I live in a world were the sun rules over all
Huum! Haa! rules over all
He'll give you his mark just right after you are born
Huum! Haa! right after you are born
His mark is like lava he'll send it deep down your gall
Huum! Haa! deep down your gall
I live in a world were the sun rules day and night
Huum! Haa! rules day and night
He'll take the moon's glory he won't even let it a smile
Huum! Haa! let it a smile
He scorched the trees and mountains with his too much light
Huum! Haa! his too much light
Grow tall to me and take more food, he told the trees
Huum! Haa! he told the trees
And to the mountains, he said come to me and I'll give you lava for free
Huum! Haa! lava for free.
#prompt #Tohr #poetry?
#Writing about the sun as though I hate it
#review
Huum! Haa! rules over all
He'll give you his mark just right after you are born
Huum! Haa! right after you are born
His mark is like lava he'll send it deep down your gall
Huum! Haa! deep down your gall
I live in a world were the sun rules day and night
Huum! Haa! rules day and night
He'll take the moon's glory he won't even let it a smile
Huum! Haa! let it a smile
He scorched the trees and mountains with his too much light
Huum! Haa! his too much light
Grow tall to me and take more food, he told the trees
Huum! Haa! he told the trees
And to the mountains, he said come to me and I'll give you lava for free
Huum! Haa! lava for free.
#prompt #Tohr #poetry?
#Writing about the sun as though I hate it
#review
The Breaking of a Bond
The moon is my witness, I loved you since that first night. Our young souls came together. It felt just right. Like any other young love, the periphescence was magical. The mystery of love was unraveling before our eyes.
I never thought love could feel this good. It was the best feeling ever felt. All the goodness of life felt in one moment. When we were together.
I had one wish. That it could go on forever. That the sun would rise to give it's warm glow to this bond. That it's radiance would give a breath of life and strengthen our love.
When facing the future, a man can only hope. And hope I did. But nothing could have prepared me for the darkness that followed.
Days came and went, but all my heart could see was black. My heart felt suffocated. Tired of giving and never getting. This love had turned into a nightmare.
A wounded heart will wander in search of peace. Look for light at the end of the tunnel. Long for the warmth of the sun. I could not take this any longer. Though painful to bear, this love had come to an end.
It was a long lonely night after we broke up. My heart danced in joy. It was free. It glowed in it's new lightness, the burden had been lifted. It had found the sun. Tears rolled down my cheeks freely. I did not care. It was dawn already. The sun would rise soon. I would look up to it and let it's warm hand dry my tears.
#Rocky #Review #prompt
Wrote a story, not a poem. Tell me what you think guys
The moon is my witness, I loved you since that first night. Our young souls came together. It felt just right. Like any other young love, the periphescence was magical. The mystery of love was unraveling before our eyes.
I never thought love could feel this good. It was the best feeling ever felt. All the goodness of life felt in one moment. When we were together.
I had one wish. That it could go on forever. That the sun would rise to give it's warm glow to this bond. That it's radiance would give a breath of life and strengthen our love.
When facing the future, a man can only hope. And hope I did. But nothing could have prepared me for the darkness that followed.
Days came and went, but all my heart could see was black. My heart felt suffocated. Tired of giving and never getting. This love had turned into a nightmare.
A wounded heart will wander in search of peace. Look for light at the end of the tunnel. Long for the warmth of the sun. I could not take this any longer. Though painful to bear, this love had come to an end.
It was a long lonely night after we broke up. My heart danced in joy. It was free. It glowed in it's new lightness, the burden had been lifted. It had found the sun. Tears rolled down my cheeks freely. I did not care. It was dawn already. The sun would rise soon. I would look up to it and let it's warm hand dry my tears.
#Rocky #Review #prompt
Wrote a story, not a poem. Tell me what you think guys