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Good work. Keep up the good work
❌Olympiad ✅ National/international competition
❌it was very pleasure✅it was very pleasant
❌lived one month✅stayed for one month
Good work. Keep up the good work
❌Olympiad ✅ National/international competition
❌it was very pleasure✅it was very pleasant
❌lived one month✅stayed for one month
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Vocabulary 6
Grammatical range and accuracy 6
Coherence and cohesion 6
Task Response 7
✌️✌️ generally this is a very good work with clear ideas and find support the number of mistakes in grammatical structures is not considerable and it can score well in a real IELTS exam
For improvement I think the most important point you have to work on is the development of your ideas and how you support them in your essay. you should be more accurate, more coherent and more logical.
It's obvious that the vocabulary and grammatical structures can be improved in your future works and I'm looking forward to see an improvement in these criteria.
❗️ your conclusion should be a review of your main ideas
❌they can do too much work ✅they can work hard
❌the ability to doing hard work✅the ability to work hard
❌fewer health care✅less healthcare
❌is significantly decreased ✅is significantly less
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Vocabulary 6
Grammatical range and accuracy 6
Coherence and cohesion 6
Task Response 7
✌️✌️ generally this is a very good work with clear ideas and find support the number of mistakes in grammatical structures is not considerable and it can score well in a real IELTS exam
For improvement I think the most important point you have to work on is the development of your ideas and how you support them in your essay. you should be more accurate, more coherent and more logical.
It's obvious that the vocabulary and grammatical structures can be improved in your future works and I'm looking forward to see an improvement in these criteria.
❗️ your conclusion should be a review of your main ideas
❌they can do too much work ✅they can work hard
❌the ability to doing hard work✅the ability to work hard
❌fewer health care✅less healthcare
❌is significantly decreased ✅is significantly less
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اسپیکینگ آیلتس IELTS Speaking
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🔴 Estimated Score for this Speaking sample is 6
اسپیکینگ آیلتس IELTS Speaking
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🔴 Estimated Score for this Speaking sample is 6.5
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Pronunciation 7
Fluency 6.5
Grammatical range and accuracy 6.5
Vocabulary 6
❌feed her✅fed her
❌wrote in her face✅on her face
❌I really depressed✅I felt deprrssed
Pronunciation 7
Fluency 6.5
Grammatical range and accuracy 6.5
Vocabulary 6
❌feed her✅fed her
❌wrote in her face✅on her face
❌I really depressed✅I felt deprrssed
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Good work. Try to Google the subject and use higher level words if possible.
Try to talk a bit faster by practicing each question several times
❌too much ✅very much
❌pleasable✅pleasant
❌I enjoy about that✅I enjoy it
Good work. Try to Google the subject and use higher level words if possible.
Try to talk a bit faster by practicing each question several times
❌too much ✅very much
❌pleasable✅pleasant
❌I enjoy about that✅I enjoy it
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You need to work on your fluency. Try to talk a bit faster. This it possible by more practice.
You should have more excitement in your voice! Try to have rising and falling voice.
Fluency 6
Vocabulary 6.5
Grammatical range & Accuracy 6
Pronunciation 7
❌hard attempt to find a job✅ tried really hard to find a job.
You need to work on your fluency. Try to talk a bit faster. This it possible by more practice.
You should have more excitement in your voice! Try to have rising and falling voice.
Fluency 6
Vocabulary 6.5
Grammatical range & Accuracy 6
Pronunciation 7
❌hard attempt to find a job✅ tried really hard to find a job.