A Good Night Whisper

I really don't know
where to start
Maybe I'm dumb
or way too smart

I'm not a great artist
if writing's an art
But every line I write
comes straight from my heart

Maybe my words
make no sense
Or they're carefully woven
to keep the suspense

I wanted to write
a piece for you
Something that's pure
and very true

If you're wondering
the reason for all I said
It's to put a smile on the face
of the person going to bed

So now my dear
please sleep tight
After I wish
a final good night.

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Knock knock
please let me in
I said it loud
In order to begin

I was ready to confess
With all my heart
Wrapped in the warmth of
Writing's art

I tried my best
To make a rhyme
But faltered a little
in the initial lines

So I started typing
Lines too easy
Neither so classy
nor too cheesy

But I kept on writing
For long enough
Before finding new words
Became too tough

I finally found
alo lovely wuote to end
And hurriedly pressed
The button 'send'

I expected a reply
Which was gentle and true
Something that would
Contain words of love for me too

Exactly 30 minutes later
The ticks turned blue
Something that was like
My dream come true

But all of a sudden
Your dp was gone
Only after a message
' Shut Up You Moron'

What happened next
Almost anybody can tell
And I heard a deafening sound
My friend's call it my Love's death knell

So in the future
If we meet
Don't mention any of this
I repeat

Neither talk to me
about love
Because I can throw punches
From Right , Centre and Above

#poem #everyone #rvd #review

_~RVD_

Knock knock
please let me in
I said it loud
In order to begin

I was ready to confess
With all my heart
Wrapped in the warmth of
Writing's art

I tried my best
To make a rhyme
But faltered a little
in the initial lines

So I started typing
Lines too easy
Neither so classy
nor too cheesy

But I kept on writing
For long enough
Before finding new words
Became too tough

I finally found
a lovely quote to end
And hurriedly pressed
The button 'send'

I expected a reply
Which was gentle and true
Something that would
Contain words of love for me too

Exactly 30 minutes later
The ticks turned blue
Something that was like
My dream come true

But all of a sudden
Your dp was gone
Only after a message
' Shut Up You Moron'

What happened next
Almost anybody can tell
And I heard a deafening sound
My friend's call it my Love's death knell

So in the future
If we meet
Don't mention any of this
I repeat

Neither talk to me
about love
Because I can throw punches
From Right , Centre and Above

#poem #everyone #rvd #review

_~RVD_