آموزش آیلتس (از فروردین 1395)
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کانال آموزش های روزانه آیلتس از 30 فروردین 1395
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Vocabulary 6.5
Grammatical range and accuracy 6.5
Coherence and cohesion 7
Task response 7

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You need to use a higher level vocabulary and try to include passive voice, conditionals and more complex sentences wherever possible. Try to have a more clear picture of the question on your mind and discuss only points mentioned in the question and say nothing more. Don't include any new idea at the end of the main paragraphs. Keep introduction short and write more creative hooks. Avoid unnecessary fixed structure in your conclusion. They won't do you any good