Part 1
Aarav a young teenager studying in high school, shy , slim, tall, shabby, ignorant, a guy with lots of pateince, and great critical thinking skills living in a modernising village. He always dreamt to become a detective like his father, but was left alone after his father abandoned him after his mother died and he resided with his grand parents in the village.
He had a habit to stroll on streets of the highway particularly at night , on a two sided road which would be deserted and dark except from the lights sparkling from the hotels advertising board.
Aarav walked at night all alone on the other side ogf the road, looking at the beauty of clean and clear sky the shining stars and thinking about his lonliness. On the other side of the road was a accommodation hotel, the only one in the village. The Nocount station was 35 km away from the village, the only way to get in the village as it was covered and protected by the big mountains on the three sides of the road.
Aarav walking on the deserted road was lost in the silence of the moment. And suddenly he was suprised by the sudden thud noise and the shout of a man. As he looked towards the other side, he saw the car halt and the driver come out to check the man who was covered in a pool of blood. He rushed towards the other side of the road. The victim had no pulse. He was dead. The victim was lying in the middle of the road, head on the other side of the street. He was wearing a wet open raincoat and a shirt which had ink on it. His luggage on the same side of the road. And nearby a broken watch fallen on ground which had the muddy footprints of the victims. The accident gathered commotion. As it was late night only few people were on site during the accident. Those were the driver of the car, a bartender Sleik, and two people (Alex and Roger) who came out of the hotel nearby, 3 passerbys (Newt, Aarav, Kimball) including Aarav. The driver of the car Patrick was in blaser and looked very disturbed by the accident. The bartender was in his uniform with a wine glass in his hand. Newt was in a black coloured cloak, a hat with a breifcase sneezing and coughing in his bruised coloured hands. Alex and Roger were in their hotel uniform, Kimball was in formal clothes with a laptop bag around his shoulders and bandage around his hand. Aarav was standing all alone, thinking deeply about the accident. The police reached and by no time they concluded it as a suicide. Even the bypassers claimed it as a suicide. The police began to record statement hurrily and concluded the case.
One of the policeman said, " This is a suicide case. The driver was driving straight to the middle of the road and was not overspeeding and the victim (Sam Bellatrix) walked in front of the car and then bam. He fell down rolled on the street. His watch fell out of his hand and broke." And they went on to conclude the case. And just then aarav shouted
" Got it. Its not an accident sir neither a suicide it is a murder."
- M
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Aarav a young teenager studying in high school, shy , slim, tall, shabby, ignorant, a guy with lots of pateince, and great critical thinking skills living in a modernising village. He always dreamt to become a detective like his father, but was left alone after his father abandoned him after his mother died and he resided with his grand parents in the village.
He had a habit to stroll on streets of the highway particularly at night , on a two sided road which would be deserted and dark except from the lights sparkling from the hotels advertising board.
Aarav walked at night all alone on the other side ogf the road, looking at the beauty of clean and clear sky the shining stars and thinking about his lonliness. On the other side of the road was a accommodation hotel, the only one in the village. The Nocount station was 35 km away from the village, the only way to get in the village as it was covered and protected by the big mountains on the three sides of the road.
Aarav walking on the deserted road was lost in the silence of the moment. And suddenly he was suprised by the sudden thud noise and the shout of a man. As he looked towards the other side, he saw the car halt and the driver come out to check the man who was covered in a pool of blood. He rushed towards the other side of the road. The victim had no pulse. He was dead. The victim was lying in the middle of the road, head on the other side of the street. He was wearing a wet open raincoat and a shirt which had ink on it. His luggage on the same side of the road. And nearby a broken watch fallen on ground which had the muddy footprints of the victims. The accident gathered commotion. As it was late night only few people were on site during the accident. Those were the driver of the car, a bartender Sleik, and two people (Alex and Roger) who came out of the hotel nearby, 3 passerbys (Newt, Aarav, Kimball) including Aarav. The driver of the car Patrick was in blaser and looked very disturbed by the accident. The bartender was in his uniform with a wine glass in his hand. Newt was in a black coloured cloak, a hat with a breifcase sneezing and coughing in his bruised coloured hands. Alex and Roger were in their hotel uniform, Kimball was in formal clothes with a laptop bag around his shoulders and bandage around his hand. Aarav was standing all alone, thinking deeply about the accident. The police reached and by no time they concluded it as a suicide. Even the bypassers claimed it as a suicide. The police began to record statement hurrily and concluded the case.
One of the policeman said, " This is a suicide case. The driver was driving straight to the middle of the road and was not overspeeding and the victim (Sam Bellatrix) walked in front of the car and then bam. He fell down rolled on the street. His watch fell out of his hand and broke." And they went on to conclude the case. And just then aarav shouted
" Got it. Its not an accident sir neither a suicide it is a murder."
- M
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Part 2
And the policeman asked," And boy, how can you be so sure? "
Aarav replied, " Let me break the plot to you sir. You see the road was completely empty with just 3 of us and the victim walking on it. The accident took place in the middle of the road and the victim now dead, is lying facing other side of the road and straight to the pathway. And if you look at the wet raincoat he is wearing sir (as there was no rain on the site) and with the extra luggage he was carrying, i suppose he came from the nearby station boarded a cab and when he reached here he just got off a cab and would proceed in the hotel. Do you get it sir? "
The officer exclaimed, " i dont have the tiniest bit of clue of what you are speaking."
-M
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And the policeman asked," And boy, how can you be so sure? "
Aarav replied, " Let me break the plot to you sir. You see the road was completely empty with just 3 of us and the victim walking on it. The accident took place in the middle of the road and the victim now dead, is lying facing other side of the road and straight to the pathway. And if you look at the wet raincoat he is wearing sir (as there was no rain on the site) and with the extra luggage he was carrying, i suppose he came from the nearby station boarded a cab and when he reached here he just got off a cab and would proceed in the hotel. Do you get it sir? "
The officer exclaimed, " i dont have the tiniest bit of clue of what you are speaking."
-M
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Part 3
The lies around the truth.
Aarav said calmly, " If i were heading to the hotel which is on the same side of the road, then why would i walk to the middle of the road. And even if i had to cross the road why would i leave my luggage on the side. And if one had to commit suicide then he would not walk backwards which you can tell by looking at his shoe (bulged on the hotel side and tapered on the other side) filled with mud on the road. So somebody pushed him as he was just heading inside the hotel. He was murdered. And the killer is also certain. It was you (pointing towards Newt in big cloak and the hat with a breifcase)."
The policeman asked," How come you are so sure?
Do you have any evidence to prove your claim?."
Aarav replied " yes i do. Now a sit is proved that the victim was murdered, then the killer would be among us. The bartender Sleik, had a glass in his had so he could not have pushed him. Alex and Roger were inside the hotel and came out only after the accident. Kimball cant do it as his hand is hurt which is not a prop cause i didnt see a movement in those hands since i arrived. So the only left were you and me. So to prove my innocence you must be guilty. So Firstly, You said your name is Newt Jane. But the breifcase you are carrying has the initials SB. Which is not your name is It?. It is of the victims. Secondly the broken watch lying on the side of the road. If you look at the victims hand there is no mark or change in shade of wearing a watch on any hand. But you do have a mark and change in shade in your left hand. So when you were pushing the victim the watch fell from your hand on the side of the road and due to sudden rip you had the cuts on your hand. It was your watch, not of the victims. Thirdly, you are having a cold andyou donot have a handkerchief. Lokking how neat and well dressed you are, you wouldnt be that careless if you were sick from home itself which Means you got cold when you got caught in the rain following the victim from the station. Plus the ink which is on the shirt of the victims is on your fingers too. You waited to see your art to be called a suicide and pretended to be a passerby but unfortunately now you have nowhere to go."
Newt started running. The police got hold of the breifcase and rest of the evidence they had. They also found the train ticket from which it was confirmed that he was following the victim. They thanked Aarav. And aarav walked towards his hope, lost in the best moment of his life. Doing what he truly wanted. He just was living in the moment. He look back in the clear sky.
Tears were rolling through his cheeks. He said to himself ," Are you proud of me father? "
-M
#review #mystery #M
The lies around the truth.
Aarav said calmly, " If i were heading to the hotel which is on the same side of the road, then why would i walk to the middle of the road. And even if i had to cross the road why would i leave my luggage on the side. And if one had to commit suicide then he would not walk backwards which you can tell by looking at his shoe (bulged on the hotel side and tapered on the other side) filled with mud on the road. So somebody pushed him as he was just heading inside the hotel. He was murdered. And the killer is also certain. It was you (pointing towards Newt in big cloak and the hat with a breifcase)."
The policeman asked," How come you are so sure?
Do you have any evidence to prove your claim?."
Aarav replied " yes i do. Now a sit is proved that the victim was murdered, then the killer would be among us. The bartender Sleik, had a glass in his had so he could not have pushed him. Alex and Roger were inside the hotel and came out only after the accident. Kimball cant do it as his hand is hurt which is not a prop cause i didnt see a movement in those hands since i arrived. So the only left were you and me. So to prove my innocence you must be guilty. So Firstly, You said your name is Newt Jane. But the breifcase you are carrying has the initials SB. Which is not your name is It?. It is of the victims. Secondly the broken watch lying on the side of the road. If you look at the victims hand there is no mark or change in shade of wearing a watch on any hand. But you do have a mark and change in shade in your left hand. So when you were pushing the victim the watch fell from your hand on the side of the road and due to sudden rip you had the cuts on your hand. It was your watch, not of the victims. Thirdly, you are having a cold andyou donot have a handkerchief. Lokking how neat and well dressed you are, you wouldnt be that careless if you were sick from home itself which Means you got cold when you got caught in the rain following the victim from the station. Plus the ink which is on the shirt of the victims is on your fingers too. You waited to see your art to be called a suicide and pretended to be a passerby but unfortunately now you have nowhere to go."
Newt started running. The police got hold of the breifcase and rest of the evidence they had. They also found the train ticket from which it was confirmed that he was following the victim. They thanked Aarav. And aarav walked towards his hope, lost in the best moment of his life. Doing what he truly wanted. He just was living in the moment. He look back in the clear sky.
Tears were rolling through his cheeks. He said to himself ," Are you proud of me father? "
-M
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STEP 1
randomly comes nothing
you should give your sole entire
It's a game of life
Just give it a good try
Writing calm the sole
Creativity is required
Instead of writting everything
Just go for something
Don't get pressurize
It's a game patience is required
In the end it's you
Who convert everything into new.
Help your pen to impress
The paper with the
Thoughts that you aquire
If anyone finds the message inside, may reply.
#review
#mystery
#ansh2_4
randomly comes nothing
you should give your sole entire
It's a game of life
Just give it a good try
Writing calm the sole
Creativity is required
Instead of writting everything
Just go for something
Don't get pressurize
It's a game patience is required
In the end it's you
Who convert everything into new.
Help your pen to impress
The paper with the
Thoughts that you aquire
If anyone finds the message inside, may reply.
#review
#mystery
#ansh2_4