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Just write
If you write with rules
The rules rule you
If you write with intent
Intentions ruin you
If you write for something
That something is nothing
If you write for someone
That ain’t coming to your bed
If you write for yourself
It drowns your soul
So, write with the flow
The nature embraces you to death
Write what you see
Write what you feel
Not to be heard
Not to be seen
Just write to let your words flow
Along the souls that are flowing
Down the river of life
You write for those who believe
You write for those who perceive
What is hidden beyond the flesh
You write for those who need the light
Not everyone here is the follower of light
You just write without caring for rules
You just write what the soul feels
While escaping for the eternal place
Just write
If you write with rules
The rules rule you
If you write with intent
Intentions ruin you
If you write for something
That something is nothing
If you write for someone
That ain’t coming to your bed
If you write for yourself
It drowns your soul
So, write with the flow
The nature embraces you to death
Write what you see
Write what you feel
Not to be heard
Not to be seen
Just write to let your words flow
Along the souls that are flowing
Down the river of life
You write for those who believe
You write for those who perceive
What is hidden beyond the flesh
You write for those who need the light
Not everyone here is the follower of light
You just write without caring for rules
You just write what the soul feels
While escaping for the eternal place
Page through that book
To get to the nooks
That inspires that hooks
Book that ticket
To fly to the skies
In that little skit
Nurture the child
That comes as a joke
In a sea of scary faces
Reminisce not the past
Just to wallow in the plug
That doesn't help your soul
Aid your growth
With nothing but seeds
To get your harvest
Dance not in pressure
For you are not them
You are you.
© Favody
#review #poem #write
To get to the nooks
That inspires that hooks
Book that ticket
To fly to the skies
In that little skit
Nurture the child
That comes as a joke
In a sea of scary faces
Reminisce not the past
Just to wallow in the plug
That doesn't help your soul
Aid your growth
With nothing but seeds
To get your harvest
Dance not in pressure
For you are not them
You are you.
© Favody
#review #poem #write
She's a mother, a daughter,
She's brave, courageous,
Is She's feeble ? Helpless ?
No! It's you, your frame of mind,
Still let's her freedom to rescind!
She's not disabled,
Just the scenario made her existence confined,
Even in the century of 21st,
She's still defenseless over the set of your mind!
She never got the freedom, which a boy gets at his age,
So could you please let me know,
How She's guilty at every stage ?
Either She's LAXMI to NIRBHAYA and PRIYANAKA in 2019,
Nothing has changed,
Every single day, every single minute, nd in every single second,
She's molested, burnt and raped!
This act is plaintive enough,
We can't even think of,
Only a question I wanted to ask,
When she'll get rid of!
💯
-Gurpreet Bhatia
#guri #poetry #review #write
She's brave, courageous,
Is She's feeble ? Helpless ?
No! It's you, your frame of mind,
Still let's her freedom to rescind!
She's not disabled,
Just the scenario made her existence confined,
Even in the century of 21st,
She's still defenseless over the set of your mind!
She never got the freedom, which a boy gets at his age,
So could you please let me know,
How She's guilty at every stage ?
Either She's LAXMI to NIRBHAYA and PRIYANAKA in 2019,
Nothing has changed,
Every single day, every single minute, nd in every single second,
She's molested, burnt and raped!
This act is plaintive enough,
We can't even think of,
Only a question I wanted to ask,
When she'll get rid of!
💯
-Gurpreet Bhatia
#guri #poetry #review #write