WATER AND FIRE

Shower of beauty,
Simple, cute and pretty
Facing him is a dream desire
A medicine that never expires

Never felt exhausted
She never felt tired
Her smile brings peace to my soul
Like water calming fire

Every time in good mood
She enjoyed her life entire
I feel happy for her
Like water calming fire

Have I seen her
I think not require
What I get from her thoughts
Is way more important
Then the outer beauty
That the world admires

As she is a blessing
There is no end to kindness
She aquire
Her smile brings peace to my sole
Like water calming fire..
Like water calming fire..😊

#review
#ansh2_4
#friendship

Dear folks, this is a translation of one famous poem of one famous poet into English.
Can you please review it and let me know, if it sounds correct, or does it contain enything weird, odd ?
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I like to feel that I'm not sick with you
I like to know that sickness yours is yours not mine
That heavy ball of earth won’t stray off from its course
Away from our footprints , fading in sunshine


I love that I could funny be
Bewildered, clumsy , not wordplaying
not turning red upon sleeves touching game
not turning pale when see you on your knees


I love to see you hugging someone else
Before my eyes , reposefully and calmly
Not sending me to fire glowing hell
To burn forever for not kissing me , my darling

I like that mentioning my name is not your habit
That tender name you don't utter day-and-night in vain
That no one's gonna sing Hallelujah on our wedding
In silence of the church, one sunny autumn day


Thank you for love, with all your heart and soul
That brings me peace at night, unconscious, unaware
Thank you for rare meetings if at all
So nice, That never in the moonlight do we stroll
So great that sun warms not us, soaring high elsewhere

So pity, that I am not sick with you
So bad, that sickness yours is yours not mine

#review
#friendship

WATER AND FIRE

Shower of beauty,
Simple, cute and pretty
Facing him is a dream desire
A medicine that never expires

Never felt exhausted
She never felt tired
Her smile brings peace to my soul
Like water calming fire

Every time in good mood
She enjoyed her life entire
I feel happy for her
Like water calming fire

Have I seen her
I think not require
What I get from her thoughts
Is way more important
Then the outer beauty
That the world admires

As she is a blessing
There is no end to kindness
She aquire
Her smile brings peace to my sole
Like water calming fire..
Like water calming fire..😊

#review
#ansh2_4
#friendship