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is this to much? the story is happening in the modern world involving heaven in the first series. I change some myth history to fit my story. Is that okay?
Daniel involve in self accident where it disrupt the seal inside him that been used by her mother, the descendant of the first born daughter of Eve, since the day he was born. Healenna, a light witch and a medical student, saw the accident. She witness the last piece of Scorpio zodiac soul sucked into Daniel.
Healenna and her aunt Bella with assistance from an angel, Forfex, in a mission to help Daniel to figure out how to save his life by going back to Daniel childhood home.
When the secret exposed, they realize that Daniel holding 2 completel Zodiacs soul inside him, Scorpio and the 13th sign Ophiuchus. The seal no longer can hold the 2 zodiac in the seal which resulting Bella to sacrifice her Magic power to strengthen the seal in Daniel.
It was a successful attempt but a bigger problem arose where Apollo, son of Zeus, command group of angels to capture Daniel along with Forfex and Bella.
Healenna in advanture with the help of Ben - host of the one piece of Cancer soul, and Alice - light Witches guiding Ben. They traveled to Israel then to Iraq to find a gate into heaven to save Daniel and Bella.
In Iraq, they found the Eden Garden which will lead them to heaven. Artemis, twin sister of Apollo, help Healenna to save Daniel but they late where Bella got struck by a bow of Apollo.
Ophiuchus save Daniel by sacrificing himself to make Daniel become a celestial being. When Apollo loss in the hand of Scorpio, they left Bella in heaven with Artemis. When they get on earth, Healenna use her magic to calm the soul inside of Daniel when it got out of control. The new beginning of their life.
is this to much? the story is happening in the modern world involving heaven in the first series. I change some myth history to fit my story. Is that okay?
Daniel involve in self accident where it disrupt the seal inside him that been used by her mother, the descendant of the first born daughter of Eve, since the day he was born. Healenna, a light witch and a medical student, saw the accident. She witness the last piece of Scorpio zodiac soul sucked into Daniel.
Healenna and her aunt Bella with assistance from an angel, Forfex, in a mission to help Daniel to figure out how to save his life by going back to Daniel childhood home.
When the secret exposed, they realize that Daniel holding 2 completel Zodiacs soul inside him, Scorpio and the 13th sign Ophiuchus. The seal no longer can hold the 2 zodiac in the seal which resulting Bella to sacrifice her Magic power to strengthen the seal in Daniel.
It was a successful attempt but a bigger problem arose where Apollo, son of Zeus, command group of angels to capture Daniel along with Forfex and Bella.
Healenna in advanture with the help of Ben - host of the one piece of Cancer soul, and Alice - light Witches guiding Ben. They traveled to Israel then to Iraq to find a gate into heaven to save Daniel and Bella.
In Iraq, they found the Eden Garden which will lead them to heaven. Artemis, twin sister of Apollo, help Healenna to save Daniel but they late where Bella got struck by a bow of Apollo.
Ophiuchus save Daniel by sacrificing himself to make Daniel become a celestial being. When Apollo loss in the hand of Scorpio, they left Bella in heaven with Artemis. When they get on earth, Healenna use her magic to calm the soul inside of Daniel when it got out of control. The new beginning of their life.