The mouth had been covered and the face had been subdued. Down she went into his arms. The women had done their job well- or at least good . this time of night. Even the police here were friendly, some of them were partially aware of what was going on.
Just as long as they did not interfere.
Before the inspector’s eyes, the city should had impressed him, but not really, it was just a blur on top of all of his other assignments
Without delay, they reached the shore
Still drugged the actress was placed on her feet
Four men took her from here into a small ‘fishing boat’
In the silent atmosphere one, the man carrying the actress from her seat said "fishing is bountiful, we reap the shiniest glitter from the sea of paper pushers"
“
The smiling woman with buck teeth said "Karma is despair for the decadent. The predators are now our little fish. I enjoy turning the world upside down for the pretty ones. In fact I feel more beautiful than I ever have in my life.
The actresses eyes were still seemingly at peace with only a residue of the panic left apparent.
"Little girl does not understand she will have more joy than she ever imagined" The second woman said quickly.
The others chuckled but inspector Yi was stoic. "We will talk later about your service to our motherland. You have barely begun to understand your purpose. Depart from this place immediately.
The abandoned shore line roared quietly as if it was also aware of the moment.
The actress was quietly brought below deck on the wooden creaky vessel. Inspector Yi spoke to the most burly of the men
"As usual, you will steer south and westward during the night. You are unlikely to be apprehended but have your fishing gear ready at all times for a show of innocence. After your last stop on the coast emphasize your Japanese covers if you come across any others
You will be rewarded upon arrival."
*And if we get caught?"
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Just as long as they did not interfere.
Before the inspector’s eyes, the city should had impressed him, but not really, it was just a blur on top of all of his other assignments
Without delay, they reached the shore
Still drugged the actress was placed on her feet
Four men took her from here into a small ‘fishing boat’
In the silent atmosphere one, the man carrying the actress from her seat said "fishing is bountiful, we reap the shiniest glitter from the sea of paper pushers"
“
The smiling woman with buck teeth said "Karma is despair for the decadent. The predators are now our little fish. I enjoy turning the world upside down for the pretty ones. In fact I feel more beautiful than I ever have in my life.
The actresses eyes were still seemingly at peace with only a residue of the panic left apparent.
"Little girl does not understand she will have more joy than she ever imagined" The second woman said quickly.
The others chuckled but inspector Yi was stoic. "We will talk later about your service to our motherland. You have barely begun to understand your purpose. Depart from this place immediately.
The abandoned shore line roared quietly as if it was also aware of the moment.
The actress was quietly brought below deck on the wooden creaky vessel. Inspector Yi spoke to the most burly of the men
"As usual, you will steer south and westward during the night. You are unlikely to be apprehended but have your fishing gear ready at all times for a show of innocence. After your last stop on the coast emphasize your Japanese covers if you come across any others
You will be rewarded upon arrival."
*And if we get caught?"
#novel "Thom #crime #asia #review
The mouth had been covered and the face had been subdued. Down she went into his arms. The women had done their job well- or at least good . this time of night. Even the police here were friendly, some of them were partially aware of what was going on.
Just as long as they did not interfere.
Before the inspector’s eyes, the city should had impressed him, but not really, it was just a blur on top of all of his other assignments
Without delay, they reached the shore
Still drugged the actress was placed on her feet
Four men took her from here into a small ‘fishing boat’
In the silent atmosphere one, the man carrying the actress from her seat said "fishing is bountiful, we reap the shiniest glitter from the sea of paper pushers"
“
The smiling woman with buck teeth said "Karma is despair for the decadent. The predators are now our little fish. I enjoy turning the world upside down for the pretty ones. In fact I feel more beautiful than I ever have in my life.
The actresses eyes were still seemingly at peace with only a residue of the panic left apparent.
"Little girl does not understand she will have more joy than she ever imagined" The second woman said quickly.
The others chuckled but inspector Yi was stoic. "We will talk later about your service to our motherland. You have barely begun to understand your purpose. Depart from this place immediately.
The abandoned shore line roared quietly as if it was also aware of the moment.
The actress was quietly brought below deck on the wooden creaky vessel. Inspector Yi spoke to the most burly of the men
"As usual, you will steer south and westward during the night. You are unlikely to be apprehended but have your fishing gear ready at all times for a show of innocence. After your last stop on the coast emphasize your Japanese covers if you come across any others
You will be rewarded upon arrival."
*And if we get caught?"
#novel #Thom #crime #asia #review
Just as long as they did not interfere.
Before the inspector’s eyes, the city should had impressed him, but not really, it was just a blur on top of all of his other assignments
Without delay, they reached the shore
Still drugged the actress was placed on her feet
Four men took her from here into a small ‘fishing boat’
In the silent atmosphere one, the man carrying the actress from her seat said "fishing is bountiful, we reap the shiniest glitter from the sea of paper pushers"
“
The smiling woman with buck teeth said "Karma is despair for the decadent. The predators are now our little fish. I enjoy turning the world upside down for the pretty ones. In fact I feel more beautiful than I ever have in my life.
The actresses eyes were still seemingly at peace with only a residue of the panic left apparent.
"Little girl does not understand she will have more joy than she ever imagined" The second woman said quickly.
The others chuckled but inspector Yi was stoic. "We will talk later about your service to our motherland. You have barely begun to understand your purpose. Depart from this place immediately.
The abandoned shore line roared quietly as if it was also aware of the moment.
The actress was quietly brought below deck on the wooden creaky vessel. Inspector Yi spoke to the most burly of the men
"As usual, you will steer south and westward during the night. You are unlikely to be apprehended but have your fishing gear ready at all times for a show of innocence. After your last stop on the coast emphasize your Japanese covers if you come across any others
You will be rewarded upon arrival."
*And if we get caught?"
#novel #Thom #crime #asia #review
CHAPTER-1
HIS DREAMS
Charlie leapt out of his bed earshot the alarm went off. It was approximately 8 am and his school bus would be arriving at about quarter past eight. He rushed off to the washroom to take a bath and wore his outfit speedily. He settled down to eat the breakfast his mom Annie prepared for him.
As he was eating his breakfast he heard the heavy horn of the school bus and rode off to it, leaving half of the fraction of his sandwich behind.
Charlie was a prominent figure in his school, though he was an introvert and didn’t have many pals, thanks to his high ranks and his position as the forward in the football team. He had a high IQ and a well-built body, especially for an 18-year-old. He loved science and while other students found it exceptionally exhausting, he was curious, particularly about outer space. Whether it had aliens? What was holding the universe together? Where do the cosmos end? Etc….
Although Charlie doesn't have many friends, he had one good friend named Tyler. He was Charlie’s
neighbour and was with him right from his
childhood. He was always with him in every adventure of his life. But he wasn't anticipating to be with him in the upcoming one even though they didn't know about that.
Time went as unhurriedly as every common day in the school, soon came his favourite period Science,
And the topic was about time. There arrived the question if an individual can see the past. He forthwith stood up and reacted that if someone notices the stars at night, they are glimpsing years past the present time as the light from the stars take years to reach us. The whole class gazed him as if he was an alien. Even the teacher stood there stunned. But that only added to his dream of exploring the macrocosm
His thoughtful psyche was filled with curiosity, which he can't even get the answers from his school. He asked Tyler about his doubts but he stood there with his face as he doesn't even know a thing. His wonder about the outer space was confusing his mind.
They got out of their school bus and was slowly strolling back towards their respective homes. He began to open the door but it was sealed he unzipped his bag and grabbed the key he had in his possession and opened the door. He took a bottle of orange juice out from the fridge and took a gulp of it to overcome his thirst. He was very weary from the day at school. He immediately climbed to his room and fell down on his couch without even changing his dress.
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HIS DREAMS
Charlie leapt out of his bed earshot the alarm went off. It was approximately 8 am and his school bus would be arriving at about quarter past eight. He rushed off to the washroom to take a bath and wore his outfit speedily. He settled down to eat the breakfast his mom Annie prepared for him.
As he was eating his breakfast he heard the heavy horn of the school bus and rode off to it, leaving half of the fraction of his sandwich behind.
Charlie was a prominent figure in his school, though he was an introvert and didn’t have many pals, thanks to his high ranks and his position as the forward in the football team. He had a high IQ and a well-built body, especially for an 18-year-old. He loved science and while other students found it exceptionally exhausting, he was curious, particularly about outer space. Whether it had aliens? What was holding the universe together? Where do the cosmos end? Etc….
Although Charlie doesn't have many friends, he had one good friend named Tyler. He was Charlie’s
neighbour and was with him right from his
childhood. He was always with him in every adventure of his life. But he wasn't anticipating to be with him in the upcoming one even though they didn't know about that.
Time went as unhurriedly as every common day in the school, soon came his favourite period Science,
And the topic was about time. There arrived the question if an individual can see the past. He forthwith stood up and reacted that if someone notices the stars at night, they are glimpsing years past the present time as the light from the stars take years to reach us. The whole class gazed him as if he was an alien. Even the teacher stood there stunned. But that only added to his dream of exploring the macrocosm
His thoughtful psyche was filled with curiosity, which he can't even get the answers from his school. He asked Tyler about his doubts but he stood there with his face as he doesn't even know a thing. His wonder about the outer space was confusing his mind.
They got out of their school bus and was slowly strolling back towards their respective homes. He began to open the door but it was sealed he unzipped his bag and grabbed the key he had in his possession and opened the door. He took a bottle of orange juice out from the fridge and took a gulp of it to overcome his thirst. He was very weary from the day at school. He immediately climbed to his room and fell down on his couch without even changing his dress.
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That day he didn't eat anything except breakfast. He kept lying on his bed and thought about every element of the dream. He was sure that he had seen that exact visual somewhere else but he doesn't remember them. "I am going through a deja vu" he inquired himself. He got exhausted after a while and fell into sleep
No….. "Where I am going?"…..(light flashes)..."So this is a black hole ". "If this is what I think this is then why am I not dead"…..He arose jumping out of bed. That dream occurred to him again. But it had begun to frighten him. The same thing he adored a day back, now he was terrified by it
What is this dream of mine?…
Is it real?……
He asked himself. What he didn't know was that he was going to get his answers soon enough
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This is just the sample of the first chapter
I need to expand the story to a 10-15 page first chapter
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No….. "Where I am going?"…..(light flashes)..."So this is a black hole ". "If this is what I think this is then why am I not dead"…..He arose jumping out of bed. That dream occurred to him again. But it had begun to frighten him. The same thing he adored a day back, now he was terrified by it
What is this dream of mine?…
Is it real?……
He asked himself. What he didn't know was that he was going to get his answers soon enough
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This is just the sample of the first chapter
I need to expand the story to a 10-15 page first chapter
#novel
#review
#everyone
#kr
I rushed down stairs. The wild energy around her was affecting me.
Not only affecting me but turning me into the perfect dumbass.
So I thought its good idea if I catch up with my buddy before a vapourising.
Reaching on the last step, I looked up at the direction of my room.
One second... What she is doing in my room? Rubbing the temple of my head, I dismiss all the cascading thoughts and marched towards the kitchen.
"Oww, Holy hell" One second I was marching with my head held high and now I was embracing the pavement.
Wow just great. I haven't been this lucky in my whole life.
And suddenly I was showered with the God's grace.
And I don't think I like it.
"Sir...what are you doing on the floor" A very confused Lola, inquired with the bucket that she just emptied on me
"I'm kissing the floor, Lola" I replied politely, well my system is shaken now, especially the one which is responsible for my emotions and feelings.
"How did you fell ?" Vivek asked in very concerned voice, rushing to me.
"No Vivek sir he is not fallen, he is just kissing the floor" Lola beamed from somewhere and I didn't even had energy to facepalm.
" And why you are wet?" He inquired
" Ohh wow he talks " My lips formed in knowing smile, well it's more like a grin.
Actually I was just taunting him.
for turning my life upside down. A if it wasn't already.
"Yeah sir he talks very much and politely" She beamed again from somewhere and I couldn't do anything more than sighing
"Why you are wet? " Vivek asked again ignoring Lola.
He is really good in ignoring people.
"It's God's grace in liquid form" I murmured, sinking my body in floor.
"No sir I just dropped water on him that I was using for cleaning" Stupid woman chirped again, it's better if she murders herself because I will do it brutally and she won't like it, I don't even need to say how ruthless I'm, That idiot doesn't know when to use her mouth and mind, but I'm not even sure if she has mind.
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Not only affecting me but turning me into the perfect dumbass.
So I thought its good idea if I catch up with my buddy before a vapourising.
Reaching on the last step, I looked up at the direction of my room.
One second... What she is doing in my room? Rubbing the temple of my head, I dismiss all the cascading thoughts and marched towards the kitchen.
"Oww, Holy hell" One second I was marching with my head held high and now I was embracing the pavement.
Wow just great. I haven't been this lucky in my whole life.
And suddenly I was showered with the God's grace.
And I don't think I like it.
"Sir...what are you doing on the floor" A very confused Lola, inquired with the bucket that she just emptied on me
"I'm kissing the floor, Lola" I replied politely, well my system is shaken now, especially the one which is responsible for my emotions and feelings.
"How did you fell ?" Vivek asked in very concerned voice, rushing to me.
"No Vivek sir he is not fallen, he is just kissing the floor" Lola beamed from somewhere and I didn't even had energy to facepalm.
" And why you are wet?" He inquired
" Ohh wow he talks " My lips formed in knowing smile, well it's more like a grin.
Actually I was just taunting him.
for turning my life upside down. A if it wasn't already.
"Yeah sir he talks very much and politely" She beamed again from somewhere and I couldn't do anything more than sighing
"Why you are wet? " Vivek asked again ignoring Lola.
He is really good in ignoring people.
"It's God's grace in liquid form" I murmured, sinking my body in floor.
"No sir I just dropped water on him that I was using for cleaning" Stupid woman chirped again, it's better if she murders herself because I will do it brutally and she won't like it, I don't even need to say how ruthless I'm, That idiot doesn't know when to use her mouth and mind, but I'm not even sure if she has mind.
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Nam Goongmin has long lost his child. It was mandatory; was never his choice. Things escalated so quickly, in matters of seconds his life turned upside down, four seasons all at once. The laughter, the exuberance, the elation, the melancholy, the sorrow, the anguish, the angst, and the anger. Feeling the fiery heat of an enkindled inner flame, even death will never be able to extinguish, is his new feeling; he can no longer get rid of. Miscarriage of justice and conviction of crimes he never committed weren't enough to ruin his life, they took it further, killing his mother and burning her alive. Fire can be fatal and so are knives, whereby his wife was killed. It didn't end there tho, entering a room but finding an empty crib was last anticipated thing; newborn baby, Jaemin, now is gone.
It was then the end of Nam Goongmin. But the beginning of *Războinic* or *Răzbunător* maybe both, after all they are the same person but different peraonas. It was the end of his well scripted tragedy; his excruciatingly painful experience, however vowing in silent is no longer fervour to avenge the murders. With outrage and disbelief combined it was the birth of a serial killer.
Na Jaemin is back as a detective, with first given case, was exposing the true identity of the mysterious killer. Will our young boy then be an exemplary detective, by helping solve a violent crime spree? Or will he fail his first given case, by being an exemplary son?
*NB* This part is reserved only to give readers a great insight on how the story will unfold. It's a plot summary, that's why it's kept short, brief and murky.
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It was then the end of Nam Goongmin. But the beginning of *Războinic* or *Răzbunător* maybe both, after all they are the same person but different peraonas. It was the end of his well scripted tragedy; his excruciatingly painful experience, however vowing in silent is no longer fervour to avenge the murders. With outrage and disbelief combined it was the birth of a serial killer.
Na Jaemin is back as a detective, with first given case, was exposing the true identity of the mysterious killer. Will our young boy then be an exemplary detective, by helping solve a violent crime spree? Or will he fail his first given case, by being an exemplary son?
*NB* This part is reserved only to give readers a great insight on how the story will unfold. It's a plot summary, that's why it's kept short, brief and murky.
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Chapter 1:The cuckoo's nest
The irksome sound coming from someone's radio ,
"it must be morning " i muttered , tho i dont usually wake up this early on a holiday like this ,
so i tried to cover myself in the warmth of blanket but not enough to insulate that annoying noise and so i gave up on my dream.
The sun was dim today quite unusual day for a summer . A strong pingent smell caught my glemse ,
after using my brain and nose i was able to find the cordinates of its origin.
"Its coming from my balcony "i shouted , I jumped out of my blanket and opened the balcony ,
There was a dead cuckoo lying on the floor , might have fallen from its nest .
I usually come to see this cuckoo been feed by a small Canary , that was a quite appealing view to watch or rather entertaining.
The decaying body of cuckoo was alluring alot of bugs and ants, "Someone will live on someone's death" i said on a quavering voice ,
My neighbour was also in his balcony watching that cuckoo's , his balcony was just 1 feet away from mine .
Unlike me his balcony was been decorated with lot of flowers , pot were hanging on the side of his wall.
A green fluffy carpet all over his wall, giving more athestic look to his balcony ,
on the other hand my balcony have alot of poops of the birds which i never bothered to clean ,
a rusty chair which got its rust by weting in the rain , some clothes hanging here and there ,
being just 1 feet away and paying the same rent there was a lot of difference in our balconies , or rather alot of difference in our personality .
He usually come to water his plants tho we never talked before.
After spending few more minutes in balcony gloring the blueness of sky ,
I went back to my room , my stomach was starving by the time ,
I quickly went to check on my fridge for something to eat , even my bad luck is unlucky ,it just contains some rotten yogurts , broken beer bottles , a pouch of sous which is expired , a frozen
fish . I went to my kitchen and found that i was out of instant noodles too.
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The irksome sound coming from someone's radio ,
"it must be morning " i muttered , tho i dont usually wake up this early on a holiday like this ,
so i tried to cover myself in the warmth of blanket but not enough to insulate that annoying noise and so i gave up on my dream.
The sun was dim today quite unusual day for a summer . A strong pingent smell caught my glemse ,
after using my brain and nose i was able to find the cordinates of its origin.
"Its coming from my balcony "i shouted , I jumped out of my blanket and opened the balcony ,
There was a dead cuckoo lying on the floor , might have fallen from its nest .
I usually come to see this cuckoo been feed by a small Canary , that was a quite appealing view to watch or rather entertaining.
The decaying body of cuckoo was alluring alot of bugs and ants, "Someone will live on someone's death" i said on a quavering voice ,
My neighbour was also in his balcony watching that cuckoo's , his balcony was just 1 feet away from mine .
Unlike me his balcony was been decorated with lot of flowers , pot were hanging on the side of his wall.
A green fluffy carpet all over his wall, giving more athestic look to his balcony ,
on the other hand my balcony have alot of poops of the birds which i never bothered to clean ,
a rusty chair which got its rust by weting in the rain , some clothes hanging here and there ,
being just 1 feet away and paying the same rent there was a lot of difference in our balconies , or rather alot of difference in our personality .
He usually come to water his plants tho we never talked before.
After spending few more minutes in balcony gloring the blueness of sky ,
I went back to my room , my stomach was starving by the time ,
I quickly went to check on my fridge for something to eat , even my bad luck is unlucky ,it just contains some rotten yogurts , broken beer bottles , a pouch of sous which is expired , a frozen
fish . I went to my kitchen and found that i was out of instant noodles too.
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I rushed down stairs. The wild energy around her was affecting me.
Not only affecting me but turning me into the perfect dumbass.
So I thought its good idea if I catch up with my buddy before a vapourising.
Reaching on the last step, I looked up at the direction of my room.
One second... What she is doing in my room? Rubbing the temple of my head, I dismiss all the cascading thoughts and marched towards the kitchen.
"Oww, Holy hell" One second I was marching with my head held high and now I was embracing the pavement.
Wow just great. I haven't been this lucky in my whole life.
And suddenly I was showered with the God's grace.
And I don't think I like it.
"Sir...what are you doing on the floor" A very confused Lola, inquired with the bucket that she just emptied on me
"I'm kissing the floor, Lola" I replied politely, well my system is shaken now, especially the one which is responsible for my emotions and feelings.
"How did you fell ?" Vivek asked in very concerned voice, rushing to me.
"No Vivek sir he is not fallen, he is just kissing the floor" Lola beamed from somewhere and I didn't even had energy to facepalm.
" And why you are wet?" He inquired
" Ohh wow he talks " My lips formed in knowing smile, well it's more like a grin.
Actually I was just taunting him.
for turning my life upside down. A if it wasn't already.
"Yeah sir he talks very much and politely" She beamed again from somewhere and I couldn't do anything more than sighing
"Why you are wet? " Vivek asked again ignoring Lola.
He is really good in ignoring people.
"It's God's grace in liquid form" I murmured, sinking my body in floor.
"No sir I just dropped water on him that I was using for cleaning" Stupid woman chirped again, it's better if she murders herself because I will do it brutally and she won't like it, I don't even need to say how ruthless I'm, That idiot doesn't know when to use her mouth and mind, but I'm not even sure if she has mind.
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Not only affecting me but turning me into the perfect dumbass.
So I thought its good idea if I catch up with my buddy before a vapourising.
Reaching on the last step, I looked up at the direction of my room.
One second... What she is doing in my room? Rubbing the temple of my head, I dismiss all the cascading thoughts and marched towards the kitchen.
"Oww, Holy hell" One second I was marching with my head held high and now I was embracing the pavement.
Wow just great. I haven't been this lucky in my whole life.
And suddenly I was showered with the God's grace.
And I don't think I like it.
"Sir...what are you doing on the floor" A very confused Lola, inquired with the bucket that she just emptied on me
"I'm kissing the floor, Lola" I replied politely, well my system is shaken now, especially the one which is responsible for my emotions and feelings.
"How did you fell ?" Vivek asked in very concerned voice, rushing to me.
"No Vivek sir he is not fallen, he is just kissing the floor" Lola beamed from somewhere and I didn't even had energy to facepalm.
" And why you are wet?" He inquired
" Ohh wow he talks " My lips formed in knowing smile, well it's more like a grin.
Actually I was just taunting him.
for turning my life upside down. A if it wasn't already.
"Yeah sir he talks very much and politely" She beamed again from somewhere and I couldn't do anything more than sighing
"Why you are wet? " Vivek asked again ignoring Lola.
He is really good in ignoring people.
"It's God's grace in liquid form" I murmured, sinking my body in floor.
"No sir I just dropped water on him that I was using for cleaning" Stupid woman chirped again, it's better if she murders herself because I will do it brutally and she won't like it, I don't even need to say how ruthless I'm, That idiot doesn't know when to use her mouth and mind, but I'm not even sure if she has mind.
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