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Vignette
It’s half past midnight
Blinds shut, crickets chirp, no ray of any light
Darkness is imprisoning me,
Cool breeze caressing my face,
Although a little too cold and a little too biting for my taste
And I realize as I start slipping into the oblivion
The darkness is absorbing me,
I have become subliminal
I am not alone in this hell-hole of a place,
My mind is getting the hold of me
And I’m tied tight like a shoelace
I scream, but I stop dead
Oh dear, don’t you remember what the doctor said?
It’s all in my head,
That’s what he said
But then why does this feel so real
This mind and soul consumption?
I can’t remember what it read on my prescription
My brain is scattered,
I feel as lost Alice,
And as crazy as the Mad Hatter.
#poetry #kt #review
It’s half past midnight
Blinds shut, crickets chirp, no ray of any light
Darkness is imprisoning me,
Cool breeze caressing my face,
Although a little too cold and a little too biting for my taste
And I realize as I start slipping into the oblivion
The darkness is absorbing me,
I have become subliminal
I am not alone in this hell-hole of a place,
My mind is getting the hold of me
And I’m tied tight like a shoelace
I scream, but I stop dead
Oh dear, don’t you remember what the doctor said?
It’s all in my head,
That’s what he said
But then why does this feel so real
This mind and soul consumption?
I can’t remember what it read on my prescription
My brain is scattered,
I feel as lost Alice,
And as crazy as the Mad Hatter.
#poetry #kt #review
LIFE IS JOY
DONT ASK WHY
LIHE IS WOW
DONT ASK HOW
LIFE IS PLAY
DONT STUCK IN ONE WAY
LIFE IS BLOCKBLUSTER FILM
DONT BE CRITICS AND SPOIL FILM
#Review # Poetry # MAHADEV HAR
DONT ASK WHY
LIHE IS WOW
DONT ASK HOW
LIFE IS PLAY
DONT STUCK IN ONE WAY
LIFE IS BLOCKBLUSTER FILM
DONT BE CRITICS AND SPOIL FILM
#Review # Poetry # MAHADEV HAR
The one whom I dream off,
The one for whom I fight with myself,
Although I know he can never be mine,
Then also I always remember him in all my prayers..
#review
The one for whom I fight with myself,
Although I know he can never be mine,
Then also I always remember him in all my prayers..
#review
It's tale from some of my previous life
A Portal unlatched, he entered before my sight
A body covered in blood and face in pain
He tried to stood up and his hard work was in vain
Aristocratic he seems but life is never fair
I wanted no trouble but couldn't leave him there
I felt like, he is here to steal my dreams
Smiling and crossing some different realms
He teases, laughs and then he shouts
Irritated I was and my mind in doubts
Before him, My life was never been so alive
Now my Days are glorious and charmer the nights
Amusing days took no long to flew
suddenly he was gone, nowhere to be seen
Confused I was, what's wrong with rights
Again, Days were boring and colder the nights
I found myself next to that door
Hoping someday again that portal will roar
Tears were sliding and bleeding internally
Sitting in cold, waited for eternity
Still no sight, I cried little more
That stupid portal never roared
Wiped those tears, I was determined
I placed my foot on that dangling threshold that shine
A sharp pain raised inside my heart
It took my heart beats and threw me apart
A cracked, I heard inside my chest
It was time for me, for eternal rest
I was about to close my eyes
The light erupted and he smiles
Darkness flew and night gleamed
And I still feel like..
He was here to steal my dreams
#vivektavinita #poem #Review
A Portal unlatched, he entered before my sight
A body covered in blood and face in pain
He tried to stood up and his hard work was in vain
Aristocratic he seems but life is never fair
I wanted no trouble but couldn't leave him there
I felt like, he is here to steal my dreams
Smiling and crossing some different realms
He teases, laughs and then he shouts
Irritated I was and my mind in doubts
Before him, My life was never been so alive
Now my Days are glorious and charmer the nights
Amusing days took no long to flew
suddenly he was gone, nowhere to be seen
Confused I was, what's wrong with rights
Again, Days were boring and colder the nights
I found myself next to that door
Hoping someday again that portal will roar
Tears were sliding and bleeding internally
Sitting in cold, waited for eternity
Still no sight, I cried little more
That stupid portal never roared
Wiped those tears, I was determined
I placed my foot on that dangling threshold that shine
A sharp pain raised inside my heart
It took my heart beats and threw me apart
A cracked, I heard inside my chest
It was time for me, for eternal rest
I was about to close my eyes
The light erupted and he smiles
Darkness flew and night gleamed
And I still feel like..
He was here to steal my dreams
#vivektavinita #poem #Review
Lost in her thoughts I saw a girl,
With a bright smile & hairs with curl.
Biting on her nails god knows the reason why?
Logic of the genius with twist of a fey.
Knowing everything yet staying on the ground,
Felt innocence in her eyes and care in her sound.
Determination is in her blood, as far as you could see.
You can try to chase her but it's not possible for thee.
You can try to compete her but you'll never ever win!
Blessed with a beautiful heart and soul she'll always make you keen.
Understand a fact that she's always there to help,
To make you do the right things sometimes she may yelp!
But there's nothing but concern in her voice,
You'd wish to be like her if you had a choice.
When she is around laughter is inevitable,
If you get her keep her close cause she is unforgettable.
#review #everyone #tm #poetry
With a bright smile & hairs with curl.
Biting on her nails god knows the reason why?
Logic of the genius with twist of a fey.
Knowing everything yet staying on the ground,
Felt innocence in her eyes and care in her sound.
Determination is in her blood, as far as you could see.
You can try to chase her but it's not possible for thee.
You can try to compete her but you'll never ever win!
Blessed with a beautiful heart and soul she'll always make you keen.
Understand a fact that she's always there to help,
To make you do the right things sometimes she may yelp!
But there's nothing but concern in her voice,
You'd wish to be like her if you had a choice.
When she is around laughter is inevitable,
If you get her keep her close cause she is unforgettable.
#review #everyone #tm #poetry
A girl jolly is cycling with fast speed, so fast that if the broker brings the bark, it falls straight down and shuts fast, all move away
The same way, a car is coming from the other side with a fast speed, which a boy (Mike) is driving, music is playing in his car in a fast manner, he is driving the car calmly.
As he turns his car to the other side, his car collides with Jolly's bicycle. And the jolly falls away Only then does the crowd gather
Jolly does not get hurt much, he gets up early, so Mike gets out of his car and sees that there is no damage to his car.
Shouting jolly You broke my cycle, how will I reach college now Oh no, all the pages of my report are shattered, what will I do to answer my teacher?
Hey wow mistake you have not seen such a big car
Wow what's up Look, look at these comedies They are saying the mistake is ours while they were driving the car
See you don't know who you're talking to
Yes, I know, from a person who did not see a bicycle and broke my bicycle
Look Enough of you, get my cycle fixed
I am
Yes, you Look, you are voicing more (Mike) If you did not fix my cycle ??
So, what will you do ??
Me, then she picks up a stone in her hand and kills it in her car, which breaks the glass in front of the car.
#review #everyone #story
#rosy
This is my first story. this is not complete yet. I hope you all are enjoying this and give suggestion to improve my story
The same way, a car is coming from the other side with a fast speed, which a boy (Mike) is driving, music is playing in his car in a fast manner, he is driving the car calmly.
As he turns his car to the other side, his car collides with Jolly's bicycle. And the jolly falls away Only then does the crowd gather
Jolly does not get hurt much, he gets up early, so Mike gets out of his car and sees that there is no damage to his car.
Shouting jolly You broke my cycle, how will I reach college now Oh no, all the pages of my report are shattered, what will I do to answer my teacher?
Hey wow mistake you have not seen such a big car
Wow what's up Look, look at these comedies They are saying the mistake is ours while they were driving the car
See you don't know who you're talking to
Yes, I know, from a person who did not see a bicycle and broke my bicycle
Look Enough of you, get my cycle fixed
I am
Yes, you Look, you are voicing more (Mike) If you did not fix my cycle ??
So, what will you do ??
Me, then she picks up a stone in her hand and kills it in her car, which breaks the glass in front of the car.
#review #everyone #story
#rosy
This is my first story. this is not complete yet. I hope you all are enjoying this and give suggestion to improve my story
A life unwritten (a fictional story)
One rare day,
Lost in her thoughts I saw a girl,
With a bright smile & hairs with curl.
Biting on her nails God knows the reason?
“Been in love?” I asked
“Yes” she replied hastily.
“With how many people?” i asked with an interrogatory tone.
“I don’t remember really. I can count if you ask. But there will be someone missing in the list. I have fallen in love with people on train, bookshop, cafeteria and beach....
Huh heavy breath escaped throught my lungs. "Its fine I replied with a fake smile"
Oh am sorry,I forgot my manners, stretched out my hand..... I am similoluwa, I stay very close to the government resident, a rock hight sight away from here, its my seventh mouths in this city and honestly I haven't found any gorgeous lady around since I got here, I was just about to come into conclusion "Non never ever exist here" till I came out on a drive and meet you: (giggle) She shook back, saying I am "No one" and I don't disclose my identity to strangers. I stood dumbfounded, struggling to find words,her beauty won't let speak, I raved about her (glowing skin, dimple, gap teeth, dark eye, hairy skin) beauty. Then she left in her Range Rover (L405) 2019 model
Insulted and humiliated, I felt my tears threatening to spill over. I turned back and fled.
Upon returning home, with the insult fresh on my mind, I told myself, ‘I must make it in life too.’.
However, a few days later, it occurred to me that the lady was probably upset about something else and that maybe I had simply chosen the wrong time and date that day January 7, 2020. So for couple of weeks I have been visiting that same street with no doubtful mind "we will meet again". But till date I have never seen this lady shadow not to lady talk of her whole self.
I felt like i was in a Nollywood movie and was enchanted by the unexplained mystery of life. A few kind words and encouragement to myself; if I'd never met her, or perhaps I did not have a word with her or perhaps I never shook hands with her or perhaps the way I dressed ...... Many unanswered perhaps; It was a life unwritten experience for me
✍🏿TheSimiloluwa
(The End)
#review #everyone #Ficition
One rare day,
Lost in her thoughts I saw a girl,
With a bright smile & hairs with curl.
Biting on her nails God knows the reason?
“Been in love?” I asked
“Yes” she replied hastily.
“With how many people?” i asked with an interrogatory tone.
“I don’t remember really. I can count if you ask. But there will be someone missing in the list. I have fallen in love with people on train, bookshop, cafeteria and beach....
Huh heavy breath escaped throught my lungs. "Its fine I replied with a fake smile"
Oh am sorry,I forgot my manners, stretched out my hand..... I am similoluwa, I stay very close to the government resident, a rock hight sight away from here, its my seventh mouths in this city and honestly I haven't found any gorgeous lady around since I got here, I was just about to come into conclusion "Non never ever exist here" till I came out on a drive and meet you: (giggle) She shook back, saying I am "No one" and I don't disclose my identity to strangers. I stood dumbfounded, struggling to find words,her beauty won't let speak, I raved about her (glowing skin, dimple, gap teeth, dark eye, hairy skin) beauty. Then she left in her Range Rover (L405) 2019 model
Insulted and humiliated, I felt my tears threatening to spill over. I turned back and fled.
Upon returning home, with the insult fresh on my mind, I told myself, ‘I must make it in life too.’.
However, a few days later, it occurred to me that the lady was probably upset about something else and that maybe I had simply chosen the wrong time and date that day January 7, 2020. So for couple of weeks I have been visiting that same street with no doubtful mind "we will meet again". But till date I have never seen this lady shadow not to lady talk of her whole self.
I felt like i was in a Nollywood movie and was enchanted by the unexplained mystery of life. A few kind words and encouragement to myself; if I'd never met her, or perhaps I did not have a word with her or perhaps I never shook hands with her or perhaps the way I dressed ...... Many unanswered perhaps; It was a life unwritten experience for me
✍🏿TheSimiloluwa
(The End)
#review #everyone #Ficition
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Looking at the violet sky
Where there is nothing to shine
My moon is been missing for days
And My world is now buried in lies
I don't want to be so hopeless
But something is clutching on me like vice
It's been hard and going to be forever
I can neither say and nor can hide
No matter how dark it's around me
Since my world shines in my eyes
Look at the shimmering sky
I guess my moon is back in my life
#vivektavinita #Review #poem
Where there is nothing to shine
My moon is been missing for days
And My world is now buried in lies
I don't want to be so hopeless
But something is clutching on me like vice
It's been hard and going to be forever
I can neither say and nor can hide
No matter how dark it's around me
Since my world shines in my eyes
Look at the shimmering sky
I guess my moon is back in my life
#vivektavinita #Review #poem
Don't know why, but all time I feel like smiling,
Singing a new song with each day passing,
There's something special in your capers,
Thats why like everyone, for you I too have fallen...
#review
Singing a new song with each day passing,
There's something special in your capers,
Thats why like everyone, for you I too have fallen...
#review
A World Apart
Chapter 6 and 7
Within few days my world starts revolving around her. I couldn't get her out of my mind, my affection for her only increase, her wavy hair, her beautiful black eyes, her nose, her lips, her everything; her sight made it hard for me to breath, my heart raced, I felt like it might as well burst out of my chest.
I urged her to leave though every single day because it's dangerous here. In our world people battle with each other almost to death to become powerful and she's a non magi, if someone finds her she'll be in jeopardy.
Also, she would be seen as a trespasser if someone in my world found her out and besides she should go back to her friends and family, they must be waiting for her too. Despite of what she had told me about her life, I refuse to believe that no one love this beautiful and kind soul except me, that is impossible.
But Sinzo kept warning us both, he threw himself into the effort of knowing about why humans are not allowed and why should she leave.
I did that too, I cared for her more than anyone I have ever cared for and so I wanted to make sure she was safe. After 15 days we finally admit our love to each other as she plants a deep kiss on my lips, making me weak and strong both at once.
"I won't leave you." She said with determination
"I would love and care for you so much that you would start loving yourself" I reply and then she hugs me tightly, I wanted the time to stop right then and there, for us to forever live in that very moment when we kissed, but as they say, good moments don't last all that long.
She was my lucky charm, after she came into my life suddenly everything changed.
Before I met her I couldn't even light a candle with my magic. I was always mocked for not being able to connect and find my power.
Ofcourse, it's in our blood yet somehow for me it never worked. I always pretended that it really doesn't matter but deep inside I knew I was a failure. I had only a few years left with me, if I failed to find my powers in that time I would have been deported to human world. And to be honest I never thought I'd be able to make it happen.
But after she came into my life suddenly I became a level 10 magi. The level 10 magi are better than average magi and can perform a lot of spells and rituals that are out of bounds for average magi.
It was going well for both of us unless she started looking sick. We tried everything but by passing of each day she only looked pale and weak; even our magic couldn't fix her.
My heart sank everytime I saw her, that's before one day she ran away, I ran behind her but then she disappeared forever.
I hope she is healthy and happy but I do want to know what happened with her. Why did she run away like that. If she wanted to go back I was always ready to help, then why?
Author's Note:- I'm giving a double update to story because I felt that a single chapter would be of no consequence.
#tm #everyone #review #shortstory
Chapter 6 and 7
Within few days my world starts revolving around her. I couldn't get her out of my mind, my affection for her only increase, her wavy hair, her beautiful black eyes, her nose, her lips, her everything; her sight made it hard for me to breath, my heart raced, I felt like it might as well burst out of my chest.
I urged her to leave though every single day because it's dangerous here. In our world people battle with each other almost to death to become powerful and she's a non magi, if someone finds her she'll be in jeopardy.
Also, she would be seen as a trespasser if someone in my world found her out and besides she should go back to her friends and family, they must be waiting for her too. Despite of what she had told me about her life, I refuse to believe that no one love this beautiful and kind soul except me, that is impossible.
But Sinzo kept warning us both, he threw himself into the effort of knowing about why humans are not allowed and why should she leave.
I did that too, I cared for her more than anyone I have ever cared for and so I wanted to make sure she was safe. After 15 days we finally admit our love to each other as she plants a deep kiss on my lips, making me weak and strong both at once.
"I won't leave you." She said with determination
"I would love and care for you so much that you would start loving yourself" I reply and then she hugs me tightly, I wanted the time to stop right then and there, for us to forever live in that very moment when we kissed, but as they say, good moments don't last all that long.
She was my lucky charm, after she came into my life suddenly everything changed.
Before I met her I couldn't even light a candle with my magic. I was always mocked for not being able to connect and find my power.
Ofcourse, it's in our blood yet somehow for me it never worked. I always pretended that it really doesn't matter but deep inside I knew I was a failure. I had only a few years left with me, if I failed to find my powers in that time I would have been deported to human world. And to be honest I never thought I'd be able to make it happen.
But after she came into my life suddenly I became a level 10 magi. The level 10 magi are better than average magi and can perform a lot of spells and rituals that are out of bounds for average magi.
It was going well for both of us unless she started looking sick. We tried everything but by passing of each day she only looked pale and weak; even our magic couldn't fix her.
My heart sank everytime I saw her, that's before one day she ran away, I ran behind her but then she disappeared forever.
I hope she is healthy and happy but I do want to know what happened with her. Why did she run away like that. If she wanted to go back I was always ready to help, then why?
Author's Note:- I'm giving a double update to story because I felt that a single chapter would be of no consequence.
#tm #everyone #review #shortstory
The light of the moon
Want to see you soon
Whenever I throw a stone in the river
It gives me the best pleasure,
You gave me consolation
When I cry
I still wait here
Why you don't say hi,
You scold me
Why are you in fright
No need for awe
I have the best moonlight,
You have the best intended
You gave me light
I see the star
They are very bright,
I'm not dumb
I have a mind
You always come
With pleasure wind,
You are very stout
How can I feel apathy
You are gone
Can I ask you why,
My mind is fully off
So I say good night
I want to meet again
You came again with the peaceful light.
#review #everyone #rosy #poem
Want to see you soon
Whenever I throw a stone in the river
It gives me the best pleasure,
You gave me consolation
When I cry
I still wait here
Why you don't say hi,
You scold me
Why are you in fright
No need for awe
I have the best moonlight,
You have the best intended
You gave me light
I see the star
They are very bright,
I'm not dumb
I have a mind
You always come
With pleasure wind,
You are very stout
How can I feel apathy
You are gone
Can I ask you why,
My mind is fully off
So I say good night
I want to meet again
You came again with the peaceful light.
#review #everyone #rosy #poem
I'd always build courages
To confront you
Speak how I feel
Tell you things, everything;
I'av had varieties of mirrors display
Showing show to commence and adjoin
Did a lot of practice, only to tell you,
what's going on within me.
Loving you from the shadow
Isn't what I want anymore.
But whenever we meet
It's just a like reverie
I become dumbell,
I hope you will understand,
This piece, know it meant.
Every little wielded here
Are what I meant.
Simi poetry ✍️
#review #everyone #poetry
To confront you
Speak how I feel
Tell you things, everything;
I'av had varieties of mirrors display
Showing show to commence and adjoin
Did a lot of practice, only to tell you,
what's going on within me.
Loving you from the shadow
Isn't what I want anymore.
But whenever we meet
It's just a like reverie
I become dumbell,
I hope you will understand,
This piece, know it meant.
Every little wielded here
Are what I meant.
Simi poetry ✍️
#review #everyone #poetry
It's been whole day and it's going to be night
It's seems too good and it's seems too right
I wanted to forget it all
And then it all rewind
I never wanted to see him again
Now he is sitting beside
The books on my left
And the books on my right
I have read them all
Now I need a something to divert my mind
I marched towards the racks
A good book, so I can find
But my companions are pulling tricks
He held the same book I like
I was staring at him only if I could realize
I have been caught and now I feel shy
I'm sure I'll be good as dead
because of the way he smiles
#vivektavinita #poem #Review
It's seems too good and it's seems too right
I wanted to forget it all
And then it all rewind
I never wanted to see him again
Now he is sitting beside
The books on my left
And the books on my right
I have read them all
Now I need a something to divert my mind
I marched towards the racks
A good book, so I can find
But my companions are pulling tricks
He held the same book I like
I was staring at him only if I could realize
I have been caught and now I feel shy
I'm sure I'll be good as dead
because of the way he smiles
#vivektavinita #poem #Review
My box of memories
My box of memories
Holds two crystal tears from her cheeks
The smell of her on silk
A black rose with no petals
And a million shards of my hearts
Lurking in bloody vials
My box of memories
Stores the feel of the sun upon my back
The joy of being amongst friends
Plus the crackle of the bonfire in the dark
Along with dreams of My Dearest’s bosom
And the feel of her kisses on my lips
Longing for a real work some
Irony of these lonely tips
#poetry#poetry #review#review #everyone#everyone
My box of memories
Holds two crystal tears from her cheeks
The smell of her on silk
A black rose with no petals
And a million shards of my hearts
Lurking in bloody vials
My box of memories
Stores the feel of the sun upon my back
The joy of being amongst friends
Plus the crackle of the bonfire in the dark
Along with dreams of My Dearest’s bosom
And the feel of her kisses on my lips
Longing for a real work some
Irony of these lonely tips
#poetry#poetry #review#review #everyone#everyone
TWO FACES
It was a night
Night like every other night
Tranquil, dark and utter silence
Stillness and a state of deep slumber
Lying besides my grandma
Keeping my phone at the side table
All set to sleep
Just as I was switching off the lights
I witnessed a moment of serendipity
It was my grandma's aging face
The face of a book
The face of a history
The face of a relentless struggle
A face that was so simple yet so powerful
The face which can teach you far more than any academics could
This moment, it was an epiphany.
And all those flashbacks coming back
Unconditional love and all the pats on the back
These pats were not ordinary, they were momentous
Simply because these didn't come in package with achieving something
These were for existing.
Fixated on her face, now there is one more face that comes into light
Tha face lurking in the shadows
The face of a guilt
The face of a person
The face is me.
And once more there is a flashback
We both sitting together, yet so distant
My hands occupied with the phone
Her mind occupied with so many queries
She is shooting questions at me
I am smiling, looking at my phone
Asking her questions absentmindedly
She, playfully, takes my phone off my hands
I am not playful
Annoyed, I yell 'Do you even know how important this is? How will you, you are illiterate old school!'
I snatch my phone, dismissing her
Flashback ends
Tears does not.
I sleep with a heavy chest.
Alarm rings.
Dark changes into balmy morning.
I open my eyes.
There is a figure infront of me.
The same that has been there since the day I could remember
With a cup of tea and breakfast in her hands
She says 'Wake up, betaa.'
The face with a smile.
#review #poetry #everyone
It was a night
Night like every other night
Tranquil, dark and utter silence
Stillness and a state of deep slumber
Lying besides my grandma
Keeping my phone at the side table
All set to sleep
Just as I was switching off the lights
I witnessed a moment of serendipity
It was my grandma's aging face
The face of a book
The face of a history
The face of a relentless struggle
A face that was so simple yet so powerful
The face which can teach you far more than any academics could
This moment, it was an epiphany.
And all those flashbacks coming back
Unconditional love and all the pats on the back
These pats were not ordinary, they were momentous
Simply because these didn't come in package with achieving something
These were for existing.
Fixated on her face, now there is one more face that comes into light
Tha face lurking in the shadows
The face of a guilt
The face of a person
The face is me.
And once more there is a flashback
We both sitting together, yet so distant
My hands occupied with the phone
Her mind occupied with so many queries
She is shooting questions at me
I am smiling, looking at my phone
Asking her questions absentmindedly
She, playfully, takes my phone off my hands
I am not playful
Annoyed, I yell 'Do you even know how important this is? How will you, you are illiterate old school!'
I snatch my phone, dismissing her
Flashback ends
Tears does not.
I sleep with a heavy chest.
Alarm rings.
Dark changes into balmy morning.
I open my eyes.
There is a figure infront of me.
The same that has been there since the day I could remember
With a cup of tea and breakfast in her hands
She says 'Wake up, betaa.'
The face with a smile.
#review #poetry #everyone
TWO FACES
It was a night
Night like every other night
Tranquil, dark and utter silence
Stillness and a state of deep slumber
Lying besides my grandma
Keeping my phone at the side table
All set to sleep
Just as I was switching off the lights
I witnessed a moment of serendipity
It was my grandma's aging face
The face of a book
The face of a history
The face of a relentless struggle
A face that was so simple yet so powerful
The face which can teach you far more than any academics could
This moment, it was an epiphany.
And all those flashbacks coming back
Unconditional love and all the pats on the back
These pats were not ordinary, they were momentous
Simply because these didn't come in package with achieving something
These were for existing.
Fixated on her face, now there is one more face that comes into light
Tha face lurking in the shadows
The face of a guilt
The face of a person
The face is me.
And once more there is a flashback
We both sitting together, yet so distant
My hands occupied with the phone
Her mind occupied with so many queries
She is shooting questions at me
I am smiling, looking at my phone
Asking her questions absentmindedly
She, playfully, takes my phone off my hands
I am not playful
Annoyed, I yell 'Do you even know how important this is? How will you, you are illiterate old school!'
I snatch my phone, dismissing her
Flashback ends
Tears does not.
I sleep with a heavy chest.
Alarm rings.
Dark changes into balmy morning.
I open my eyes.
There is a figure infront of me.
The same that has been there since the day I could remember
With a cup of tea and breakfast in her hands
She says 'Wake up, betaa.'
The face with a smile.
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It was a night
Night like every other night
Tranquil, dark and utter silence
Stillness and a state of deep slumber
Lying besides my grandma
Keeping my phone at the side table
All set to sleep
Just as I was switching off the lights
I witnessed a moment of serendipity
It was my grandma's aging face
The face of a book
The face of a history
The face of a relentless struggle
A face that was so simple yet so powerful
The face which can teach you far more than any academics could
This moment, it was an epiphany.
And all those flashbacks coming back
Unconditional love and all the pats on the back
These pats were not ordinary, they were momentous
Simply because these didn't come in package with achieving something
These were for existing.
Fixated on her face, now there is one more face that comes into light
Tha face lurking in the shadows
The face of a guilt
The face of a person
The face is me.
And once more there is a flashback
We both sitting together, yet so distant
My hands occupied with the phone
Her mind occupied with so many queries
She is shooting questions at me
I am smiling, looking at my phone
Asking her questions absentmindedly
She, playfully, takes my phone off my hands
I am not playful
Annoyed, I yell 'Do you even know how important this is? How will you, you are illiterate old school!'
I snatch my phone, dismissing her
Flashback ends
Tears does not.
I sleep with a heavy chest.
Alarm rings.
Dark changes into balmy morning.
I open my eyes.
There is a figure infront of me.
The same that has been there since the day I could remember
With a cup of tea and breakfast in her hands
She says 'Wake up, betaa.'
The face with a smile.
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Like any other ordinary days
It is also a very simple time
But I chose to appreciate
The little things in my life
World is always been discouraging
Hurtful, insolent and full of lies
And on those throbbing moments
I was blessed to have you by my side.
All the things you did for me
Can't be compared with anything in world
Those acts and words of appreciation
Brother, holds a big piece of my little heart
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It is also a very simple time
But I chose to appreciate
The little things in my life
World is always been discouraging
Hurtful, insolent and full of lies
And on those throbbing moments
I was blessed to have you by my side.
All the things you did for me
Can't be compared with anything in world
Those acts and words of appreciation
Brother, holds a big piece of my little heart
#Review #poem #vivektavinita