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/Freedom from free will

They say will is power
And power is far
If you call it out
They tell you
It's captured somewhere far
You ask
Where or how far?
They answer
That's why we call it free will
It's the one that drives your wheel
So, it's found everywhere.
They say.
You wonder to where it drives
But the one above all the ways
Tells you, it drives down the way
Down on the highway
But never it drives
Never it dares
To take you up on the hill
Could never rotate your wheel.
He tells you,
Only I can rotate your wheel
Freedom to your will.
#poetry #M-k #review
I am afraid to tell no to my freinds,
When they put a cigarette in my hands,
And forces me to smoke it,
Just because its the new trend.
I dont ask why,
when he forces me to bunk the classes,
Cause i am afraid,
i would not belong to the masses.
Freinds are important, that is what people says,
But how can a person strive in this toxic group for days,
I know i can refuse or make any excuse or just say them no,
But wouldnt people judge me, about me being so slow.


But is that truly what i am afraid of,


Because,when i start to think, my mind is blown,
That i m not afraid of losing my freinds,
But i am afraid to be left alone.

Lonliness is what drives me mad,
Being disconnected just makes me sad,
In the search of love and care,
What i got was just tears and despair.

You can make few sacrifices to level up for your freinds
But those sacrifices should not be the start to your end.

So alll my dear peers
When you come across such situations,
When you feel that fear,
Just close your eyes and tell your heart,
That you are afraid to lose yourself,
But you are always ready for an awesome start....

-M

#review
#peerpressure
#M
Part 1

Aarav a young teenager studying in high school, shy , slim, tall, shabby, ignorant, a guy with lots of pateince, and great critical thinking skills living in a modernising village. He always dreamt to become a detective like his father, but was left alone after his father abandoned him after his mother died and he resided with his grand parents in the village.
He had a habit to stroll on streets of the highway particularly at night , on a two sided road which would be deserted and dark except from the lights sparkling from the hotels advertising board.
Aarav walked at night all alone on the other side ogf the road, looking at the beauty of clean and clear sky the shining stars and thinking about his lonliness. On the other side of the road was a accommodation hotel, the only one in the village. The Nocount station was 35 km away from the village, the only way to get in the village as it was covered and protected by the big mountains on the three sides of the road.
Aarav walking on the deserted road was lost in the silence of the moment. And suddenly he was suprised by the sudden thud noise and the shout of a man. As he looked towards the other side, he saw the car halt and the driver come out to check the man who was covered in a pool of blood. He rushed towards the other side of the road. The victim had no pulse. He was dead. The victim was lying in the middle of the road, head on the other side of the street. He was wearing a wet open raincoat and a shirt which had ink on it. His luggage on the same side of the road. And nearby a broken watch fallen on ground which had the muddy footprints of the victims. The accident gathered commotion. As it was late night only few people were on site during the accident. Those were the driver of the car, a bartender Sleik, and two people (Alex and Roger) who came out of the hotel nearby, 3 passerbys (Newt, Aarav, Kimball) including Aarav. The driver of the car Patrick was in blaser and looked very disturbed by the accident. The bartender was in his uniform with a wine glass in his hand. Newt was in a black coloured cloak, a hat with a breifcase sneezing and coughing in his bruised coloured hands. Alex and Roger were in their hotel uniform, Kimball was in formal clothes with a laptop bag around his shoulders and bandage around his hand. Aarav was standing all alone, thinking deeply about the accident. The police reached and by no time they concluded it as a suicide. Even the bypassers claimed it as a suicide. The police began to record statement hurrily and concluded the case.
One of the policeman said, " This is a suicide case. The driver was driving straight to the middle of the road and was not overspeeding and the victim (Sam Bellatrix) walked in front of the car and then bam. He fell down rolled on the street. His watch fell out of his hand and broke." And they went on to conclude the case. And just then aarav shouted
" Got it. Its not an accident sir neither a suicide it is a murder."

- M

#review #M #mystery
Part 2


And the policeman asked," And boy, how can you be so sure? "
Aarav replied, " Let me break the plot to you sir. You see the road was completely empty with just 3 of us and the victim walking on it. The accident took place in the middle of the road and the victim now dead, is lying facing other side of the road and straight to the pathway. And if you look at the wet raincoat he is wearing sir (as there was no rain on the site) and with the extra luggage he was carrying, i suppose he came from the nearby station boarded a cab and when he reached here he just got off a cab and would proceed in the hotel. Do you get it sir? "

The officer exclaimed, " i dont have the tiniest bit of clue of what you are speaking."

-M

#review #mystery #M
Part 3

The lies around the truth.


Aarav said calmly, " If i were heading to the hotel which is on the same side of the road, then why would i walk to the middle of the road. And even if i had to cross the road why would i leave my luggage on the side. And if one had to commit suicide then he would not walk backwards which you can tell by looking at his shoe (bulged on the hotel side and tapered on the other side) filled with mud on the road. So somebody pushed him as he was just heading inside the hotel. He was murdered. And the killer is also certain. It was you (pointing towards Newt in big cloak and the hat with a breifcase)."
The policeman asked," How come you are so sure?
Do you have any evidence to prove your claim?."

Aarav replied " yes i do. Now a sit is proved that the victim was murdered, then the killer would be among us. The bartender Sleik, had a glass in his had so he could not have pushed him. Alex and Roger were inside the hotel and came out only after the accident. Kimball cant do it as his hand is hurt which is not a prop cause i didnt see a movement in those hands since i arrived. So the only left were you and me. So to prove my innocence you must be guilty. So Firstly, You said your name is Newt Jane. But the breifcase you are carrying has the initials SB. Which is not your name is It?. It is of the victims. Secondly the broken watch lying on the side of the road. If you look at the victims hand there is no mark or change in shade of wearing a watch on any hand. But you do have a mark and change in shade in your left hand. So when you were pushing the victim the watch fell from your hand on the side of the road and due to sudden rip you had the cuts on your hand. It was your watch, not of the victims. Thirdly, you are having a cold andyou donot have a handkerchief. Lokking how neat and well dressed you are, you wouldnt be that careless if you were sick from home itself which Means you got cold when you got caught in the rain following the victim from the station. Plus the ink which is on the shirt of the victims is on your fingers too. You waited to see your art to be called a suicide and pretended to be a passerby but unfortunately now you have nowhere to go."
Newt started running. The police got hold of the breifcase and rest of the evidence they had. They also found the train ticket from which it was confirmed that he was following the victim. They thanked Aarav. And aarav walked towards his hope, lost in the best moment of his life. Doing what he truly wanted. He just was living in the moment. He look back in the clear sky.
Tears were rolling through his cheeks. He said to himself ," Are you proud of me father? "

-M


#review #mystery #M
It was stormy, dark night , the earth coming in between the moon and the sun, casting a shadow on the moon. There was Tom, the family's most dear pet wagging his tail standing at the door completely drenched in water. Noone dared to call him a dog. They always assumed he was one of them. And Wayne always played with Tom, took him for a walk, talked with him, played with him. No one in the falmily was as close to wayne as Tom and vice versa. But after his dissapearance, he had locked himself in the room. He was shattered crying all day. He would come down only for basic needs and rest of the time he would be in his room crying. To the delight of the family, Tom had returned exactly a year later. Everyone's eyes were filled with tears and they greeted Tom so happily. ButTom's favourite companion didnt know about his return. Everyone shouted, " Wayne, look who is here." But there was no reply. They went upstairs but he was not there. They searched the entire house, no sign of Wayne. A family which was celebrating the return of Tom, were now worried for Watne. They ran towards the station, lodged a missing complaint, search the whole town, but no sign of Wayne. As the moon was losing his brightness under the shadow of earth, the family lost their everything with the unnatural disappearance of Wayne. Wayne's brother Mat went to the church to pray for his brother's return. He took Tom with himself. But Tom was so disturbed by the sight of church, that he was growling, went impatient and bite Mat and ran awqy. Mat, who didnt care about the wound went inside the church to pray. The Father Jade, saw the wound on Mat's hand. He was shocked stricken as if he had seen a ghost, a demon.
" It is the bite of a demon. It is the bite of a demon." He shouted. Matt didnt know what he was saying. He explained the priest everything. Father went to his house and as Mat opened the door, Tom came rushing over the priest trying to rip his neck apart from his body. But father was prepared. He held the cross from his pocket on Toms head and Matt punched Tom aside. Matt could see the demon inside Toms eyes. Tom fell on the ground and went unconcious. Father held Matt by his hands and told him, " This coming tuesday at exactly 23:26 P.M is the solar cycle, when all the planets are aligned after 33 years. That day Tom will sacrifice his most dear to please the God of Demon. And you have to stop him. Close him in the house. There should be no one in the house. We have to stop him.No matter what."
On the coming tuesday, Matt and his family members locked Tom inside the room. Father Jade made a sacred circle around the house. Matt was standing outside the room and didnt realise he has to move out. But Tom had no choice. He was gaining enourmous power which led to the breaking of the door. He attacked Matt, injured him badly and went for the main door. But the father didnt lose hope. Matt went upstairs crawling and jumped from the window. With all the family praying and father bearing enormous pain and feeling the demonic powers, and Matt being so badly injured the time 23:26 passed away. The family sighed in relief. There was no more beatings on the door. All the noise had subsided. The door opened and there was Tom and Wayne playing with each other as if nothing has happened.
The family took Matt to the hospital. He was all ok. The father Jade began to leave. The family thanked the father for being with them and returning their beloved son. The father while leaving spoke the following words,
" No matter how faithful you are, there is always a demon insode you."
Matt saw those demonic eyes of father jade. It was the same as that of Tom's.

#wca #wcss #review #M
There is a difference in what is said and what is done,
But whatever that is seriously done, is praised by none.

People always try to find some flaw in your actions,
And there you are eagerly waiting for their reactions.

Then they are trying to insult you for your deed,
And that is what exactly makes your heart bleed.

And then you are forced to find a flaw in your act,
Which inturn forces you to change the irreversible fact.

You try to distant yourself, you try to go very far,
But you are unable to seperate from yourself cause that is what you are.

And then you realize how cruel this world has always been to you,
The greater and more scary part is that the creulity is not new.

And then you laugh and realize, how silly you have been,
But it turns out that this is the shorter version of the world that you have seen.

Then you are back to continue your work, without a second thought,
This time you are not affected by them, you ignore all the talks.

You now explore the bigger picture, the better part of this world,
But still you chose to be disconnected, cause you know
That this world is curled.

#M #review