@PensivePost #writing

What does it take to write so emotionally?
Oh nothing much, actually.
Take a look at a stabbed wound from within
Feel the complex ways it tingles you
And put it all out on an app
Without your real name.

#Review #AmyWrites #writing

I live in a world were the sun rules over all
Huum! Haa! rules over all
He'll give you his mark just right after you are born
Huum! Haa! right after you are born
His mark is like lava he'll send it deep down your gall
Huum! Haa! deep down your gall

I live in a world were the sun rules day and night
Huum! Haa! rules day and night
He'll take the moon's glory he won't even let it a smile
Huum! Haa! let it a smile

He scorched the trees and mountains with his too much light
Huum! Haa! his too much light
Grow tall to me and take more food, he told the trees
Huum! Haa! he told the trees
And to the mountains, he said come to me and I'll give you lava for free
Huum! Haa! lava for free.


#prompt #Tohr #poetry?
#Writing about the sun as though I hate it
#review