#review #yourreview #sm #i’mABrokenMan
I’m a broken man
don’t know who to trust.
Being a broken man
allows you not to trust.
I’m a broken man
with lots of blood,
bleeding from the heart like a river.
Being a broken man
helps people raft on the red stream
And they don’t give a damn, whether you die in shiver
The moon is the only friend
who acknowledges my tears.
Stars, like a bodyguard
help me fight out my fears.
But sun, sometimes behaves as a foe
for his rays of light,
focuses me to reach my actual height.
Nevertheless, I’m a broken man.
Broken down piece by piece
by the sword, of the goddess of beauty
sharpened up with innocence, cunning ferocity.
Never even cared, if I’m happy or sad,
wouldn’t even matter if I’m alive or dead.
I’m a broken man,
who knows how to fix the glasses.
But, being a broken man,
There comes a why.
Why even bother , rebuilding it.
Everything broken down into bits and pieces.
And so am I.
I’m a broken man
don’t know who to trust.
Being a broken man
allows you not to trust.
I’m a broken man
with lots of blood,
bleeding from the heart like a river.
Being a broken man
helps people raft on the red stream
And they don’t give a damn, whether you die in shiver
The moon is the only friend
who acknowledges my tears.
Stars, like a bodyguard
help me fight out my fears.
But sun, sometimes behaves as a foe
for his rays of light,
focuses me to reach my actual height.
Nevertheless, I’m a broken man.
Broken down piece by piece
by the sword, of the goddess of beauty
sharpened up with innocence, cunning ferocity.
Never even cared, if I’m happy or sad,
wouldn’t even matter if I’m alive or dead.
I’m a broken man,
who knows how to fix the glasses.
But, being a broken man,
There comes a why.
Why even bother , rebuilding it.
Everything broken down into bits and pieces.
And so am I.
I still remember when we first met
You were 13 and I was 12
You were moving in to your new house
You were our new neighbors I later learned
That time I came home from school
You were standing at the door carrying a box
You were wearing blue skirts to your knees
You look to me as I stand briefly on the street at the front of our house
You smiled but I creep out inside
Never had a pretty face smiled to me
I wanted to speak and say hello but decided against it and went inside the house instead
Out of fear I say stupid and embarrassed myself
The next day though we became officially friends
You really made the effort to make friends and not me
Through the years we still remain friends
But it's not the same as it used to be
You are now living overseas to fullfil your dreams
While I stay in the country and still looking for myself
You were my first crush and you knew it well
I told it to you the year later we met
I never courted you though because I don't want to ruin our friendship,
And I have a haunch you don't feel the same thing with me
As you keep telling me I was like a younger brother to you as you are an only child
Yeah yeah I kind of understand it all
But still it kinda hurts
Knowing you like someone but the feeling isn't mutual
But we gotta be tough, right?
This isn't the end I know it well
We're both young, a lot could happen
Wether we end up become lovers or maybe not
I only hope our friendship still remains
I hope it'll last forever
This will be all
Hope you don't find it weird
I just misses you so much so here it is
That's all and I wish you are always safe
#review #poem #openforcretics
#I'llsendittosomeonespecialtome
#kidlycorrectforgrammars
#andopenforsuggestions
#thankyou
You were 13 and I was 12
You were moving in to your new house
You were our new neighbors I later learned
That time I came home from school
You were standing at the door carrying a box
You were wearing blue skirts to your knees
You look to me as I stand briefly on the street at the front of our house
You smiled but I creep out inside
Never had a pretty face smiled to me
I wanted to speak and say hello but decided against it and went inside the house instead
Out of fear I say stupid and embarrassed myself
The next day though we became officially friends
You really made the effort to make friends and not me
Through the years we still remain friends
But it's not the same as it used to be
You are now living overseas to fullfil your dreams
While I stay in the country and still looking for myself
You were my first crush and you knew it well
I told it to you the year later we met
I never courted you though because I don't want to ruin our friendship,
And I have a haunch you don't feel the same thing with me
As you keep telling me I was like a younger brother to you as you are an only child
Yeah yeah I kind of understand it all
But still it kinda hurts
Knowing you like someone but the feeling isn't mutual
But we gotta be tough, right?
This isn't the end I know it well
We're both young, a lot could happen
Wether we end up become lovers or maybe not
I only hope our friendship still remains
I hope it'll last forever
This will be all
Hope you don't find it weird
I just misses you so much so here it is
That's all and I wish you are always safe
#review #poem #openforcretics
#I'llsendittosomeonespecialtome
#kidlycorrectforgrammars
#andopenforsuggestions
#thankyou