🔴 Estimated Score for this Speaking sample is 6.5 to 7

🔴 Estimated Score for this Speaking sample is 6.5 to 7

🔴 Estimated Score for this Speaking sample is 6.5

🔴 Estimated Score for this Speaking sample is 7

#feedback

Vocabulary 6.5
Grammatical range and accuracy 5.5
Coherence and cohesion 5.5
Task response 6

You need to write with a pencil and your bubble diagram should be present.

There are quite few grammatical mistakes so you need to check the dictionary for every word or structure.

The main idea in each paragraph is clear but support is insufficient. You need to develop your support in a logical way.

نمونه رایتینگ های بچه ها روزهای جمعه تیرماه در پاسخ به سوال هفته قبل + #feedback 👆👆👆

#feedback

Vocabulary 7
Task response 7
Grammatical range and accuracy 6.5
Coherence and cohesion 6.5




Extreme climate
Are likely to attack
Have not been accustomed
Exceeds 50'c
Has effect on
Will lead to dehydration
Is changed 😳😳😳
pluses and minuses 😳😳😳
Increase the capacity of bearing problems....sounds Farsi

In first paragraph, 2 main supports are not separated. For example by first of all and secondly.

#advice
Try to minimise your introduction and conclusion, preferably keep them to 40 words and write longer body paragraphs.

🔴 نمونه رایتینگ نوشته شده توسط زبان آموزان کلاس روزهای جمعه - پرسش این هفته Cambridge 12 General Test 1 👆👆👆

🔴 Estimated Score for this Speaking sample is 6 to 6.5

🔴 Estimated Score for this Speaking sample is 6.5

🔴 Estimated Score for this Speaking sample 7 to 7.5