"I am fine.."
Living miles away,
You assure the loved.

"I am fine.."
Driving across the highway,
You expect the death.

"I am fine.."
Walking past the gateway,
You assure the scared.

"I am fine.."
Keeping tap on the prey,
You extend the death.

"I am fine.."
Agonising tears pave way,
You assure the kindred.

"I am fine.."
Working across the subway,
You question the death.

"I am fine.."
Operating on the decay,
You assure the worried.

"I am fine.."
Fighting for the slayed,
You dispose the death.

"I am fine.."
Holding onto life midway,
You assure the vexed.

"I am fine.."
Watching misery all day,
You embrace the death.


We all say we are fine. But are we? Or it's just that those feelings are submerged deep within to even embrace it. This poem is about the life circumstances where feelings of anxiety, fear, agony or low self-confidence take over our mind. It lets us hold on to those deep thoughts in a cob web of deep memories.

I am fine
By #suan
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Hello world,
I know it's hard to deal with life during this lockdown but for a moment sit back and think about the people in Kashmir, Syria, Afghanistan. Think about the Uighur Muslims,kashmiri youth( which is being killed for no reason but just for the quote unquote national security).
Where's UN? And other Muslims out there posting food meanwhile the Muslims of Kashmir, Afghanistan, China and elsewhere are swinging between life and death EVERYDAY!
I don't care if it doesn't sound neutral to all of you but just keep your self in their shoes. But. But.
That's impossible to do. No one can imagine what they are suffering and going through.
There has not been 4g restored in Kashmir. And the communication is restored in specific areas of Kashmir only. Communication and internet is snapped in the valley since 5 August 2019.
During this auspicious month of Ramadan, there in Afghanistan during the time of iftar they are being bombed. People of Afghanistan have no surety whether they will be alive the next moment or not. The mosques are being bombed and a handful of people die everyday, innocent!
China harvests organs of Uighur Muslims for treating patients of Corona virus.
Is this what's prevailing through the globe?
Is this what's called peace?
It brings tears to my eyes!
Feels no more than like a sad movie that's about to end, but it is REALITY! This is what's happening around the world and we are being deprived of what's happening around with our people. Where is the loophole? In our journalism, people, governance, or what?
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If there anything that may have hurt your feelings, I am not sorry!
I think you all need to know this.
May peace be with you.

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For everything,
for every part,

for everyone,
for every heart,

For the close
And the miles apart,

For the worlds inside me,
From the early start.


I have got so far, I'll keep on making art.

Author's note: the last bit feels a little off right? Any suggestions?

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Two friends on the tour
Getting absolutely bored
Found a man by the side of road
wanted to help, thought was a chore

Helped him to his home
In return wanted no more
but for him to be safe
but they were a bad case

The man gave them a ring
He had his arm in a sling
One of the friends cringed
The prospect seemed to stink

They left his home; it was already late
The night was falling fast for date
A horrendous cry filled up with grate
The friends were brave they turned to face

A cold breeze blew and swept them away
Their feet froze seeing the shadows grey
One of them cried what the hell, let's pray!
But the other one knew it's only dismay

One of them knew what it was about
He had heard stories, so he chanted loud
Take me away and leave him behind
I pray to the grisly soul of thine

Are you out of your mind to say that loud
If you are going to hell then I'm too hell bound
the other one said looking around
and he too repeated the prayer loud

You don't understand you fool I knew
I was cursed and for this i grew
I should have warned you my life was askew
I can't loose you, you are one of few

So can't I said the other
You are my best freind, my brother
I don't know but I'd know later rather
But let's run now we are being smothered

Through the twisted figure emerged a man
They saw him before but now he looked insane
Two friends ready to give up their lives
What a sweet story to come by

I was just testing you back then
when you helped me home the minute gone
Is your friendship weak or strong
I found it flows quite deep in your veins

I've needed a man to fulfill my ritual
A man i could slay in the brutal
and will live for over an eternity
once again this time alacrity

He raised his hand and asked
choose among you, who will pass
one will have to choose to die
the other one will leave here alive

The friends looked at each other with fright
chiming in at the same time
Either both or none will die
Who do you think you are, grumpy pie

One of the friends knew it was his fate to die
He was born for that he can't deny
His destiny was this since the first cry
that he would be gone to a evil so sly

But the other one had stepped up high
We are both going together, don't cry
and they charged on the twisted man with might
the man cast a spell that threw them behind

they both died their souls rose
white and glorious they came close
Fulfilling the prophecy for they were chose
to end the evil that lurks in close

Has taken billions of life of people
Of friends who were fake and cripple
But one day true friendship was supposed to end
His terror, his life and his reign

And hence the friends saved everyone's life
He made a mistake he can't deny
He tried to part truest of friends
But friendship is a feeling that will remain

In the tombstone it was engraved
the two friends died together and brave
And in the heaven they are together to rave
Friendship is path only made for brave

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It was almost 12 and I woke up listening to the creaking sound of the wooden chair going to-and-fro and to my surprise she was sitting on it with her eyes still closed. I freaked out at once but then somehow gathered the courage and got out of the bed, went to her and as soon as I placed my hand on her frozen cold hand her eyes opened, red as blood and she jumped on me with her mouth wide open. As she grasped my neck with her teeth the lamp on the table fell and bang!!, I woke up with my blood running cold and me cursing the day I let her stay for the night which turned into a never ending one.
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Vignette


It’s half past midnight
Blinds shut, crickets chirp, no ray of any light
Darkness is imprisoning me,
Cool breeze caressing my face,
Although a little too cold and a little too biting for my taste

And I realize as I start slipping into the oblivion
The darkness is absorbing me,
I have become subliminal

I am not alone in this hell-hole of a place,
My mind is getting the hold of me
And I’m tied tight like a shoelace
I scream, but I stop dead
Oh dear, don’t you remember what the doctor said?

It’s all in my head,
That’s what he said
But then why does this feel so real
This mind and soul consumption?
I can’t remember what it read on my prescription

My brain is scattered,
I feel as lost Alice,
And as crazy as the Mad Hatter.

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LIFE IS JOY
DONT ASK WHY
LIHE IS WOW
DONT ASK HOW
LIFE IS PLAY
DONT STUCK IN ONE WAY
LIFE IS BLOCKBLUSTER FILM
DONT BE CRITICS AND SPOIL FILM

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The one whom I dream off,
The one for whom I fight with myself,
Although I know he can never be mine,
Then also I always remember him in all my prayers..
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The monster

A Monster caught me,
He is dark, prickly and wild,
The Monster is love.

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It's tale from some of my previous life
A Portal unlatched, he entered before my sight

A body covered in blood and face in pain
He tried to stood up and his hard work was in vain

Aristocratic he seems but life is never fair
I wanted no trouble but couldn't leave him there

I felt like, he is here to steal my dreams
Smiling and crossing some different realms

He teases, laughs and then he shouts
Irritated I was and my mind in doubts

Before him, My life was never been so alive
Now my Days are glorious and charmer the nights

Amusing days took no long to flew
suddenly he was gone, nowhere to be seen

Confused I was, what's wrong with rights
Again, Days were boring and colder the nights

I found myself next to that door
Hoping someday again that portal will roar

Tears were sliding and bleeding internally
Sitting in cold, waited for eternity

Still no sight, I cried little more
That stupid portal never roared

Wiped those tears, I was determined
I placed my foot on that dangling threshold that shine

A sharp pain raised inside my heart
It took my heart beats and threw me apart

A cracked, I heard inside my chest
It was time for me, for eternal rest

I was about to close my eyes
The light erupted and he smiles

Darkness flew and night gleamed
And I still feel like..
He was here to steal my dreams


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Lost in her thoughts I saw a girl,
With a bright smile & hairs with curl.
Biting on her nails god knows the reason why?
Logic of the genius with twist of a fey.
Knowing everything yet staying on the ground,
Felt innocence in her eyes and care in her sound.
Determination is in her blood, as far as you could see.
You can try to chase her but it's not possible for thee.
You can try to compete her but you'll never ever win!
Blessed with a beautiful heart and soul she'll always make you keen.
Understand a fact that she's always there to help,
To make you do the right things sometimes she may yelp!
But there's nothing but concern in her voice,
You'd wish to be like her if you had a choice.
When she is around laughter is inevitable,
If you get her keep her close cause she is unforgettable.

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A girl jolly is cycling with fast speed, so fast that if the broker brings the bark, it falls straight down and shuts fast, all move away

The same way, a car is coming from the other side with a fast speed, which a boy (Mike) is driving, music is playing in his car in a fast manner, he is driving the car calmly.

As he turns his car to the other side, his car collides with Jolly's bicycle. And the jolly falls away Only then does the crowd gather

Jolly does not get hurt much, he gets up early, so Mike gets out of his car and sees that there is no damage to his car.

Shouting jolly You broke my cycle, how will I reach college now Oh no, all the pages of my report are shattered, what will I do to answer my teacher?

Hey wow mistake you have not seen such a big car
Wow what's up Look, look at these comedies They are saying the mistake is ours while they were driving the car

See you don't know who you're talking to
Yes, I know, from a person who did not see a bicycle and broke my bicycle

Look Enough of you, get my cycle fixed
I am
Yes, you Look, you are voicing more (Mike) If you did not fix my cycle ??
So, what will you do ??
Me, then she picks up a stone in her hand and kills it in her car, which breaks the glass in front of the car.
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#rosy
This is my first story. this is not complete yet. I hope you all are enjoying this and give suggestion to improve my story

A life unwritten (a fictional story)





One rare day,
Lost in her thoughts I saw a girl,
With a bright smile & hairs with curl.
Biting on her nails God knows the reason?
“Been in love?” I asked
“Yes” she replied hastily.
“With how many people?” i asked with an interrogatory tone.
“I don’t remember really. I can count if you ask. But there will be someone missing in the list. I have fallen in love with people on train, bookshop, cafeteria and beach....
Huh heavy breath escaped throught my lungs. "Its fine I replied with a fake smile"

Oh am sorry,I forgot my manners, stretched out my hand..... I am similoluwa, I stay very close to the government resident, a rock hight sight away from here, its my seventh mouths in this city and honestly I haven't found any gorgeous lady around since I got here, I was just about to come into conclusion "Non never ever exist here" till I came out on a drive and meet you: (giggle) She shook back, saying I am "No one" and I don't disclose my identity to strangers. I stood dumbfounded, struggling to find words,her beauty won't let speak, I raved about her (glowing skin, dimple, gap teeth, dark eye, hairy skin) beauty. Then she left in her Range Rover (L405) 2019 model


Insulted and humiliated, I felt my tears threatening to spill over. I turned back and fled.
Upon returning home, with the insult fresh on my mind, I told myself, ‘I must make it in life too.’.


However, a few days later, it occurred to me that the lady was probably upset about something else and that maybe I had simply chosen the wrong time and date that day January 7, 2020. So for couple of weeks I have been visiting that same street with no doubtful mind "we will meet again". But till date I have never seen this lady shadow not to lady talk of her whole self.
I felt like i was in a Nollywood movie and was enchanted by the unexplained mystery of life. A few kind words and encouragement to myself; if I'd never met her, or perhaps I did not have a word with her or perhaps I never shook hands with her or perhaps the way I dressed ...... Many unanswered perhaps; It was a life unwritten experience for me



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(The End)



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Looking at the violet sky
Where there is nothing to shine

My moon is been missing for days
And My world is now buried in lies

I don't want to be so hopeless
But something is clutching on me like vice

It's been hard and going to be forever
I can neither say and nor can hide

No matter how dark it's around me
Since my world shines in my eyes

Look at the shimmering sky
I guess my moon is back in my life


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Don't know why, but all time I feel like smiling,
Singing a new song with each day passing,
There's something special in your capers,
Thats why like everyone, for you I too have fallen...
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A World Apart
Chapter 6 and 7

Within few days my world starts revolving around her. I couldn't get her out of my mind, my affection for her only increase, her wavy hair, her beautiful black eyes, her nose, her lips, her everything; her sight made it hard for me to breath, my heart raced, I felt like it might as well burst out of my chest.

I urged her to leave though every single day because it's dangerous here. In our world people battle with each other almost to death to become powerful and she's a non magi, if someone finds her she'll be in jeopardy.

Also, she would be seen as a trespasser if someone in my world found her out and besides she should go back to her friends and family, they must be waiting for her too. Despite of what she had told me about her life, I refuse to believe that no one love this beautiful and kind soul except me, that is impossible.

But Sinzo kept warning us both, he threw himself into the effort of knowing about why humans are not allowed and why should she leave.
I did that too, I cared for her more than anyone I have ever cared for and so I wanted to make sure she was safe. After 15 days we finally admit our love to each other as she plants a deep kiss on my lips, making me weak and strong both at once.

"I won't leave you." She said with determination

"I would love and care for you so much that you would start loving yourself" I reply and then she hugs me tightly, I wanted the time to stop right then and there, for us to forever live in that very moment when we kissed, but as they say, good moments don't last all that long.

She was my lucky charm, after she came into my life suddenly everything changed.

Before I met her I couldn't even light a candle with my magic. I was always mocked for not being able to connect and find my power.

Ofcourse, it's in our blood yet somehow for me it never worked. I always pretended that it really doesn't matter but deep inside I knew I was a failure. I had only a few years left with me, if I failed to find my powers in that time I would have been deported to human world. And to be honest I never thought I'd be able to make it happen.

But after she came into my life suddenly I became a level 10 magi. The level 10 magi are better than average magi and can perform a lot of spells and rituals that are out of bounds for average magi.

It was going well for both of us unless she started looking sick. We tried everything but by passing of each day she only looked pale and weak; even our magic couldn't fix her.

My heart sank everytime I saw her, that's before one day she ran away, I ran behind her but then she disappeared forever.

I hope she is healthy and happy but I do want to know what happened with her. Why did she run away like that. If she wanted to go back I was always ready to help, then why?

Author's Note:- I'm giving a double update to story because I felt that a single chapter would be of no consequence.

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The light of the moon
Want to see you soon
Whenever I throw a stone in the river
It gives me the best pleasure,

You gave me consolation
When I cry
I still wait here
Why you don't say hi,

You scold me
Why are you in fright
No need for awe
I have the best moonlight,

You have the best intended
You gave me light
I see the star
They are very bright,

I'm not dumb
I have a mind
You always come
With pleasure wind,

You are very stout
How can I feel apathy
You are gone
Can I ask you why,

My mind is fully off
So I say good night
I want to meet again
You came again with the peaceful light.

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I'd always build courages
To confront you

Speak how I feel
Tell you things, everything;

I'av had varieties of mirrors display
Showing show to commence and adjoin

Did a lot of practice, only to tell you,
what's going on within me.

Loving you from the shadow
Isn't what I want anymore.

But whenever we meet
It's just a like reverie
I become dumbell,

I hope you will understand,
This piece, know it meant.

Every little wielded here
Are what I meant.


Simi poetry ✍️

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