My little angel

The wait was over,
the emptiness was filled!
You came to this world,
like a shining star in my life!
Charm like the moon,
Gentle as a flower,
The lotus eyes of yours,
Made my surroundings still!
That moment,
realised the magique of creation!
You made me feel especial,
My adorable brother!!

#suan
#poem #love #brother #family #relationship #life #bond

#review

One of my first poems. Wrote it in my teens.
It could have been better, but wanted to keep it raw.

Would be glad to know your thoughts.

a broken ludo game

stuck between a ludo game
playing on a broken board
o best friend! I’m stuck in the chaos
the game represented by my relationships
with each member’s role to play
and the overall result may vary in-fact
also, the winner may not be deemed to be intact!
Tattered and shattered all play their turn
and me too stranded on the way,
scared and praying till the end
for the game to go peacefully to its bay.
To all the discrepancies I come across
and pathways I have to mend;
to the obstacles, I cross over
are the hidden, invisible painful traps.
Thinking and analyzing my future steps
however, being decided by some unnatural bets;
Long to go on an unknown path I,
I think of ending it right hither, for
the unknown reason in my core.
Never the less, as would be fate,
the picture seems to fade amid bate!
I wish to have a happy end
but being unknown to how to mend,
(un)fair game all it remains
and now a broken ludo’s a sad lullaby!

#family, #stress #review