The cycle never ends
Light presides dark
Who dares close the blinds
Hiding the brilliant spark
Howl presides sight
Made my love a moonless night
Stole the brilliant crescent
The fierce one tracks by scent
Who shall bring back my knight
From the glow of blinding light
One who wishes his skin seared
Adieu,my love is dead
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Light presides dark
Who dares close the blinds
Hiding the brilliant spark
Howl presides sight
Made my love a moonless night
Stole the brilliant crescent
The fierce one tracks by scent
Who shall bring back my knight
From the glow of blinding light
One who wishes his skin seared
Adieu,my love is dead
#review #poetry #everyone
A World Apart
Chapter 5
After walking together with her for a while it felt like I had been walking with her forever and I wanted to keep walking with her forever. But she had to go, if anyone found her we both would be in trouble. So I lead her to a gate back to her own dimension.
When I told her that she should go she refused point blank, saying no one cared for her in her own world and she wanted to die anyways so she won't go back. After failing to convince her about her how important she must be to her people I take her to Sinzo, my best friend to help me with her.
"This is Sinzo, my best friend, my brother, my everything." I introduce him
"Cut the crap bro, what do you want me to do." He asks me knowing full well that I'm oiling him to try and get his help, Naoko smiles a little, my heart jumps again.
After scolding me for a while in private he arranges for her a place to stay with a condition that she should stay hidden and wouldn't try to talk to anyone else.
At the end of the day I leave her, excited to meet her again the next day. When I go to her she is dressed in a magi rob, our traditional dress.
I take her out with me because she wished to see a dragon, she has never seen one and I couldn't tell her a no! I take her to Azure worried that Azure would definitely insult me infront of her but by some magic he didn't. Infact he didn't just let her touch him, he also gave us both a ride without throwing us even for a single time.
"I believe you are the one casting spell around here" she chuckled and then hugged me. I froze in surprise first but then gladly hugged her back.
"This has been the happiest I have been in so long, thanks" she says teary eyed.
"Thanks for everything. At this point I'm not even worried if you are a serial killer, I'm just happy to have met you" she says jokingly. I chuckle and scratch my head
"I assure you I'm not" I tell her crossing my heart
"That's what a serial killer would say" she says looking at me almost seriously. I look at her confused, worried that maybe she means what she is telling me
"But if you are a serial killer, you gotta be the cutest" she whispers in my ear and then goes on playing with Azure. I stand there stunned, my heart beating like a drum.
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Chapter 5
After walking together with her for a while it felt like I had been walking with her forever and I wanted to keep walking with her forever. But she had to go, if anyone found her we both would be in trouble. So I lead her to a gate back to her own dimension.
When I told her that she should go she refused point blank, saying no one cared for her in her own world and she wanted to die anyways so she won't go back. After failing to convince her about her how important she must be to her people I take her to Sinzo, my best friend to help me with her.
"This is Sinzo, my best friend, my brother, my everything." I introduce him
"Cut the crap bro, what do you want me to do." He asks me knowing full well that I'm oiling him to try and get his help, Naoko smiles a little, my heart jumps again.
After scolding me for a while in private he arranges for her a place to stay with a condition that she should stay hidden and wouldn't try to talk to anyone else.
At the end of the day I leave her, excited to meet her again the next day. When I go to her she is dressed in a magi rob, our traditional dress.
I take her out with me because she wished to see a dragon, she has never seen one and I couldn't tell her a no! I take her to Azure worried that Azure would definitely insult me infront of her but by some magic he didn't. Infact he didn't just let her touch him, he also gave us both a ride without throwing us even for a single time.
"I believe you are the one casting spell around here" she chuckled and then hugged me. I froze in surprise first but then gladly hugged her back.
"This has been the happiest I have been in so long, thanks" she says teary eyed.
"Thanks for everything. At this point I'm not even worried if you are a serial killer, I'm just happy to have met you" she says jokingly. I chuckle and scratch my head
"I assure you I'm not" I tell her crossing my heart
"That's what a serial killer would say" she says looking at me almost seriously. I look at her confused, worried that maybe she means what she is telling me
"But if you are a serial killer, you gotta be the cutest" she whispers in my ear and then goes on playing with Azure. I stand there stunned, my heart beating like a drum.
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What do you live for
passion, purpose or reason
dulling on a wooden desk
fabricated and fissioned
clueless about your mission
you burnout just to earn
a few bucks just to rub
in the face of someone
to show you are better
though are you?
When your success
is measured in numbers
And your insides
are encumbered
working like a slave
you call it life
I call it slight
because what's the use
to live like you are a refuse
I'd rather call it a ruse
And then you boast
about your trophies and roost
about your lawn and garden
but your insides are hardened
By the grueling of this world
can you take this anymore, this hurt
Whether you decide to step out
or perhaps you'd decide to feel
But only you can have the zeal
To break the routine and find
the meaning of this life benign
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passion, purpose or reason
dulling on a wooden desk
fabricated and fissioned
clueless about your mission
you burnout just to earn
a few bucks just to rub
in the face of someone
to show you are better
though are you?
When your success
is measured in numbers
And your insides
are encumbered
working like a slave
you call it life
I call it slight
because what's the use
to live like you are a refuse
I'd rather call it a ruse
And then you boast
about your trophies and roost
about your lawn and garden
but your insides are hardened
By the grueling of this world
can you take this anymore, this hurt
Whether you decide to step out
or perhaps you'd decide to feel
But only you can have the zeal
To break the routine and find
the meaning of this life benign
#everyone #tm #poetry #review
The sky is a misery
So close yet unreachable
Her beauty is immortal, it can never fade
The sight of her will calm the most turbulent sea
Everly pregnant
With many treasures hidden in her womb
The sky is a celestial sea
Covered with heavenly Clouds
She floats like an abandoned ship
Blue, gray and white are her favorite colors
She's like an empty surface
Where birds merrily fly
She is a mother to many
The sun, the stars
the moon, the rainbows, and the rain all come from her womb
He next moves can never be predicted as her mood fluctuates like a faulty bulb
Her smile brings Serenity
She's gloomy when she's sad
When she's angry, she roars and zaps the jolt in a flash, striking us with thunderstorm
She is invaluable
Staring at her you can lose sight of reality
He beauty is an inspiration to many
She is always looking at us
The sky a place Is to let your imagination run wild.
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So close yet unreachable
Her beauty is immortal, it can never fade
The sight of her will calm the most turbulent sea
Everly pregnant
With many treasures hidden in her womb
The sky is a celestial sea
Covered with heavenly Clouds
She floats like an abandoned ship
Blue, gray and white are her favorite colors
She's like an empty surface
Where birds merrily fly
She is a mother to many
The sun, the stars
the moon, the rainbows, and the rain all come from her womb
He next moves can never be predicted as her mood fluctuates like a faulty bulb
Her smile brings Serenity
She's gloomy when she's sad
When she's angry, she roars and zaps the jolt in a flash, striking us with thunderstorm
She is invaluable
Staring at her you can lose sight of reality
He beauty is an inspiration to many
She is always looking at us
The sky a place Is to let your imagination run wild.
#everyone #NA #poetry #review #
"I am fine.."
Living miles away,
You assure the loved.
"I am fine.."
Driving across the highway,
You expect the death.
"I am fine.."
Walking past the gateway,
You assure the scared.
"I am fine.."
Keeping tap on the prey,
You extend the death.
"I am fine.."
Agonising tears pave way,
You assure the kindred.
"I am fine.."
Working across the subway,
You question the death.
"I am fine.."
Operating on the decay,
You assure the worried.
"I am fine.."
Fighting for the slayed,
You dispose the death.
"I am fine.."
Holding onto life midway,
You assure the vexed.
"I am fine.."
Watching misery all day,
You embrace the death.
We all say we are fine. But are we? Or it's just that those feelings are submerged deep within to even embrace it. This poem is about the life circumstances where feelings of anxiety, fear, agony or low self-confidence take over our mind. It lets us hold on to those deep thoughts in a cob web of deep memories.
I am fine
By #suan
#poem #reality #life #lifestyle #psychological
#review #everyone
Living miles away,
You assure the loved.
"I am fine.."
Driving across the highway,
You expect the death.
"I am fine.."
Walking past the gateway,
You assure the scared.
"I am fine.."
Keeping tap on the prey,
You extend the death.
"I am fine.."
Agonising tears pave way,
You assure the kindred.
"I am fine.."
Working across the subway,
You question the death.
"I am fine.."
Operating on the decay,
You assure the worried.
"I am fine.."
Fighting for the slayed,
You dispose the death.
"I am fine.."
Holding onto life midway,
You assure the vexed.
"I am fine.."
Watching misery all day,
You embrace the death.
We all say we are fine. But are we? Or it's just that those feelings are submerged deep within to even embrace it. This poem is about the life circumstances where feelings of anxiety, fear, agony or low self-confidence take over our mind. It lets us hold on to those deep thoughts in a cob web of deep memories.
I am fine
By #suan
#poem #reality #life #lifestyle #psychological
#review #everyone
Hello world,
I know it's hard to deal with life during this lockdown but for a moment sit back and think about the people in Kashmir, Syria, Afghanistan. Think about the Uighur Muslims,kashmiri youth( which is being killed for no reason but just for the quote unquote national security).
Where's UN? And other Muslims out there posting food meanwhile the Muslims of Kashmir, Afghanistan, China and elsewhere are swinging between life and death EVERYDAY!
I don't care if it doesn't sound neutral to all of you but just keep your self in their shoes. But. But.
That's impossible to do. No one can imagine what they are suffering and going through.
There has not been 4g restored in Kashmir. And the communication is restored in specific areas of Kashmir only. Communication and internet is snapped in the valley since 5 August 2019.
During this auspicious month of Ramadan, there in Afghanistan during the time of iftar they are being bombed. People of Afghanistan have no surety whether they will be alive the next moment or not. The mosques are being bombed and a handful of people die everyday, innocent!
China harvests organs of Uighur Muslims for treating patients of Corona virus.
Is this what's prevailing through the globe?
Is this what's called peace?
It brings tears to my eyes!
Feels no more than like a sad movie that's about to end, but it is REALITY! This is what's happening around the world and we are being deprived of what's happening around with our people. Where is the loophole? In our journalism, people, governance, or what?
.
.
.
If there anything that may have hurt your feelings, I am not sorry!
I think you all need to know this.
May peace be with you.
#review
I know it's hard to deal with life during this lockdown but for a moment sit back and think about the people in Kashmir, Syria, Afghanistan. Think about the Uighur Muslims,kashmiri youth( which is being killed for no reason but just for the quote unquote national security).
Where's UN? And other Muslims out there posting food meanwhile the Muslims of Kashmir, Afghanistan, China and elsewhere are swinging between life and death EVERYDAY!
I don't care if it doesn't sound neutral to all of you but just keep your self in their shoes. But. But.
That's impossible to do. No one can imagine what they are suffering and going through.
There has not been 4g restored in Kashmir. And the communication is restored in specific areas of Kashmir only. Communication and internet is snapped in the valley since 5 August 2019.
During this auspicious month of Ramadan, there in Afghanistan during the time of iftar they are being bombed. People of Afghanistan have no surety whether they will be alive the next moment or not. The mosques are being bombed and a handful of people die everyday, innocent!
China harvests organs of Uighur Muslims for treating patients of Corona virus.
Is this what's prevailing through the globe?
Is this what's called peace?
It brings tears to my eyes!
Feels no more than like a sad movie that's about to end, but it is REALITY! This is what's happening around the world and we are being deprived of what's happening around with our people. Where is the loophole? In our journalism, people, governance, or what?
.
.
.
If there anything that may have hurt your feelings, I am not sorry!
I think you all need to know this.
May peace be with you.
#review
Two friends on the tour
Getting absolutely bored
Found a man by the side of road
wanted to help, thought was a chore
Helped him to his home
In return wanted no more
but for him to be safe
but they were a bad case
The man gave them a ring
He had his arm in a sling
One of the friends cringed
The prospect seemed to stink
They left his home; it was already late
The night was falling fast for date
A horrendous cry filled up with grate
The friends were brave they turned to face
A cold breeze blew and swept them away
Their feet froze seeing the shadows grey
One of them cried what the hell, let's pray!
But the other one knew it's only dismay
One of them knew what it was about
He had heard stories, so he chanted loud
Take me away and leave him behind
I pray to the grisly soul of thine
Are you out of your mind to say that loud
If you are going to hell then I'm too hell bound
the other one said looking around
and he too repeated the prayer loud
You don't understand you fool I knew
I was cursed and for this i grew
I should have warned you my life was askew
I can't loose you, you are one of few
So can't I said the other
You are my best freind, my brother
I don't know but I'd know later rather
But let's run now we are being smothered
Through the twisted figure emerged a man
They saw him before but now he looked insane
Two friends ready to give up their lives
What a sweet story to come by
I was just testing you back then
when you helped me home the minute gone
Is your friendship weak or strong
I found it flows quite deep in your veins
I've needed a man to fulfill my ritual
A man i could slay in the brutal
and will live for over an eternity
once again this time alacrity
He raised his hand and asked
choose among you, who will pass
one will have to choose to die
the other one will leave here alive
The friends looked at each other with fright
chiming in at the same time
Either both or none will die
Who do you think you are, grumpy pie
One of the friends knew it was his fate to die
He was born for that he can't deny
His destiny was this since the first cry
that he would be gone to a evil so sly
But the other one had stepped up high
We are both going together, don't cry
and they charged on the twisted man with might
the man cast a spell that threw them behind
they both died their souls rose
white and glorious they came close
Fulfilling the prophecy for they were chose
to end the evil that lurks in close
Has taken billions of life of people
Of friends who were fake and cripple
But one day true friendship was supposed to end
His terror, his life and his reign
And hence the friends saved everyone's life
He made a mistake he can't deny
He tried to part truest of friends
But friendship is a feeling that will remain
In the tombstone it was engraved
the two friends died together and brave
And in the heaven they are together to rave
Friendship is path only made for brave
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Getting absolutely bored
Found a man by the side of road
wanted to help, thought was a chore
Helped him to his home
In return wanted no more
but for him to be safe
but they were a bad case
The man gave them a ring
He had his arm in a sling
One of the friends cringed
The prospect seemed to stink
They left his home; it was already late
The night was falling fast for date
A horrendous cry filled up with grate
The friends were brave they turned to face
A cold breeze blew and swept them away
Their feet froze seeing the shadows grey
One of them cried what the hell, let's pray!
But the other one knew it's only dismay
One of them knew what it was about
He had heard stories, so he chanted loud
Take me away and leave him behind
I pray to the grisly soul of thine
Are you out of your mind to say that loud
If you are going to hell then I'm too hell bound
the other one said looking around
and he too repeated the prayer loud
You don't understand you fool I knew
I was cursed and for this i grew
I should have warned you my life was askew
I can't loose you, you are one of few
So can't I said the other
You are my best freind, my brother
I don't know but I'd know later rather
But let's run now we are being smothered
Through the twisted figure emerged a man
They saw him before but now he looked insane
Two friends ready to give up their lives
What a sweet story to come by
I was just testing you back then
when you helped me home the minute gone
Is your friendship weak or strong
I found it flows quite deep in your veins
I've needed a man to fulfill my ritual
A man i could slay in the brutal
and will live for over an eternity
once again this time alacrity
He raised his hand and asked
choose among you, who will pass
one will have to choose to die
the other one will leave here alive
The friends looked at each other with fright
chiming in at the same time
Either both or none will die
Who do you think you are, grumpy pie
One of the friends knew it was his fate to die
He was born for that he can't deny
His destiny was this since the first cry
that he would be gone to a evil so sly
But the other one had stepped up high
We are both going together, don't cry
and they charged on the twisted man with might
the man cast a spell that threw them behind
they both died their souls rose
white and glorious they came close
Fulfilling the prophecy for they were chose
to end the evil that lurks in close
Has taken billions of life of people
Of friends who were fake and cripple
But one day true friendship was supposed to end
His terror, his life and his reign
And hence the friends saved everyone's life
He made a mistake he can't deny
He tried to part truest of friends
But friendship is a feeling that will remain
In the tombstone it was engraved
the two friends died together and brave
And in the heaven they are together to rave
Friendship is path only made for brave
#review #poetry #tm #everyone
It was almost 12 and I woke up listening to the creaking sound of the wooden chair going to-and-fro and to my surprise she was sitting on it with her eyes still closed. I freaked out at once but then somehow gathered the courage and got out of the bed, went to her and as soon as I placed my hand on her frozen cold hand her eyes opened, red as blood and she jumped on me with her mouth wide open. As she grasped my neck with her teeth the lamp on the table fell and bang!!, I woke up with my blood running cold and me cursing the day I let her stay for the night which turned into a never ending one.
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Vignette
It’s half past midnight
Blinds shut, crickets chirp, no ray of any light
Darkness is imprisoning me,
Cool breeze caressing my face,
Although a little too cold and a little too biting for my taste
And I realize as I start slipping into the oblivion
The darkness is absorbing me,
I have become subliminal
I am not alone in this hell-hole of a place,
My mind is getting the hold of me
And I’m tied tight like a shoelace
I scream, but I stop dead
Oh dear, don’t you remember what the doctor said?
It’s all in my head,
That’s what he said
But then why does this feel so real
This mind and soul consumption?
I can’t remember what it read on my prescription
My brain is scattered,
I feel as lost Alice,
And as crazy as the Mad Hatter.
#poetry #kt #review
It’s half past midnight
Blinds shut, crickets chirp, no ray of any light
Darkness is imprisoning me,
Cool breeze caressing my face,
Although a little too cold and a little too biting for my taste
And I realize as I start slipping into the oblivion
The darkness is absorbing me,
I have become subliminal
I am not alone in this hell-hole of a place,
My mind is getting the hold of me
And I’m tied tight like a shoelace
I scream, but I stop dead
Oh dear, don’t you remember what the doctor said?
It’s all in my head,
That’s what he said
But then why does this feel so real
This mind and soul consumption?
I can’t remember what it read on my prescription
My brain is scattered,
I feel as lost Alice,
And as crazy as the Mad Hatter.
#poetry #kt #review
LIFE IS JOY
DONT ASK WHY
LIHE IS WOW
DONT ASK HOW
LIFE IS PLAY
DONT STUCK IN ONE WAY
LIFE IS BLOCKBLUSTER FILM
DONT BE CRITICS AND SPOIL FILM
#Review # Poetry # MAHADEV HAR
DONT ASK WHY
LIHE IS WOW
DONT ASK HOW
LIFE IS PLAY
DONT STUCK IN ONE WAY
LIFE IS BLOCKBLUSTER FILM
DONT BE CRITICS AND SPOIL FILM
#Review # Poetry # MAHADEV HAR
The one whom I dream off,
The one for whom I fight with myself,
Although I know he can never be mine,
Then also I always remember him in all my prayers..
#review
The one for whom I fight with myself,
Although I know he can never be mine,
Then also I always remember him in all my prayers..
#review
It's tale from some of my previous life
A Portal unlatched, he entered before my sight
A body covered in blood and face in pain
He tried to stood up and his hard work was in vain
Aristocratic he seems but life is never fair
I wanted no trouble but couldn't leave him there
I felt like, he is here to steal my dreams
Smiling and crossing some different realms
He teases, laughs and then he shouts
Irritated I was and my mind in doubts
Before him, My life was never been so alive
Now my Days are glorious and charmer the nights
Amusing days took no long to flew
suddenly he was gone, nowhere to be seen
Confused I was, what's wrong with rights
Again, Days were boring and colder the nights
I found myself next to that door
Hoping someday again that portal will roar
Tears were sliding and bleeding internally
Sitting in cold, waited for eternity
Still no sight, I cried little more
That stupid portal never roared
Wiped those tears, I was determined
I placed my foot on that dangling threshold that shine
A sharp pain raised inside my heart
It took my heart beats and threw me apart
A cracked, I heard inside my chest
It was time for me, for eternal rest
I was about to close my eyes
The light erupted and he smiles
Darkness flew and night gleamed
And I still feel like..
He was here to steal my dreams
#vivektavinita #poem #Review
A Portal unlatched, he entered before my sight
A body covered in blood and face in pain
He tried to stood up and his hard work was in vain
Aristocratic he seems but life is never fair
I wanted no trouble but couldn't leave him there
I felt like, he is here to steal my dreams
Smiling and crossing some different realms
He teases, laughs and then he shouts
Irritated I was and my mind in doubts
Before him, My life was never been so alive
Now my Days are glorious and charmer the nights
Amusing days took no long to flew
suddenly he was gone, nowhere to be seen
Confused I was, what's wrong with rights
Again, Days were boring and colder the nights
I found myself next to that door
Hoping someday again that portal will roar
Tears were sliding and bleeding internally
Sitting in cold, waited for eternity
Still no sight, I cried little more
That stupid portal never roared
Wiped those tears, I was determined
I placed my foot on that dangling threshold that shine
A sharp pain raised inside my heart
It took my heart beats and threw me apart
A cracked, I heard inside my chest
It was time for me, for eternal rest
I was about to close my eyes
The light erupted and he smiles
Darkness flew and night gleamed
And I still feel like..
He was here to steal my dreams
#vivektavinita #poem #Review
Lost in her thoughts I saw a girl,
With a bright smile & hairs with curl.
Biting on her nails god knows the reason why?
Logic of the genius with twist of a fey.
Knowing everything yet staying on the ground,
Felt innocence in her eyes and care in her sound.
Determination is in her blood, as far as you could see.
You can try to chase her but it's not possible for thee.
You can try to compete her but you'll never ever win!
Blessed with a beautiful heart and soul she'll always make you keen.
Understand a fact that she's always there to help,
To make you do the right things sometimes she may yelp!
But there's nothing but concern in her voice,
You'd wish to be like her if you had a choice.
When she is around laughter is inevitable,
If you get her keep her close cause she is unforgettable.
#review #everyone #tm #poetry
With a bright smile & hairs with curl.
Biting on her nails god knows the reason why?
Logic of the genius with twist of a fey.
Knowing everything yet staying on the ground,
Felt innocence in her eyes and care in her sound.
Determination is in her blood, as far as you could see.
You can try to chase her but it's not possible for thee.
You can try to compete her but you'll never ever win!
Blessed with a beautiful heart and soul she'll always make you keen.
Understand a fact that she's always there to help,
To make you do the right things sometimes she may yelp!
But there's nothing but concern in her voice,
You'd wish to be like her if you had a choice.
When she is around laughter is inevitable,
If you get her keep her close cause she is unforgettable.
#review #everyone #tm #poetry
A girl jolly is cycling with fast speed, so fast that if the broker brings the bark, it falls straight down and shuts fast, all move away
The same way, a car is coming from the other side with a fast speed, which a boy (Mike) is driving, music is playing in his car in a fast manner, he is driving the car calmly.
As he turns his car to the other side, his car collides with Jolly's bicycle. And the jolly falls away Only then does the crowd gather
Jolly does not get hurt much, he gets up early, so Mike gets out of his car and sees that there is no damage to his car.
Shouting jolly You broke my cycle, how will I reach college now Oh no, all the pages of my report are shattered, what will I do to answer my teacher?
Hey wow mistake you have not seen such a big car
Wow what's up Look, look at these comedies They are saying the mistake is ours while they were driving the car
See you don't know who you're talking to
Yes, I know, from a person who did not see a bicycle and broke my bicycle
Look Enough of you, get my cycle fixed
I am
Yes, you Look, you are voicing more (Mike) If you did not fix my cycle ??
So, what will you do ??
Me, then she picks up a stone in her hand and kills it in her car, which breaks the glass in front of the car.
#review #everyone #story
#rosy
This is my first story. this is not complete yet. I hope you all are enjoying this and give suggestion to improve my story
The same way, a car is coming from the other side with a fast speed, which a boy (Mike) is driving, music is playing in his car in a fast manner, he is driving the car calmly.
As he turns his car to the other side, his car collides with Jolly's bicycle. And the jolly falls away Only then does the crowd gather
Jolly does not get hurt much, he gets up early, so Mike gets out of his car and sees that there is no damage to his car.
Shouting jolly You broke my cycle, how will I reach college now Oh no, all the pages of my report are shattered, what will I do to answer my teacher?
Hey wow mistake you have not seen such a big car
Wow what's up Look, look at these comedies They are saying the mistake is ours while they were driving the car
See you don't know who you're talking to
Yes, I know, from a person who did not see a bicycle and broke my bicycle
Look Enough of you, get my cycle fixed
I am
Yes, you Look, you are voicing more (Mike) If you did not fix my cycle ??
So, what will you do ??
Me, then she picks up a stone in her hand and kills it in her car, which breaks the glass in front of the car.
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This is my first story. this is not complete yet. I hope you all are enjoying this and give suggestion to improve my story
A life unwritten (a fictional story)
One rare day,
Lost in her thoughts I saw a girl,
With a bright smile & hairs with curl.
Biting on her nails God knows the reason?
“Been in love?” I asked
“Yes” she replied hastily.
“With how many people?” i asked with an interrogatory tone.
“I don’t remember really. I can count if you ask. But there will be someone missing in the list. I have fallen in love with people on train, bookshop, cafeteria and beach....
Huh heavy breath escaped throught my lungs. "Its fine I replied with a fake smile"
Oh am sorry,I forgot my manners, stretched out my hand..... I am similoluwa, I stay very close to the government resident, a rock hight sight away from here, its my seventh mouths in this city and honestly I haven't found any gorgeous lady around since I got here, I was just about to come into conclusion "Non never ever exist here" till I came out on a drive and meet you: (giggle) She shook back, saying I am "No one" and I don't disclose my identity to strangers. I stood dumbfounded, struggling to find words,her beauty won't let speak, I raved about her (glowing skin, dimple, gap teeth, dark eye, hairy skin) beauty. Then she left in her Range Rover (L405) 2019 model
Insulted and humiliated, I felt my tears threatening to spill over. I turned back and fled.
Upon returning home, with the insult fresh on my mind, I told myself, ‘I must make it in life too.’.
However, a few days later, it occurred to me that the lady was probably upset about something else and that maybe I had simply chosen the wrong time and date that day January 7, 2020. So for couple of weeks I have been visiting that same street with no doubtful mind "we will meet again". But till date I have never seen this lady shadow not to lady talk of her whole self.
I felt like i was in a Nollywood movie and was enchanted by the unexplained mystery of life. A few kind words and encouragement to myself; if I'd never met her, or perhaps I did not have a word with her or perhaps I never shook hands with her or perhaps the way I dressed ...... Many unanswered perhaps; It was a life unwritten experience for me
✍🏿TheSimiloluwa
(The End)
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One rare day,
Lost in her thoughts I saw a girl,
With a bright smile & hairs with curl.
Biting on her nails God knows the reason?
“Been in love?” I asked
“Yes” she replied hastily.
“With how many people?” i asked with an interrogatory tone.
“I don’t remember really. I can count if you ask. But there will be someone missing in the list. I have fallen in love with people on train, bookshop, cafeteria and beach....
Huh heavy breath escaped throught my lungs. "Its fine I replied with a fake smile"
Oh am sorry,I forgot my manners, stretched out my hand..... I am similoluwa, I stay very close to the government resident, a rock hight sight away from here, its my seventh mouths in this city and honestly I haven't found any gorgeous lady around since I got here, I was just about to come into conclusion "Non never ever exist here" till I came out on a drive and meet you: (giggle) She shook back, saying I am "No one" and I don't disclose my identity to strangers. I stood dumbfounded, struggling to find words,her beauty won't let speak, I raved about her (glowing skin, dimple, gap teeth, dark eye, hairy skin) beauty. Then she left in her Range Rover (L405) 2019 model
Insulted and humiliated, I felt my tears threatening to spill over. I turned back and fled.
Upon returning home, with the insult fresh on my mind, I told myself, ‘I must make it in life too.’.
However, a few days later, it occurred to me that the lady was probably upset about something else and that maybe I had simply chosen the wrong time and date that day January 7, 2020. So for couple of weeks I have been visiting that same street with no doubtful mind "we will meet again". But till date I have never seen this lady shadow not to lady talk of her whole self.
I felt like i was in a Nollywood movie and was enchanted by the unexplained mystery of life. A few kind words and encouragement to myself; if I'd never met her, or perhaps I did not have a word with her or perhaps I never shook hands with her or perhaps the way I dressed ...... Many unanswered perhaps; It was a life unwritten experience for me
✍🏿TheSimiloluwa
(The End)
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Looking at the violet sky
Where there is nothing to shine
My moon is been missing for days
And My world is now buried in lies
I don't want to be so hopeless
But something is clutching on me like vice
It's been hard and going to be forever
I can neither say and nor can hide
No matter how dark it's around me
Since my world shines in my eyes
Look at the shimmering sky
I guess my moon is back in my life
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Where there is nothing to shine
My moon is been missing for days
And My world is now buried in lies
I don't want to be so hopeless
But something is clutching on me like vice
It's been hard and going to be forever
I can neither say and nor can hide
No matter how dark it's around me
Since my world shines in my eyes
Look at the shimmering sky
I guess my moon is back in my life
#vivektavinita #Review #poem