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#Einstestine
Our protaganist was abducted and tied to a chair in a dark closed room But he is not alone, there is a man infront of him bounded to a chair surrounded by 10 different sized candles. The man keep staring at our protaganist for two whole days without blinking while keeping a smile on his face. For the first 5 hours his eyes started bleeding and on the end of the 2nd day his eyes turned black while blood keep oozing out of them. Our protaganist was freed from his binds but when he observed the man he got the chills of his life
Anyone up for the challenge😊
#Einstestine
Our protaganist was abducted and tied to a chair in a dark closed room But he is not alone, there is a man infront of him bounded to a chair surrounded by 10 different sized candles. The man keep staring at our protaganist for two whole days without blinking while keeping a smile on his face. For the first 5 hours his eyes started bleeding and on the end of the 2nd day his eyes turned black while blood keep oozing out of them. Our protaganist was freed from his binds but when he observed the man he got the chills of his life
Anyone up for the challenge😊
7 AM in the morning, Arav worked hard all night and atlast he completed his working prototype
It's plain, simple as it can get, did you even tried? Huh - asked Arav's boss
Yes sir! I tried really hard on it you see here......- said Arav
What kind of dumb person would pay for something like this.is this the quality we produce, there is no creativity you just copied something came out of a cartoon - boss shouted
Ummm - before Arav could say something
Useless, Utter rubbish, junk
Get out of my face right now - boss barked at top of his lungs
My pills where are they - boss said grumpily
Sir please listen - Arav pleaded
I said get out - boss shouted as he throws the prototype on Arav's face
1 WEEK LATER
Police could'nt find him? Still? - said an employee
Yup! Still no clue, where could have he gone, leaving his wife behind - said another employee
Depression? He was in too much stress, mostly because of that rage filled boss.
Yeah right, he is making things difficult for everyone but i thought he was taking medicine for that - another employee
It's that bad? New employee in amaze
Everyone go back to work, break is over. We need to complete all new designs for the knives before the due date. No slacking off.
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It's plain, simple as it can get, did you even tried? Huh - asked Arav's boss
Yes sir! I tried really hard on it you see here......- said Arav
What kind of dumb person would pay for something like this.is this the quality we produce, there is no creativity you just copied something came out of a cartoon - boss shouted
Ummm - before Arav could say something
Useless, Utter rubbish, junk
Get out of my face right now - boss barked at top of his lungs
My pills where are they - boss said grumpily
Sir please listen - Arav pleaded
I said get out - boss shouted as he throws the prototype on Arav's face
1 WEEK LATER
Police could'nt find him? Still? - said an employee
Yup! Still no clue, where could have he gone, leaving his wife behind - said another employee
Depression? He was in too much stress, mostly because of that rage filled boss.
Yeah right, he is making things difficult for everyone but i thought he was taking medicine for that - another employee
It's that bad? New employee in amaze
Everyone go back to work, break is over. We need to complete all new designs for the knives before the due date. No slacking off.
#Einstestine #review #shortstory
" LOST"
7 AM in the morning, Arav worked hard all night and atlast he completed his working prototype.
It's plain, simple as it can get, did you even tried? Huh - asked Arav's boss
Yes sir! I tried really hard on it you see here......- said Arav
What kind of dumb person would pay for something like this? Is this the quality we produce, there is no creativity you just copied something came out of a cartoon - boss shouted
Ummm.. - before Arav could say something
Useless, Utter rubbish, junk
Get out of my face right now - boss barked at top of his lungs
My pills where are they - boss said grumpily
Sir please listen - Arav pleaded
I said get out - boss shouted as he throws the prototype on Arav's face
1 WEEK LATER
Police could'nt find him? Still? - said an employee
Yup! Still no clue, where could have he gone, leaving his wife behind - said another employee
Depression? He was in too much stress, mostly because of that rage filled boss.
Yeah right, he is making things difficult for everyone but i thought he was taking medicine for that - another employee
It's that bad? New employee in amaze
Everyone go back to work, break is over. We need to complete all new designs for the knives before the due date. No slacking off
#review #shortstory
#Einstestine
7 AM in the morning, Arav worked hard all night and atlast he completed his working prototype.
It's plain, simple as it can get, did you even tried? Huh - asked Arav's boss
Yes sir! I tried really hard on it you see here......- said Arav
What kind of dumb person would pay for something like this? Is this the quality we produce, there is no creativity you just copied something came out of a cartoon - boss shouted
Ummm.. - before Arav could say something
Useless, Utter rubbish, junk
Get out of my face right now - boss barked at top of his lungs
My pills where are they - boss said grumpily
Sir please listen - Arav pleaded
I said get out - boss shouted as he throws the prototype on Arav's face
1 WEEK LATER
Police could'nt find him? Still? - said an employee
Yup! Still no clue, where could have he gone, leaving his wife behind - said another employee
Depression? He was in too much stress, mostly because of that rage filled boss.
Yeah right, he is making things difficult for everyone but i thought he was taking medicine for that - another employee
It's that bad? New employee in amaze
Everyone go back to work, break is over. We need to complete all new designs for the knives before the due date. No slacking off
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#Einstestine
" A LITTLE HELP, PLEASE"
One day i woke up in the morning, i yawned as i looked in the mirror i could see myself, i could !, i jumped out of my bed and leaped towards the mirror, i made faces infront of the mirror, same, it's the same face, it's been so long since i last saw my face. I could'nt believe myself i feel like i could cry at anytime but no i controlled myself and went downstairs shouting mom, dad, mom, dad i could barely control myself. But there was no one, i called them again and again but no reply came, i went outside the whole streets were empty, only cars and empty houses. I came back home and went to my room, i looked in the mirror there i was laughing at myself, then i knew it was another one of it's prank. DAY-54 i am still stuck in the mirror world
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One day i woke up in the morning, i yawned as i looked in the mirror i could see myself, i could !, i jumped out of my bed and leaped towards the mirror, i made faces infront of the mirror, same, it's the same face, it's been so long since i last saw my face. I could'nt believe myself i feel like i could cry at anytime but no i controlled myself and went downstairs shouting mom, dad, mom, dad i could barely control myself. But there was no one, i called them again and again but no reply came, i went outside the whole streets were empty, only cars and empty houses. I came back home and went to my room, i looked in the mirror there i was laughing at myself, then i knew it was another one of it's prank. DAY-54 i am still stuck in the mirror world
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"A LITTLE HELP, PLEASE"
Part-2
DAY- 72
I am free, atlast i made it, mom! mom! where are you? what happened dear why you look so.... before she could complete, i hugged her and drifted away in the ocean of tears
Day-2
Where am i? why? Why this happened to me? He lied to me. He lied. I cried in the agony of the betrayal as i pulled my hair in pain. The warm tears had woven a swamp around my face.
Day- 4
There is no sound, people or any shadow, nor i could see myself in the mirror. Am i even alive?
Day-15
I am tired, I mostly spend my time in the bed while staring at the mirror, maybe i would find a way back home, apparently i do'nt feel any hunger, it feels like i have been eating well, but i taste nothing.
5 days before the tragedy
Alright, now open your eyes a little more wide - said Dr Whell a psychiatrist
Hmmmm, a little sleep deprived are we - said Dr whell while turning away from me as he scribbled something in his diary
Is she alright Dr ? - asked my mom, anxiously
Well i wont say she is'nt, but still, it wont bite to be extra careful - said Dr Whell as he passed a prescription of medicines to my mom
I have written some sleeping pills and vitamins, not any serious drug, we will wait for a few days and if she keeps having the same nightmares we can try some therapy. - said Dr whell
We left in the car for the home, i just turned 15 a week ago and by the same day I have been having this terrible nightmare over and over that someone is pulling me by my leg and dragging me towards the hell. As if i am barely hanging on the edge of two worlds and i could feel the heat coming from the hell as it burns my skin, the smell of the burning skin and my screams seemed so real. and everytime i woke abruptly, terrified, i always found myself near the mirror in my room, each day closer and closer. What does it mean?
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Part-2
DAY- 72
I am free, atlast i made it, mom! mom! where are you? what happened dear why you look so.... before she could complete, i hugged her and drifted away in the ocean of tears
Day-2
Where am i? why? Why this happened to me? He lied to me. He lied. I cried in the agony of the betrayal as i pulled my hair in pain. The warm tears had woven a swamp around my face.
Day- 4
There is no sound, people or any shadow, nor i could see myself in the mirror. Am i even alive?
Day-15
I am tired, I mostly spend my time in the bed while staring at the mirror, maybe i would find a way back home, apparently i do'nt feel any hunger, it feels like i have been eating well, but i taste nothing.
5 days before the tragedy
Alright, now open your eyes a little more wide - said Dr Whell a psychiatrist
Hmmmm, a little sleep deprived are we - said Dr whell while turning away from me as he scribbled something in his diary
Is she alright Dr ? - asked my mom, anxiously
Well i wont say she is'nt, but still, it wont bite to be extra careful - said Dr Whell as he passed a prescription of medicines to my mom
I have written some sleeping pills and vitamins, not any serious drug, we will wait for a few days and if she keeps having the same nightmares we can try some therapy. - said Dr whell
We left in the car for the home, i just turned 15 a week ago and by the same day I have been having this terrible nightmare over and over that someone is pulling me by my leg and dragging me towards the hell. As if i am barely hanging on the edge of two worlds and i could feel the heat coming from the hell as it burns my skin, the smell of the burning skin and my screams seemed so real. and everytime i woke abruptly, terrified, i always found myself near the mirror in my room, each day closer and closer. What does it mean?
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#Einstestine
Eden's apple that EVE ate.
Newton's apple lead to the discovery of laws of physics.
Golden apple appeard in many religious traditions, often as a mystical or forbidden fruit.
Poison apple from sleeping beauty.
Apple tech, biggest tech company in the word.
Pen pineapple apple pen, internet viral meme.
Even RYUK from Death Note eats apple.
And there are even colors name after the fruit- apple red and candy apple red
What's with apple taking all the credit while bananas only has dirty jokes? Anyone?
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#Einstestine
Newton's apple lead to the discovery of laws of physics.
Golden apple appeard in many religious traditions, often as a mystical or forbidden fruit.
Poison apple from sleeping beauty.
Apple tech, biggest tech company in the word.
Pen pineapple apple pen, internet viral meme.
Even RYUK from Death Note eats apple.
And there are even colors name after the fruit- apple red and candy apple red
What's with apple taking all the credit while bananas only has dirty jokes? Anyone?
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#Einstestine
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#Einstestine
"Too good"
He is walking straight, towards an unknown destination by a random road he took . The rain barely bothers him as he loosened his tie and throw away his coat on the sideway, a blood soaked white shirt and an empty gun beside his waist, plain in sight begging to be noticed . His lumping was'nt natural but the result of his rage and his nature of loving too much. He clears his constant bleeding nose with his arm, and with the other he put pressure on the wound in his stomach. It's raining heavy now, the crimson rain around him has become more red, as he tripped and fall down on his knees, the agony on his face revealed a deep sadness and remorse. He turned his face up in the sky and let the rain wash away all of his pain and suffering and atlast he let go of his wound and fall on his face in the ground
I could'nt end him, how could i? after seeing such determination. I put my gun back in the coat, as i walked away holding an umberalla, all alone. I wished i too have taken a wound like that to compete with him, but alas! I was too good. In this battle of snake and mongoose, this snake has won today. Again.
#Einstestine
"Too good"
He is walking straight, towards an unknown destination by a random road he took . The rain barely bothers him as he loosened his tie and throw away his coat on the sideway, a blood soaked white shirt and an empty gun beside his waist, plain in sight begging to be noticed . His lumping was'nt natural but the result of his rage and his nature of loving too much. He clears his constant bleeding nose with his arm, and with the other he put pressure on the wound in his stomach. It's raining heavy now, the crimson rain around him has become more red, as he tripped and fall down on his knees, the agony on his face revealed a deep sadness and remorse. He turned his face up in the sky and let the rain wash away all of his pain and suffering and atlast he let go of his wound and fall on his face in the ground
I could'nt end him, how could i? after seeing such determination. I put my gun back in the coat, as i walked away holding an umberalla, all alone. I wished i too have taken a wound like that to compete with him, but alas! I was too good. In this battle of snake and mongoose, this snake has won today. Again.
"THE HEROIC PRINCE"
He is beautiful , he is smart
He is something any father wants.
He is a swordsman , he is a scholar
He is a man of steel blow like a canon.
lonely so they feel, his many many lovers,
no one can own him
they already knew it better.
But everything aside
he is the king's only son,
beside,
Run to his good side.
He is modest in nature
Has to marry someones daughter
Must be pressured for a heir,
We will have our share.
He had a lot of romance ,
maybe he longed for love.
He also had his collection of sad songs unsunged
Patiently did he waited,
for every letter he send .
But a king can't seems to care for an unworthy boy's sham.
"Make him a MAN
or dont ever show him "
But the things that are shown don't have a will.
Will the prince meet his father or his king
One must think what the glory brings
Now he is what the king wanted,
now he is what every father wants.
He is, in that heroic stream
But he is everything what every person deemed.
END
The poem is about a scene where a prince returns to his home after a long time and everyone is hailing his name.
The first para is sung by the scholars, of how he will be remembered by the history.
The second para is sung by the ministers who wants to sure favours from him.
The third pars is sung by an old woman who took care of him since birth . She is sad that no one will remember the part of prince that she knew, as it will never be included in history
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He is beautiful , he is smart
He is something any father wants.
He is a swordsman , he is a scholar
He is a man of steel blow like a canon.
lonely so they feel, his many many lovers,
no one can own him
they already knew it better.
But everything aside
he is the king's only son,
beside,
Run to his good side.
He is modest in nature
Has to marry someones daughter
Must be pressured for a heir,
We will have our share.
He had a lot of romance ,
maybe he longed for love.
He also had his collection of sad songs unsunged
Patiently did he waited,
for every letter he send .
But a king can't seems to care for an unworthy boy's sham.
"Make him a MAN
or dont ever show him "
But the things that are shown don't have a will.
Will the prince meet his father or his king
One must think what the glory brings
Now he is what the king wanted,
now he is what every father wants.
He is, in that heroic stream
But he is everything what every person deemed.
END
The poem is about a scene where a prince returns to his home after a long time and everyone is hailing his name.
The first para is sung by the scholars, of how he will be remembered by the history.
The second para is sung by the ministers who wants to sure favours from him.
The third pars is sung by an old woman who took care of him since birth . She is sad that no one will remember the part of prince that she knew, as it will never be included in history
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'THAT'S ALL FOR NOW'
Consciousness, it rules over every living being aspires to greatness stability, functionality and freedom.It is said that all the life we see started from the ocean, have you ever tried breathing underwater? The kind of pain and hardship it took to breath out on the land not only showed us that we were going towards an higher level of intelligence but it also made us concious about ourselves. concious about fear, hunger and how to tackle it, not by hiding but by evolving.We get out of water, now it's time to get out of the Earth.All of those who are still listening to me, this is the last broadcast from the star ship 336, it's your last chance to leave the Earth, i repeat, it's the last star ship to the planet "ROO" those who still wants to leave the earth check your wristbands, co- ordinates are there, may our prayers be answered.
Radio transmission ended.
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Consciousness, it rules over every living being aspires to greatness stability, functionality and freedom.It is said that all the life we see started from the ocean, have you ever tried breathing underwater? The kind of pain and hardship it took to breath out on the land not only showed us that we were going towards an higher level of intelligence but it also made us concious about ourselves. concious about fear, hunger and how to tackle it, not by hiding but by evolving.We get out of water, now it's time to get out of the Earth.All of those who are still listening to me, this is the last broadcast from the star ship 336, it's your last chance to leave the Earth, i repeat, it's the last star ship to the planet "ROO" those who still wants to leave the earth check your wristbands, co- ordinates are there, may our prayers be answered.
Radio transmission ended.
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"THE TOWN CALLED EMBIL"
Part- 1
What do you think - said Hough a 45 years old watchman of a cemetry in a small town called 'EMBIL,
A bear? - said john a 50 year old grave digger
Have you ever seen a damn bear in your whole life, where would one come from here in this town? - said Hough
Hey i am just saying, i mean what else could do such thing? - said john
What do you say should we allert the authorities? - said Hough
Hell no, i am not losing my job over something like this, i am saving for my retirement, losing the job is the last thing i want to happen - said John in a panick
So.... put it back then - said Hough as he tossed a shovel towards John
But still, what could it be ? - said John as they both stared at the decapitated corpse dragged outside of it's coffin
Let's hope no one opens this coffin as long as we are around - said Hough while dusting his clothes off
Cheers to that - said John as he level the soil around the grave
Oh god have mercy on our poor soul thy we have sinned, let us in your holy arms once again as we plead, amen - John prayed and kissed the cross hanging around his neck
I am telling you man strange things are happening since that strange doctor came into the town, something is very wrong about him - said Hough
You mean the one who wears all black, a black hat hiding his face, a black long coat, black shoes and black gloves, the guy sure is a mystery, but i doubt he has anything to do with this -said John
Mark my words one of these days you will be seeing him running for his life, who knows what kind of black magic is this science, his days are numbered if he keep getting in the way of the church - said Hough as both of them walked away from the grave
The same man they were talking about who wears all black clothes jumped of the tree beside the grave and looked at them as they left he then bends and collected the dirt around the grave in a jar and started walking in the opposite direction while whisteling under the full moon
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Part- 1
What do you think - said Hough a 45 years old watchman of a cemetry in a small town called 'EMBIL,
A bear? - said john a 50 year old grave digger
Have you ever seen a damn bear in your whole life, where would one come from here in this town? - said Hough
Hey i am just saying, i mean what else could do such thing? - said john
What do you say should we allert the authorities? - said Hough
Hell no, i am not losing my job over something like this, i am saving for my retirement, losing the job is the last thing i want to happen - said John in a panick
So.... put it back then - said Hough as he tossed a shovel towards John
But still, what could it be ? - said John as they both stared at the decapitated corpse dragged outside of it's coffin
Let's hope no one opens this coffin as long as we are around - said Hough while dusting his clothes off
Cheers to that - said John as he level the soil around the grave
Oh god have mercy on our poor soul thy we have sinned, let us in your holy arms once again as we plead, amen - John prayed and kissed the cross hanging around his neck
I am telling you man strange things are happening since that strange doctor came into the town, something is very wrong about him - said Hough
You mean the one who wears all black, a black hat hiding his face, a black long coat, black shoes and black gloves, the guy sure is a mystery, but i doubt he has anything to do with this -said John
Mark my words one of these days you will be seeing him running for his life, who knows what kind of black magic is this science, his days are numbered if he keep getting in the way of the church - said Hough as both of them walked away from the grave
The same man they were talking about who wears all black clothes jumped of the tree beside the grave and looked at them as they left he then bends and collected the dirt around the grave in a jar and started walking in the opposite direction while whisteling under the full moon
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"A TALE TO THE ENDS"
Part-1
A god, i was born a god with the right to rule. To take, to own the existence. But i was betrayed by my own family, when they realised my godhood their feeble human minds could'nt comprehend the greatness they have been bestowed by and the fear took over them and they locked away my powers with their magic. They made these powerful keys to lock away all 5 of my powers and forcefully changed me into a human.'Now what i want you to tell me is, what you know about those keys old man' - said Amon while cleaning his gun
That's just a folklore - said an old shopkeeper sitting beside his desk shaking
Yeah i wished too, now tell me - said Amon as he shoots a glass jar beside the old man
Wait!, i remembered something - said old man as he grabbed his heart in fear
See, the method works, now bark - said Amon pointing gun at the old man
I know nothing about the keys you are talking about but there is something, this poem i heard from my father about some locked demon and his never ending lust for the keys to his cage
Interesting..., let's hear it - said Amon as he puts away the gun and sat on the chair
"The cursed child of demon
Born in a far land
The wise family of mages
Did'nt knew what nightmare was ahead
The child killed the kind king
And took his crown
melted the humans
With a tilted frown
5 fingeres when pointed
At the demon
He lost all his evil
Caged by the mages
And forced back to devil
Mages will always protect you
But evil still lingers in the trees
No matter how much time would past
But lustful demon should never find the keys"
If the fingers of mages in the poem are these keys you talk about then it is said that 3 keys were to be protected by mages, the demon child's father his mother and younger brother, while the 4th key is said to be taken back by elves who made them and the last key was thrown away in the deep ocean never to be found again- said old man
That's all i know through the folktale my father told me - said old man
Hmm i know what i have to do now, but for you old man you need to go - Amon points the gun at him
I knew you would'nt let me go, i just needed sometime to accept my fate but remember this you are nothing more than a pest who slipped through the god's hand and fell on the earth - said old man staring in Amon's eye
Amon took his face near the old man's ear and said 'No i didn't slip, i teard off the god's hand and descended upon the earth then he shot the old man in the face and left.
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Part-1
A god, i was born a god with the right to rule. To take, to own the existence. But i was betrayed by my own family, when they realised my godhood their feeble human minds could'nt comprehend the greatness they have been bestowed by and the fear took over them and they locked away my powers with their magic. They made these powerful keys to lock away all 5 of my powers and forcefully changed me into a human.'Now what i want you to tell me is, what you know about those keys old man' - said Amon while cleaning his gun
That's just a folklore - said an old shopkeeper sitting beside his desk shaking
Yeah i wished too, now tell me - said Amon as he shoots a glass jar beside the old man
Wait!, i remembered something - said old man as he grabbed his heart in fear
See, the method works, now bark - said Amon pointing gun at the old man
I know nothing about the keys you are talking about but there is something, this poem i heard from my father about some locked demon and his never ending lust for the keys to his cage
Interesting..., let's hear it - said Amon as he puts away the gun and sat on the chair
"The cursed child of demon
Born in a far land
The wise family of mages
Did'nt knew what nightmare was ahead
The child killed the kind king
And took his crown
melted the humans
With a tilted frown
5 fingeres when pointed
At the demon
He lost all his evil
Caged by the mages
And forced back to devil
Mages will always protect you
But evil still lingers in the trees
No matter how much time would past
But lustful demon should never find the keys"
If the fingers of mages in the poem are these keys you talk about then it is said that 3 keys were to be protected by mages, the demon child's father his mother and younger brother, while the 4th key is said to be taken back by elves who made them and the last key was thrown away in the deep ocean never to be found again- said old man
That's all i know through the folktale my father told me - said old man
Hmm i know what i have to do now, but for you old man you need to go - Amon points the gun at him
I knew you would'nt let me go, i just needed sometime to accept my fate but remember this you are nothing more than a pest who slipped through the god's hand and fell on the earth - said old man staring in Amon's eye
Amon took his face near the old man's ear and said 'No i didn't slip, i teard off the god's hand and descended upon the earth then he shot the old man in the face and left.
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"A PSYCHO"
Part-1
Why did you shoot all those people ! - inspector john shouted as he hit the table with his hand
Simon smiled as he put his cuffed hands on the table
There is no point in asking this scum, he is a psycho, should have shooted him on the sight - said inspector charles as he opens his watch and throwed it on the table
Simon keeps smiling
There were childrens, women, somebody's family, you took them away, away from their loved ones, just to calm those chemicals in your head? - said john, demanding answers to his questions
Simon rolled his eyes and yawned
I am gonna break that fuc**ng mug of yours - said john as he leaped towards simon
Wait! - charles shouted as he hold john from the back
Beating him is'nt going to take us anywhere we need to stay calm and think this through -charles shouted while struggling to hold john back
Stay calm? Said john as he pushed charles in the wall
Did'nt you said we should have shooted him? Now you want me to stay calm while he rub that fu**ing smile in our faces - said john angrily while pushing charles in the wall
Do you think it concerns me less, than it does you ? Charles Shouted
I was there too, i too saw bodies of childrens shot in the head, i also saw people crying and trying to find the bodies of their beloved. But we can't change what happened, we are powerless - said charles as he stares in john's eyes
The only think we could do is to put this motherfu*** on that rope, but to do that we have to follow law , we can't lose this chance, people are counting on us - said charles in a calming voice
John let out a deep sigh as he let go of charles
Let's go, get some rest it's been a very stressful day, we can continue this later - said charles as he put his hand on john's shoulder
Yeah, you are right i feel like i could throw up anytime - said john as he rubbed his eyes
Come - said charles as he opens the door
It seems...., the show is over -said simon while swinging on the chair
Both john and charles stared at him
You were asking me something, it would be rude of me not to answer now, after such a spectecular performance - said simon with a grin
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Part-1
Why did you shoot all those people ! - inspector john shouted as he hit the table with his hand
Simon smiled as he put his cuffed hands on the table
There is no point in asking this scum, he is a psycho, should have shooted him on the sight - said inspector charles as he opens his watch and throwed it on the table
Simon keeps smiling
There were childrens, women, somebody's family, you took them away, away from their loved ones, just to calm those chemicals in your head? - said john, demanding answers to his questions
Simon rolled his eyes and yawned
I am gonna break that fuc**ng mug of yours - said john as he leaped towards simon
Wait! - charles shouted as he hold john from the back
Beating him is'nt going to take us anywhere we need to stay calm and think this through -charles shouted while struggling to hold john back
Stay calm? Said john as he pushed charles in the wall
Did'nt you said we should have shooted him? Now you want me to stay calm while he rub that fu**ing smile in our faces - said john angrily while pushing charles in the wall
Do you think it concerns me less, than it does you ? Charles Shouted
I was there too, i too saw bodies of childrens shot in the head, i also saw people crying and trying to find the bodies of their beloved. But we can't change what happened, we are powerless - said charles as he stares in john's eyes
The only think we could do is to put this motherfu*** on that rope, but to do that we have to follow law , we can't lose this chance, people are counting on us - said charles in a calming voice
John let out a deep sigh as he let go of charles
Let's go, get some rest it's been a very stressful day, we can continue this later - said charles as he put his hand on john's shoulder
Yeah, you are right i feel like i could throw up anytime - said john as he rubbed his eyes
Come - said charles as he opens the door
It seems...., the show is over -said simon while swinging on the chair
Both john and charles stared at him
You were asking me something, it would be rude of me not to answer now, after such a spectecular performance - said simon with a grin
#review
#Einstestine #shortstory
"A PSYCHO"
Part-2
Now listen to me you son of bi***, we are done with your games, if this is another one of your acts, we have other ways too and this time i won't stop my friend here . Said charles as he kicked the chair
I believe you - said simon as he raised his cuffed hands in the air
Charles took a deep breath and sat on the nearby chair
where did you get the guns from? - asked charles as he starts the tape recorder
Ummm....,There was this guy an old aquantice of mine. He introduced me to these bunch of black market dealers, we had a deal, i bring them 50k and the shiny AK would be mine - said simon
Where did you get such amount? Asked charles
You know it's really is a work of heaven when both parties has something they need and they trade it for eachother's. In our case i had a friend with me and they needed some organs as fast as they can
Sick bastard - said john
How did you decided on the place of your mass shooting? - asked charles
How...., it's not that complicated i heard childrens laughing, i went in, simple. - said simon
John clenched his fist again but somehow controled himself
Next - said simon
Who else was part of this plan? - asked charles
No one, just this pretty face guy right here - said simon as he points towards himself
Why you did it? - asked charles
Why....may be demons in my head told me to do it - said simon as he laughed
No, no, it just seemed fun and it..., actually was - said simon scratching his cheeks
Do you regret your actions? - asked charles
Nope, no, not at all your honour i mean what will happen even if i did, i am gonna enjoy it till the end - said simon as he giggled
That's enough - said john and stopped the tape recorder
I can not hear this madness any longer this recording is sufficient as a proof. Right? - Said john
So it seems - said charles
charles took out the tape and started walking outside of the room
Madness? Said simon
Both john and charles turned towards him
They say, madness comes from degradation of ones character, i say that's very poetic. Have you ever sit alone in a room with a gun in your mouth ? And thought OH!, a bullet is all it takes to explode this mere existance , and one thought is all it takes to act on that, but when you stop thinking about living and alive and when you started to feel a chill inside your bones and you ask yourself what is the meaning of punishment when you have already succumed to it. Then it will came out of you, madness? No! I say Sympothy for those poor souls that still remained stucked and then you will heard it in your head
"SEND THEM TO ME" said simon as his laugh echoed in the whole room he hit his head five times on the table's edge repeatedly and killed himself
John and charles could swear to see a shadow behind simon whose hand was on his head the whole time while he hit his head on the desk, then the shadow disappeared.
#review
#Einstestine #shortstory
Part-2
Now listen to me you son of bi***, we are done with your games, if this is another one of your acts, we have other ways too and this time i won't stop my friend here . Said charles as he kicked the chair
I believe you - said simon as he raised his cuffed hands in the air
Charles took a deep breath and sat on the nearby chair
where did you get the guns from? - asked charles as he starts the tape recorder
Ummm....,There was this guy an old aquantice of mine. He introduced me to these bunch of black market dealers, we had a deal, i bring them 50k and the shiny AK would be mine - said simon
Where did you get such amount? Asked charles
You know it's really is a work of heaven when both parties has something they need and they trade it for eachother's. In our case i had a friend with me and they needed some organs as fast as they can
Sick bastard - said john
How did you decided on the place of your mass shooting? - asked charles
How...., it's not that complicated i heard childrens laughing, i went in, simple. - said simon
John clenched his fist again but somehow controled himself
Next - said simon
Who else was part of this plan? - asked charles
No one, just this pretty face guy right here - said simon as he points towards himself
Why you did it? - asked charles
Why....may be demons in my head told me to do it - said simon as he laughed
No, no, it just seemed fun and it..., actually was - said simon scratching his cheeks
Do you regret your actions? - asked charles
Nope, no, not at all your honour i mean what will happen even if i did, i am gonna enjoy it till the end - said simon as he giggled
That's enough - said john and stopped the tape recorder
I can not hear this madness any longer this recording is sufficient as a proof. Right? - Said john
So it seems - said charles
charles took out the tape and started walking outside of the room
Madness? Said simon
Both john and charles turned towards him
They say, madness comes from degradation of ones character, i say that's very poetic. Have you ever sit alone in a room with a gun in your mouth ? And thought OH!, a bullet is all it takes to explode this mere existance , and one thought is all it takes to act on that, but when you stop thinking about living and alive and when you started to feel a chill inside your bones and you ask yourself what is the meaning of punishment when you have already succumed to it. Then it will came out of you, madness? No! I say Sympothy for those poor souls that still remained stucked and then you will heard it in your head
"SEND THEM TO ME" said simon as his laugh echoed in the whole room he hit his head five times on the table's edge repeatedly and killed himself
John and charles could swear to see a shadow behind simon whose hand was on his head the whole time while he hit his head on the desk, then the shadow disappeared.
#review
#Einstestine #shortstory
"Parallel's unparallel tale"
Finally, they both saw eachother.
But before they meet, both could already tell that there was a monster coming towards them. the smell of blood was etched in their swords. The raw hunger in their eyes had become a permanent trait that revolt against the nature. They both stop at a distance to give a last chance of escape to anything between them. The clouds , the air, even the life lost it's voice as they touched their swords. The black clouds that rumbles on everything in existence, tightly shut their mouths . As they pulled out their swords, both of their nature got reflected by it, in the whole area, the shiniest object in the forest. As the swords kept it shine while blinding the sun, they leap towards eachother, clouds bursts in exclaimed and the thunder striked the earth but before it could even reach the ground, it was over.
Now their backs are facing eachother, the result of the battle seperated the whole forest in two groups, everything wanted to know who won. Their backs are still facing eachother, they both slowly turns and gazed at eachother.
They both understood that they were eachother's conclusion,
But the story was yet to be written, so they both take a deep look at eachother and in their minds they bowed to eachother's teacher, now they were ready to swallow the utter shame, and slowly put their swords back, as the first time in their life their swords felt heavy.
The strangled life in the forest started to revive as they move farther and farther away.
END
while writing a story, sometimes it's really hard to truly depict the surroundings and what's going on beside our characters it's one of my weaker aspects in writing so i tried something here, hope you all can give me some tips.
#review #microtale
#Einstestine
Finally, they both saw eachother.
But before they meet, both could already tell that there was a monster coming towards them. the smell of blood was etched in their swords. The raw hunger in their eyes had become a permanent trait that revolt against the nature. They both stop at a distance to give a last chance of escape to anything between them. The clouds , the air, even the life lost it's voice as they touched their swords. The black clouds that rumbles on everything in existence, tightly shut their mouths . As they pulled out their swords, both of their nature got reflected by it, in the whole area, the shiniest object in the forest. As the swords kept it shine while blinding the sun, they leap towards eachother, clouds bursts in exclaimed and the thunder striked the earth but before it could even reach the ground, it was over.
Now their backs are facing eachother, the result of the battle seperated the whole forest in two groups, everything wanted to know who won. Their backs are still facing eachother, they both slowly turns and gazed at eachother.
They both understood that they were eachother's conclusion,
But the story was yet to be written, so they both take a deep look at eachother and in their minds they bowed to eachother's teacher, now they were ready to swallow the utter shame, and slowly put their swords back, as the first time in their life their swords felt heavy.
The strangled life in the forest started to revive as they move farther and farther away.
END
while writing a story, sometimes it's really hard to truly depict the surroundings and what's going on beside our characters it's one of my weaker aspects in writing so i tried something here, hope you all can give me some tips.
#review #microtale
#Einstestine
"Parallel's unparallel tale"
Finally, they both saw eachother.
But before they meet, both could already tell that there was a monster coming towards them. the smell of blood was etched in their swords. The raw hunger in their eyes had become a permanent trait that revolt against the nature. They both stop at a distance to give a last chance of escape to anything between them. The clouds , the air, even the life lost it's voice as they touched their swords. The black clouds that rumbles on everything in existence, tightly shut their mouths . As they pulled out their swords, both of their nature got reflected by it, in the whole area, the shiniest object in the forest. As the swords kept it shine while blinding the sun, they leap towards eachother, clouds bursts in exclaimed and the thunder striked the earth but before it could even reach the ground, it was over.
Now their backs are facing eachother, the result of the battle seperated the whole forest in two groups, everything wanted to know who won. Their backs are still facing eachother, they both slowly turns and gazed at eachother.They both understood that they were eachother's conclusion,
But the story was yet to be written, so they both took a deep look at eachother and in their minds they bowed to eachother's teacher, now they were ready to swallow the utter shame, and slowly put their swords back, as the first time in their life their swords felt heavy.
The strangled life in the forest started to revive as they move farther and farther away.
END
while writing a story, sometimes it's really hard to truly depict the surroundings and what's going on beside our characters it's one of my weaker aspects in writing so i tried something here, hope you all can give me some tips.
#review #microtale
#Einstestine
Finally, they both saw eachother.
But before they meet, both could already tell that there was a monster coming towards them. the smell of blood was etched in their swords. The raw hunger in their eyes had become a permanent trait that revolt against the nature. They both stop at a distance to give a last chance of escape to anything between them. The clouds , the air, even the life lost it's voice as they touched their swords. The black clouds that rumbles on everything in existence, tightly shut their mouths . As they pulled out their swords, both of their nature got reflected by it, in the whole area, the shiniest object in the forest. As the swords kept it shine while blinding the sun, they leap towards eachother, clouds bursts in exclaimed and the thunder striked the earth but before it could even reach the ground, it was over.
Now their backs are facing eachother, the result of the battle seperated the whole forest in two groups, everything wanted to know who won. Their backs are still facing eachother, they both slowly turns and gazed at eachother.They both understood that they were eachother's conclusion,
But the story was yet to be written, so they both took a deep look at eachother and in their minds they bowed to eachother's teacher, now they were ready to swallow the utter shame, and slowly put their swords back, as the first time in their life their swords felt heavy.
The strangled life in the forest started to revive as they move farther and farther away.
END
while writing a story, sometimes it's really hard to truly depict the surroundings and what's going on beside our characters it's one of my weaker aspects in writing so i tried something here, hope you all can give me some tips.
#review #microtale
#Einstestine
#review #poetry #Einstestine
Loving a lie too much
Hating to deny so much
The Builded madness, unraveled the path
The Builded hatred, bring forth the wrath
A short lived journey
like an empty Hourglass sand
A melancholy start and an abrupt end
Loving a lie too much
Hating to deny so much
The Builded madness, unraveled the path
The Builded hatred, bring forth the wrath
A short lived journey
like an empty Hourglass sand
A melancholy start and an abrupt end
#review #poetry #Einstestine
Loving a lie too much
Hating to deny so much
The Builded madness, unraveled
the path
The Builded hatred, bring forth the wrath
A short lived journey
like a broken Hourglass sand
A melancholy start and an abrupt end
Loving a lie too much
Hating to deny so much
The Builded madness, unraveled
the path
The Builded hatred, bring forth the wrath
A short lived journey
like a broken Hourglass sand
A melancholy start and an abrupt end
#review #poetry #Einstestine
Loving a lie too much
Hating to deny so much
The Builded madness, unraveled
the path
The Builded hatred, bring forth the wrath
A short lived journey
like a broken Hourglass sand
A melancholy start and an abrupt end
(Pls do tell me your views on this , it's always interesting to hear different openions)
Loving a lie too much
Hating to deny so much
The Builded madness, unraveled
the path
The Builded hatred, bring forth the wrath
A short lived journey
like a broken Hourglass sand
A melancholy start and an abrupt end
(Pls do tell me your views on this , it's always interesting to hear different openions)
"THE LAST MESSAGE"
Oh! poor soul you had time, but denied
Oh! poor your family you left behind
Oh! I envy those who could make amends
I envy Myself getting off your wrath
Is this the price for calmness
Or is this the deception of mahem
The old wise tree has shed
And the bird has lost it's egg
The heavy boxes are a burden now
But have to march out of house
The weaker ones would be thrown away
The stronger ones will find a way
My pain will never reach you
But who cares about that
So was your pain bigger
But it's me who is writing the poem
So don't haunt me with a new chapter
You don't have the power to make me read
I don't need your fake smiles anymore
Instead...., grace me with a good night sleep
#Einstestine #poetry #review
Feelings can't be measured and compared.
A friend thinks of a last message for his dead friend in form of a poetry at his funeral who has committed suicide. Though he feels an unimaginable pain, he still thinks it's his parents right to be in most pain for the moment so he expressed himself in this poetry but still mention his family first, at the end he couldn't control his pain and tells him that it hurts him more than anyone.
Oh! poor soul you had time, but denied
Oh! poor your family you left behind
Oh! I envy those who could make amends
I envy Myself getting off your wrath
Is this the price for calmness
Or is this the deception of mahem
The old wise tree has shed
And the bird has lost it's egg
The heavy boxes are a burden now
But have to march out of house
The weaker ones would be thrown away
The stronger ones will find a way
My pain will never reach you
But who cares about that
So was your pain bigger
But it's me who is writing the poem
So don't haunt me with a new chapter
You don't have the power to make me read
I don't need your fake smiles anymore
Instead...., grace me with a good night sleep
#Einstestine #poetry #review
Feelings can't be measured and compared.
A friend thinks of a last message for his dead friend in form of a poetry at his funeral who has committed suicide. Though he feels an unimaginable pain, he still thinks it's his parents right to be in most pain for the moment so he expressed himself in this poetry but still mention his family first, at the end he couldn't control his pain and tells him that it hurts him more than anyone.
"THE LAST MESSAGE"
Oh! poor soul you had time, but denied
Oh! poor your family you left behind
Oh! I envy those who could make amends
I envy Myself getting off your wrath
Is this the price for calmness
Or is this the deception of mahem
The old wise tree has shed
And the bird has lost it's egg
The heavy boxes are a burden now
But have to march out of house
The weaker ones would be thrown away
The stronger ones will find a way
My pain will never reach you
But who cares about that
So was your pain bigger
But it's me who is writing the poem
So don't haunt me with a new chapter
You don't have the power to make me read
I don't need your fake smiles anymore
Instead...., grace me with a good night sleep
#Einstestine #poetry #review
@SUAN25
Feelings can't be measured and compared.
A friend thinks of a last message for his dead friend in form of a poetry at his funeral who has committed suicide. Though he feels an unimaginable pain, he still thinks it's his parents right to be in most pain for the moment so he expressed himself in this poetry but still mention his family first, at the end he couldn't control his pain and tells him that it hurts him more than anyone.
Oh! poor soul you had time, but denied
Oh! poor your family you left behind
Oh! I envy those who could make amends
I envy Myself getting off your wrath
Is this the price for calmness
Or is this the deception of mahem
The old wise tree has shed
And the bird has lost it's egg
The heavy boxes are a burden now
But have to march out of house
The weaker ones would be thrown away
The stronger ones will find a way
My pain will never reach you
But who cares about that
So was your pain bigger
But it's me who is writing the poem
So don't haunt me with a new chapter
You don't have the power to make me read
I don't need your fake smiles anymore
Instead...., grace me with a good night sleep
#Einstestine #poetry #review
@SUAN25
Feelings can't be measured and compared.
A friend thinks of a last message for his dead friend in form of a poetry at his funeral who has committed suicide. Though he feels an unimaginable pain, he still thinks it's his parents right to be in most pain for the moment so he expressed himself in this poetry but still mention his family first, at the end he couldn't control his pain and tells him that it hurts him more than anyone.