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" Too close "

Its 2 AM in the morning the bus stopped .
A stranger came aboard and sit beside "Manav" abruptly, he was giving a strange aura of disease and intoxication

STRANGER- hey
MANAV- hmm
STRANGER- its really cold right
MANAV- hmm, yeah
STRANGER- more cold than your fu**ing "hmm" ( his whole body shooked as he barely sucked his anger)

A shock run through Manav's body

STRANGER- listen, ( in a slow hushy voice ) you should make people feel welcomed and don't, make, fun of them. It makes them,It makes them, feel they are different ( as he clenched his teeth )

STRANGER- don't you agree( he looks at manav with a soul piercing gaze)

MANAV- yes, totally ( shakingly as he tries to swallow his scream )

The stranger just keep staring down motionlessly for a whole minute

As manav tries to calm himself down

STRANGER -Hey! there is a joke for you( he just exclaimed at manav's face )

MANAV-What! ( without thinking anything)

STRANGER-Knock knock, knock knock, knock knock, knock knock, knock knock, knock knock

MANAV-Easy, easy who is there

STRANGER-You should have asked that before opening the door ( he laughs as if he is sucking the air in)

MANAV-Yeah, nice ( who just wanted to get out of this situation)

STRANGER- you are the same(while smiling)

Again he calmed down like a dummy

STRANGER-Hey where you going( in a childish way)

MANAV- umm Home ( you have no idea how bad, he thinks)

1 min later

MANAV- and you ( in self-doubt)

STRANGER-Yeah i am returning

MANAV-From where

STRANGER-Your home

His hand was always in his pocket

The incident happens

END

I think there is no need for an explaination here the stranger is 'Heath Ledger' (Joker) no, but that would be fun and more creepy as he is you know dead RIP such a great actor 😢

And the tittle just came in my mind
And now i have to make up something so it looks legit let's say as the stranger had already went to his house he is not a stranger anymore they are close, too close 🙃
Make sense? whatever.
It's my first try hope you like it