" that last rain together"

Here comes the first rain of the season…still a few hours to dawn. Some far lands away you can see a single light source spreading it's wings in the dark blanket of this concrete jungle. I see our feets hanging from the balcony and fingers entangled. Here comes a breeze playing with her strands. The only thing that troubles me is that ring on her hand..

Wish it was a symbol of my passion and not his…

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The Night stays awake for the morning with which it can never stay together.
Will it's love remain a 'day dream' forever?
But still how silently night waits to see the shining beautiful day,even though it knows the day's beginning is night's end.
Isn't this love in it's purest form!!

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Should I hold on to you the way the tree hugs the soil
warmly with it's roots ?
Or
Should I let you go the way
the tree sheds it's leaves ?

Vulnerability

I can hardly look into your eyes.

Ambling about like a dandelion
My sight flutters, gaze not staying
Eyes not meeting yours.

My Heart skips a beat
As you vocalise how much
It means to you that I’m here.

I feel like a trickster
A phoney, donning a mask
Of an angel.

Hiding behind a virtuous shadow
My soul is but a darkened meadow.

Withering like an autumn leaf
It weighs me down,
I cower, awaiting an excuse.

No, I can hardly look into your eyes.

My eyes mist and tears fall.
Thank God,
Now I need not look into your eyes
Anymore.

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Undoubtedly, You!

It is always, undoubtedly, the best decision of your life until you start hearing a distant hassle coming towards you. Then, that best decision of your life begins to flicker away from it's foundation. That distant tumult invokes a fear in your mind that it'll dismantle everything and that your heart will break, yet again. You try to make things right, you put in a lot of efforts to hold onto your decision but you've already lost, lost to yourself. You lost when you gave your mind the control of yourself. You always were the best decision of my life, you will always be. Away from wrecks, and reasons, we have built a castle of our own that is strong enough to withstand unsettlements and unreasonable dilemma's of life. For every outbreak there exists an escape that brings us together, closer than ever. We have never kissed under the mistletoe but we'll still witness a forever of us. I'm never in favor of overlooking some things but it'll never mean a slightest change, or deviancy from the regularity of our togetherness. You're not a handshake that I lose amidst the constraints of my fingerprints, you're not a hug that slowly fades away and mixes with the air around me, you're not a kiss that disperse away in moments. You are the breath that I carry inside me, you are the blood my heart pumps. You are not the moisture on my lips, you are the kiss itself because just like a kiss, you too fill my heart with a magnanimous amount of love and joy. I don't carry your scent, I carry you in me. A coalescence of our souls, an effervescent suffusion of the millennium, you are the smile I am about. So on days when you feel like you're breaking, I want you to close your eyes and hear me whisper all this to you and just one more thing. You are everything I am about, you are the reason itself and yes, undoubtedly, the best decision of my life!

-Amulya

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Saw young alluring eyes,
Fixed into a book,
Hell could be heaven,
If you know where to look.
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I think about you all the time
You are always in my head
I reread every text you send

I'm always here for you
Every hour of the day
I'll never let you down
Or hurt you in any way

I love you more than anything
You're like the air I breath
And When I look around
I know you are all I need

My sunshine on a cloudy day
That's one thing that you are
And even on the darkest nights
You are my brightest star

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You turned my darkness into light
You made everything alright
You picked me up when I was down
You turned my life around
If I don't have you, what would l
be
A blessing is what you are to me.
The world is full of many people
But there is only one of you
You fill my heart with love
You are God sent gift for me
An angel is what you are to me

There is no reason to be sad
You've taken away all the bad
A best friend is what you are to me❤️

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Immature people falling in love
Destroy each other freedom
Creat a bondage. Make a prison
Mature persons in love Help each other to be free
They help each other to destroy
All short of bondage.
And When love flow with freedom there is a beauty.
When love flows with dependence there is ugliness.

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We flirt all the time
& smile and laugh
But how
Am I suppose to know
If this is real?
I can't control my feelings
Anymore
It's so hard
Being around you
And not saying
All the things
I want you to hear
I'm trying my best
To act casual but.
All I can seem to do
Is get memorised
In your eye... 🙃

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It's my heart, not some stony shard
Why won't it be filled with pain?
I'll let it bleed a gazillion times,
but would never complain

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I don't no am I right or wrong
But still I say sorry to you
I don't no am I good or bad for you but I love you truly

When it hurts so bad
Why does it feel so good
I wish this made all sense
I wish I understood
Not having you here with me is tearing me up inside
But I can't stop thinking about you no matter how hard I try

You know how I feel about you
And I know I want to spend rest of my life with you

Loving you feel so right
But at the same time
Knowing I can't have you keeps me awake at night
I just want this to be simple
to look into your eyes
Be held in your arms
Then I'd truly be happy.....

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~MUM~

I held her hand, and she looked at me with awe
I would paint my handprints on every wall I'd know
Spring and autumn, around the changing seasons i grew
She kept me in her arms and all my dreams came true
Kissed my palm, before she sang me to sleep
They say "Nothing lasts forver", but her love was way too deep
I was all grown up, didn't need her help to cross the street,
my friends would all laugh,
as if holding her hand was my greatest defeat
I'd ask her to leave, if anywhere I was near my school,
She asked why, and I told her it doesn't look very cool,
I cared a lot about what "somebody" would say,
but it was her who taught me, that "somebody" was just me
I sat by her side, and our hands are of the same size,
but her knuckles are all pale, and it leaves me with a teary eye
Her fingers would all swell, as the winter air grew cold,
In all these years, she gave her hands too much to hold,
One day, i found those handprints i made when i was two
Wish I could go back, when her hands were the only thing i knew.

~iwritesometimes 2nov207am

I have to feel your voice;😊
I have to feel your tender touch;🙂
no other could take your place;
you're it; I have no choice🥰

WANTS to feel the arctic ice🥶
with you in my arms with your lips to taste;hoddles. everything is like magical spice👩‍❤️‍💋‍👨
Ohh your dance dance moves,
Enough to drive me crazy,😍
This chilled weather
Wants us something to do cozy.☺️

Wants to feel the heat of bonfire🔥
with me fondling you,
you fondling me❤️
Such a fire,
You my desire,
Your each sight
Electryfying like a wire.

#rg ❤️
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The Epithalamium

I fancy-- my soul--
Holding the bouquet of daffodils--
Dance on the ill-fated ship--
On the Epithalamium-- we wrote--
In hope--
I would drink--
The nectar on your lips--
With your hands in mine

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Euphoria

You stay in my head
Always running
Like a faucet,
It keeps coming
The thought of you
Fills my heart
With a pleasant ness
One that makes my breath
Come up with unease
As my soul, it radiates
All the warmth
And I try to satiate
This feeling
Of hope,
Oh how I wish to be
With you, I will forever
Feel free.
This euphoria
It's my symphony.

-TheHealingSoul

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Part 2
I wiped out my tears, kissed the wetted rug and received the call. He started shoutin in anger, I was silently listenin to his complaints and sorrows then after awhile he paused (as he realized he said alot). I left the prayer rug lyin there on the ground, went to bed and asked him for his dismay and he began to cry. Ya Allah! His wailin's sounded the same as of the one who just finished weepin and received the phone call. He wept awfully and I urged him to calm down. After sometime he was back to normal and accepted that he was wrong (or maybe even regret it) and we both exchanged apologies. It was so Peaceful and full of pleasure that we were both smilin again. I.was proud of myself that today i discovered the universal secret, the divine and meanwhile The Woman Of The DarkLand who can climb every mointain and cross every ocean just to fix what she's broken. Durin our conversation he mentioned that he's to leave for the England in next 2 weeks. Ah! As if a viper stung me but then again the woman inside me spoke out He's to go and achieve his every dream and only then he'll come back in order to stay forever. She continued by sayin that you've to wait wholeheartedly on tiptoes for the longest of the lifetimes and then you'll be payed off. Suddenly I realized she's right, love ain't supposed to be the reason of death of someone's beloved's dream (no matter what sorta love it is, besides it's true). Love aint stoppin him to chase his destiny, it's to let him go and pray for his safe return along with his dream turnt into reality. So I told him he must go and keep this charmin smile always on his face. We talked for 2 hour I think and then we both started feelin sleepy. After so long I heard "love you, take care " from himni felt blessed. At the end he said do call me early in the mornin and I switched off my phone and both of us fell asleep in peace. And I'm sure it was after a week that we were sleepin peabefully. In the mornin I woke up and 1st thing I remembered is that I have to call him. I could barely remember what happened to me last night (or maybe to both of us). I phoned him he received the call and his sweet voice made my day. We began to talk more comfortablely than the last night and were feelin much better. Again a point came where the word "Seperation was used, as he's to leave soon. I wanted to confess that it kills me to remind myself that he'll be off for 5 -6 years but then a sudden joy plunges into my soul and dances sayin "Prayer is a hope that knows no end and my Lord is the one who loves Patience". I promised him we'll meet one last time before he flies off. Albeit he didn't say much about how he'll feel in the distant lands but I could hear him sayin I miss my land and the woman of this darkland. The conversation lasted for an hour until he said I wanna sleep for another hour. We again said sincerely goodbye to each other and cut the call. It was 8:30 and I placed my phone on the cushion beside me and stood up in a fresh mood. As I was tyin my hair my eyes fell on the prayer rug. What a beautiful moment my God! I took the cloak that was on my bed, wrapped it around my body and sat on the prayer rug. It was still slightly wet and the airs flooded with perfumes of the woman of the DarkLand and her beloved one. "Alhumdulillah-i-rabbil-Aalamin!" it was all I can utter in His greatness.
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My tears,Your tears.
Our face grew hot as the fire.

This mood can strike .
Erupting in loud shouts,
Like an extra.
Wondering why we're here.

Our mouth leaks with affection.
My words,Your intention.
Let us know our feelings.
Electricity runs through our veins

Shadows seem to follow.
Snacking on sweet and sour lollies
Nobody understands
Defeated like deflated balloons

Cowering in the corner at night.
Our pains , we've future buzzing.
I find a smile,
It appears on your face.
But it only widens
When our heart flops together.

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Is It Love?

That was the day of my first
Also the day of my closest…
I never thought of meeting the person like you
Just like carrying the ego as your pursue
I had happened to ask your name
After I repeat the typo of yours
I had faced your facial expression, as if I asked your fame!

From that moment it got started breakage of the chain
And hit by our aggressive clouds always to rain.
But who knows that it will become a storm,
That was ever thought by my under feet warm.

Then consider our conversation became like Tom and Jerry,
Later I got happened to imagine you as my Queen Fairy.
Even the fire won’t get fired till it get contact with Oxygen,
But you fume more just for the contact with my shadow

Later I didn’t notice your presence,
And had engaged with other emotions.
After some time I had learned the true connections
And finally noticed your existence.

This existential realization became my eternal thought
From the engaged emotions, I have got the truest myself where I sought.

But I don’t know why I had surrounded with my subtle hesitations.
Perhaps, I had locked my mind due to my ambitions.
Yet there is a hope wandering from the heart to my mind.
That one day definitely, I will become your realization…
Till then my words adroit themselves in my memories
And get evolve on the paper of Discoveries.

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My views about love is quite sorted out.

No, I will never say "I love you" because I believe it's only the beginning.. When something starts it eventually ends and I don't want the story to end I just want a never ending story.

"Sometimes I may hold your hand tight in the crowd, or I will wrap my arms around me pouring some self love

Either I share my umbrella with you or we get drenched together

Maybe I will fight for window seat with you or I will let you have it

Okay I am this person who loves adding extra sugar to her tea but with you I can have no sugar tea. Just like the sugar free tea taste better with you similarly I am better version of me with you. I am me without you too but with you I am just the ~better~ best version."

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