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A Different World!
Let's make a world,
defined in a different word.
Where emotions're worth,
in the humans on this earth.
Where selfishness is a forgotten term,
and, enemies are some rotten germ.
Where love is in the air,
and, we get so much in fair.
Where eyes get full of happy tears,
and, you get cared for years.
Where life doesn't seem worth leaving,
and, you get one more day for living.
I wanna belong to that world,
where people don't act curled.
Let's define it in a different word,
and make it a different world.
By - Rajiv Anand
Let's make a world,
defined in a different word.
Where emotions're worth,
in the humans on this earth.
Where selfishness is a forgotten term,
and, enemies are some rotten germ.
Where love is in the air,
and, we get so much in fair.
Where eyes get full of happy tears,
and, you get cared for years.
Where life doesn't seem worth leaving,
and, you get one more day for living.
I wanna belong to that world,
where people don't act curled.
Let's define it in a different word,
and make it a different world.
By - Rajiv Anand
Forwarded from GeekPoet
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