⃣6️⃣❌make their own decisions self-confidently✅make their own decisions without other people's approval
1️⃣❌the teenage is the happiest period of the lives of them✅the teenage years is the happiest period of life for them
2️⃣❌these years they are at the best physical health situation, generally.✅during these years they usually enjoy the best state of physical health.
3️⃣ keeping fitness✅ keeping fit
4️⃣❌they can make a lot friends✅
این مورد به ساپورت دوم بی ربط است. توضیح همان مورد باید ادامه پیدا کند
5️⃣❌make a great happiness✅
چنین ساختاری وجود ندارد
6️⃣❌ teenagers are less stressful. ✅ teenagers experience less stressful.
7️⃣❌their duties are restricted✅they have only few responsiblities.
8️⃣❌ this causes they ✅ as a result of this
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9️⃣❌they seen remarkably calm and happy.✅they usually look/seem calm and happy.
🔟❌adulthood is happier age ✅adulthood is a happier time
1️⃣1️⃣❌people have the job ✅people usually have a full-time job
1️⃣2️⃣❌and because of working feel they are beneficially important for the society.✅and because of this they feel that they are beneficial and important for the society.
1️⃣3️⃣❌as the adults have to work routinely✅as adults have a full-time job with a fixed working hours
1️⃣4️⃣⁉️makes a great pleasure to them.
این ساختار بی معنی است و در زبان انگلیسی وجود ندارد!
1️⃣5️⃣❌ employees have to be early bird and this makes them to seem ✅ employees have to get up early everyday and this makes them seem...
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1️⃣6️⃣❌make their own decisions self-confidently✅make their own decisions without other people's approval