TITLE: JOURNEY LOOP
A WOMEN OF AGE AROUND 70-80 YEARS WAS STANDING ON A PLATFORM OF AUTO RICKSHAW STAND. SHE WAS WAITING FOR A RICKSHAW WHICH WOULD TAKE TO HER NEXT DESTINATION. SHE HAD RAN FROM AN OLDAGE HOUSE, AS SHE HATED THE HOSPITALITY OFFERED BY THEM.
GRANNY HAD ALREADY CROSSED HER LIMITS OF LIFE. SHE HAD NO HOUSE TO GO. SHE WAS TIRED OF SWEATING UNDER THE 40^CELSIUS SUN OF NOW A DAYS. WHEN SHE WAS YOUNG, SHE HAD CONFRONTED USUALLY BELOW 35^CELSIUS SUN.
OLD WOMEN BADLY DESERVED A HOUSE NOW. SHE HAD A VERY POOR EARNING ONCE. SHE HAD A HECTIC LIFE AND THREE SONS. THOSE SONS WHO HAD ONCE ATE THE EARNINGS OF THEIR MOTHER HAD THROWN OUT HER FROM THEIR RESPECTIVE HOUSES TO A OLD, CHEAP OLD AGE HOME LATER. THOSE THREE HAD TURNED HEADACHE FOR HER FOR ALL THREE TENSES.
FINALLY A RICKSHAW CAME DOWN THE STREETS TO THE STAND, A YOUNG MAN AGED ABOUT 23-24 YEARS HAD DRIVEN THE RICKSHAW. HE SAW A GRANDMOTHER WHO WAS SWEATING HARD UNDER THE HOT SUN, DESPERATELY WAITING FOR SOME SHELTER.
HE THEN SMILING PICKED UP A BOTTLE FROM THE SIDE OF HIS SEAT AND GAVE IT TO OLD WOMEN TELLING, "GRANNY, TAKE A SEAT BEHIND ME. I THINK YOU ARE VERY THIRSTY OF THIS LIFE. I COULD READ YOUR MIND THAT YOU WANT SOME SHELTER." GRANNY'S FACE LIT LIKE LIGHTS AND SHE GAVE A BEAUTIFUL SMILE TO THE BOY AND ANSWERED, "THANK YOU MY CHILD A LOT". YOUNG MAN REPLIED, "COME WITH ME MY GRANNY, I WILL TAKE YOU TO MY HOME. THINK THAT IT IS YOUR OWN, YOU ARE SAME LIKE MY GRANNY, SHINING BRIGHTLY, BEING PROUD OF HER LIFE." OLD LADY SMILED AGAIN TO HIM AND THE RICKSHAW TOOK A RESTART AND SPEED ITSELF AND SUDDENLY IT VANISHED LEAVING BEHIND GLITTER OF STARS!
SAMHITH
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A WOMEN OF AGE AROUND 70-80 YEARS WAS STANDING ON A PLATFORM OF AUTO RICKSHAW STAND. SHE WAS WAITING FOR A RICKSHAW WHICH WOULD TAKE TO HER NEXT DESTINATION. SHE HAD RAN FROM AN OLDAGE HOUSE, AS SHE HATED THE HOSPITALITY OFFERED BY THEM.
GRANNY HAD ALREADY CROSSED HER LIMITS OF LIFE. SHE HAD NO HOUSE TO GO. SHE WAS TIRED OF SWEATING UNDER THE 40^CELSIUS SUN OF NOW A DAYS. WHEN SHE WAS YOUNG, SHE HAD CONFRONTED USUALLY BELOW 35^CELSIUS SUN.
OLD WOMEN BADLY DESERVED A HOUSE NOW. SHE HAD A VERY POOR EARNING ONCE. SHE HAD A HECTIC LIFE AND THREE SONS. THOSE SONS WHO HAD ONCE ATE THE EARNINGS OF THEIR MOTHER HAD THROWN OUT HER FROM THEIR RESPECTIVE HOUSES TO A OLD, CHEAP OLD AGE HOME LATER. THOSE THREE HAD TURNED HEADACHE FOR HER FOR ALL THREE TENSES.
FINALLY A RICKSHAW CAME DOWN THE STREETS TO THE STAND, A YOUNG MAN AGED ABOUT 23-24 YEARS HAD DRIVEN THE RICKSHAW. HE SAW A GRANDMOTHER WHO WAS SWEATING HARD UNDER THE HOT SUN, DESPERATELY WAITING FOR SOME SHELTER.
HE THEN SMILING PICKED UP A BOTTLE FROM THE SIDE OF HIS SEAT AND GAVE IT TO OLD WOMEN TELLING, "GRANNY, TAKE A SEAT BEHIND ME. I THINK YOU ARE VERY THIRSTY OF THIS LIFE. I COULD READ YOUR MIND THAT YOU WANT SOME SHELTER." GRANNY'S FACE LIT LIKE LIGHTS AND SHE GAVE A BEAUTIFUL SMILE TO THE BOY AND ANSWERED, "THANK YOU MY CHILD A LOT". YOUNG MAN REPLIED, "COME WITH ME MY GRANNY, I WILL TAKE YOU TO MY HOME. THINK THAT IT IS YOUR OWN, YOU ARE SAME LIKE MY GRANNY, SHINING BRIGHTLY, BEING PROUD OF HER LIFE." OLD LADY SMILED AGAIN TO HIM AND THE RICKSHAW TOOK A RESTART AND SPEED ITSELF AND SUDDENLY IT VANISHED LEAVING BEHIND GLITTER OF STARS!
SAMHITH
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Mysterious happenings were encountered at 3 am in Sofie’s city, Greenwood. On daily basis, murder was taking place at the same time, where the victims would be bisected into two parts, head a part and the body another.
This started when the serial killer dripped himself out of the prison a month before. Some say that it was suicide, not murder. But usually, how could anyone believe this fact? Could it be possible for any one to cut their own neck!
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TITLE: MURCIDE!
Sofie is a computer builder and a professional hacker. she too was very scared as she was alone in house and could be the next one to die! her parents were researchers and they had traveled to 'Green Plot Island' for a research. they were out since one and a half month. her parents were not able to connect to rest parts of the world as there was no signal out there in that abandoned island.
It was around past 2: 30 am. Countdown had already started for the next murder! Sofie in hurry, had rushed to all doors and windows of her house and closed them, and had Sat in her living room and was watching TV. About 20 minutes later, she heard a sound of glass being broken! It had come from kitchen. ‘Oh my god! same murderer’ she thought and ran towards bedroom and hid behind doors. Through a peep hole she saw the doors of kitchen open. A man with red shirt holding a long knife, entering room! he then slowly went in to living room. Suddenly, TV channel made a loud announcement that, “the time is three and you are going to die”. The killer turned towards the television screen, he saw a black and white hypnotizing circle rotating on the television screen. he then forgot all other things and began concentrating on the centre point of that weird circle. suddenly he came to stiff and still attention position and after three seconds he chopped his own neck! Sofie, instead of being terrorized by this incident, made a freaky grin!
One thing I left to mention was that all the murders left a common evidence that the victims where watching tv before they were dead!
Samhith
This started when the serial killer dripped himself out of the prison a month before. Some say that it was suicide, not murder. But usually, how could anyone believe this fact? Could it be possible for any one to cut their own neck!
#review #STORY #shortstory #subconsciousstory #pleasehelpinprovegrammar
TITLE: MURCIDE!
Sofie is a computer builder and a professional hacker. she too was very scared as she was alone in house and could be the next one to die! her parents were researchers and they had traveled to 'Green Plot Island' for a research. they were out since one and a half month. her parents were not able to connect to rest parts of the world as there was no signal out there in that abandoned island.
It was around past 2: 30 am. Countdown had already started for the next murder! Sofie in hurry, had rushed to all doors and windows of her house and closed them, and had Sat in her living room and was watching TV. About 20 minutes later, she heard a sound of glass being broken! It had come from kitchen. ‘Oh my god! same murderer’ she thought and ran towards bedroom and hid behind doors. Through a peep hole she saw the doors of kitchen open. A man with red shirt holding a long knife, entering room! he then slowly went in to living room. Suddenly, TV channel made a loud announcement that, “the time is three and you are going to die”. The killer turned towards the television screen, he saw a black and white hypnotizing circle rotating on the television screen. he then forgot all other things and began concentrating on the centre point of that weird circle. suddenly he came to stiff and still attention position and after three seconds he chopped his own neck! Sofie, instead of being terrorized by this incident, made a freaky grin!
One thing I left to mention was that all the murders left a common evidence that the victims where watching tv before they were dead!
Samhith
#REVIEW #STORY #shortstory #subconsciousstory #pleasehelpinprovegrammar
TITLE: BATTLE OF OMEGA
It was 2075 March 6. World was filled with absolute darkness. Jake, thought that it was approximately 9 pm as he had glanced his home clock just before he stepped the streets. He was totally tensed as he had missed his horror classes for a whole week.
I forgot to mention the schedule of life of the earth candidates in 2075.
It is like below,
*Wake at 6 pm night.
*go to warm up class at 7pm
*go to horror class at 9pm
*go to comedic class at 11pm
*go to anger class at 13pm
*go to pain class at 15pm
*go to sorrow class at 17pm
You may think that day is not mentioned any where because, in the battle of omega in year 2035, there was a fight between mercury and earth. Mercury aliens, launched a nuclear weapon on the earth, but, instead of weapon hitting the target, it hit the wrong one which was the big giant Jupiter. Enraged by this, Jupiter supported earth in the battle and launched a omega weapon on Mercury for total destruction. This weapon too, missed the target and went straight hitting the centre of the sun! Sun bursted with a huge Big Bang and due to impact, Mercury and Venus was destroyed and other left over planets being cutoff by the solar system is still moving without a orbit.
So, now the earth don't witness day!
Samhith
TITLE: BATTLE OF OMEGA
It was 2075 March 6. World was filled with absolute darkness. Jake, thought that it was approximately 9 pm as he had glanced his home clock just before he stepped the streets. He was totally tensed as he had missed his horror classes for a whole week.
I forgot to mention the schedule of life of the earth candidates in 2075.
It is like below,
*Wake at 6 pm night.
*go to warm up class at 7pm
*go to horror class at 9pm
*go to comedic class at 11pm
*go to anger class at 13pm
*go to pain class at 15pm
*go to sorrow class at 17pm
You may think that day is not mentioned any where because, in the battle of omega in year 2035, there was a fight between mercury and earth. Mercury aliens, launched a nuclear weapon on the earth, but, instead of weapon hitting the target, it hit the wrong one which was the big giant Jupiter. Enraged by this, Jupiter supported earth in the battle and launched a omega weapon on Mercury for total destruction. This weapon too, missed the target and went straight hitting the centre of the sun! Sun bursted with a huge Big Bang and due to impact, Mercury and Venus was destroyed and other left over planets being cutoff by the solar system is still moving without a orbit.
So, now the earth don't witness day!
Samhith