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is this to much? the story is happening in the modern world involving heaven in the first series. I change some myth history to fit my story. Is that okay?
Daniel involve in self accident where it disrupt the seal inside him that been used by her mother, the descendant of the first born daughter of Eve, since the day he was born. Healenna, a light witch and a medical student, saw the accident. She witness the last piece of Scorpio zodiac soul sucked into Daniel.
Healenna and her aunt Bella with assistance from an angel, Forfex, in a mission to help Daniel to figure out how to save his life by going back to Daniel childhood home.
When the secret exposed, they realize that Daniel holding 2 completel Zodiacs soul inside him, Scorpio and the 13th sign Ophiuchus. The seal no longer can hold the 2 zodiac in the seal which resulting Bella to sacrifice her Magic power to strengthen the seal in Daniel.
It was a successful attempt but a bigger problem arose where Apollo, son of Zeus, command group of angels to capture Daniel along with Forfex and Bella.
Healenna in advanture with the help of Ben - host of the one piece of Cancer soul, and Alice - light Witches guiding Ben. They traveled to Israel then to Iraq to find a gate into heaven to save Daniel and Bella.
In Iraq, they found the Eden Garden which will lead them to heaven. Artemis, twin sister of Apollo, help Healenna to save Daniel but they late where Bella got struck by a bow of Apollo.
Ophiuchus save Daniel by sacrificing himself to make Daniel become a celestial being. When Apollo loss in the hand of Scorpio, they left Bella in heaven with Artemis. When they get on earth, Healenna use her magic to calm the soul inside of Daniel when it got out of control. The new beginning of their life.
is this to much? the story is happening in the modern world involving heaven in the first series. I change some myth history to fit my story. Is that okay?
Daniel involve in self accident where it disrupt the seal inside him that been used by her mother, the descendant of the first born daughter of Eve, since the day he was born. Healenna, a light witch and a medical student, saw the accident. She witness the last piece of Scorpio zodiac soul sucked into Daniel.
Healenna and her aunt Bella with assistance from an angel, Forfex, in a mission to help Daniel to figure out how to save his life by going back to Daniel childhood home.
When the secret exposed, they realize that Daniel holding 2 completel Zodiacs soul inside him, Scorpio and the 13th sign Ophiuchus. The seal no longer can hold the 2 zodiac in the seal which resulting Bella to sacrifice her Magic power to strengthen the seal in Daniel.
It was a successful attempt but a bigger problem arose where Apollo, son of Zeus, command group of angels to capture Daniel along with Forfex and Bella.
Healenna in advanture with the help of Ben - host of the one piece of Cancer soul, and Alice - light Witches guiding Ben. They traveled to Israel then to Iraq to find a gate into heaven to save Daniel and Bella.
In Iraq, they found the Eden Garden which will lead them to heaven. Artemis, twin sister of Apollo, help Healenna to save Daniel but they late where Bella got struck by a bow of Apollo.
Ophiuchus save Daniel by sacrificing himself to make Daniel become a celestial being. When Apollo loss in the hand of Scorpio, they left Bella in heaven with Artemis. When they get on earth, Healenna use her magic to calm the soul inside of Daniel when it got out of control. The new beginning of their life.
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CHAPTER 1 – Daniel Kainos
August 18, 2020 23:17 here I’m sitting in front of my 9 years old laptop looking back into memories that hurt me deep inside. I’m not sure how to react with this feeling but how I wish time has stopped on July 29, 2014.
I want to scream to the world how miserable is my life but there is a quote saying “As bad as your situation may be, someone else always has it worse than you” by George Foreman. I hate those word, every time I gave up, that word pushing me back up where I barely to keep ongoing. I hate myself for knowing those word, I hate myself for keep reminding me with those word. There not a single day I wished my life will end in a tragic accident.
Why?
I’m giving up but unfortunately I has been taught since I was born, committing a suicide is the most brutal sin in the world where you will end up in the worse part of HELL. I hate myself for being taught about heaven and hell.
I hate that about myself for take everything so serious. No matter how many times I denying what I been taught, at the end of the day I end up praying before consuming my meal. Why would I not be praying, my dad is god second in command and I probably has been taught before the day I become a sperm.
It is all in my blood now. Maybe if I peal my skin, there is some bible scripture beneath it. Hahaha. Not so funny for someone who really devoted. If my father know about this he probably going to send me back to Sunday school.
Forgive me father for I have sin. I keep repeating those word in my mind but I am not catholic to use that phrase anyway.
All I want is someone to listen for what I have been dealing with. Somehow, when there is someone to listen, I has no idea what I am supposed to say or where to begin. It feel like the world is torturing me so I will end my own life. It will be not that complex if my mind is determine to do so. All I need is just open my bedroom window and jump. Simple as that. No biggie.
Drop dead, brain smashed like a pie thrown on somebody face, blood spatter all over the place in someone garden at level 1 of my resident building, but again like I said before, I will be in hell for eternity and that part is not going to be fun at all. The worst case scenario I ever imagine is by my bike and being drag under a trailer truck, and that will not be cool way to die. Body part all over the road, some stuck under the truck, organ all over the place smash into pieces. That really not a good way to die and still end up in hell for attempting suicide or maybe I end up become a ghost that hunt on the road and will become some ghost story for bedtime. I want some cool way to die where it doesn’t hurt, I didn’t know it coming and my body is fully attached in a coffin when people buried me.
Thinking about dying and terrible life, I have been thinking what about the other people who going with worse in life. How they stay sane? How they keep moving forward?
How?
All I can think as a solution to easy my life, to win a jackpot grand prize and buy a land on mountain cliff where it have a beautiful view, away from the bustling city with a small house with a transparent glass walls, alone and peace or maybe with my love one to spend the rest of our life together and maybe make one or two children along the way may add some joy in it. With all of that I only need go to town if necessary. That maybe can make me happy or maybe not.
Probably, when I win the jackpot I will end up with sport cars and sport bikes in the garage with some girls who not really love me, only for the fun and money. Maybe with the prize I won, I can work my ass up to become a billionaire make my way to be among the richest man in the world, to be known by the world so I have the access to meet Selena Gomez and maybe then I have my chance to make her my wife.
CHAPTER 1 – Daniel Kainos
August 18, 2020 23:17 here I’m sitting in front of my 9 years old laptop looking back into memories that hurt me deep inside. I’m not sure how to react with this feeling but how I wish time has stopped on July 29, 2014.
I want to scream to the world how miserable is my life but there is a quote saying “As bad as your situation may be, someone else always has it worse than you” by George Foreman. I hate those word, every time I gave up, that word pushing me back up where I barely to keep ongoing. I hate myself for knowing those word, I hate myself for keep reminding me with those word. There not a single day I wished my life will end in a tragic accident.
Why?
I’m giving up but unfortunately I has been taught since I was born, committing a suicide is the most brutal sin in the world where you will end up in the worse part of HELL. I hate myself for being taught about heaven and hell.
I hate that about myself for take everything so serious. No matter how many times I denying what I been taught, at the end of the day I end up praying before consuming my meal. Why would I not be praying, my dad is god second in command and I probably has been taught before the day I become a sperm.
It is all in my blood now. Maybe if I peal my skin, there is some bible scripture beneath it. Hahaha. Not so funny for someone who really devoted. If my father know about this he probably going to send me back to Sunday school.
Forgive me father for I have sin. I keep repeating those word in my mind but I am not catholic to use that phrase anyway.
All I want is someone to listen for what I have been dealing with. Somehow, when there is someone to listen, I has no idea what I am supposed to say or where to begin. It feel like the world is torturing me so I will end my own life. It will be not that complex if my mind is determine to do so. All I need is just open my bedroom window and jump. Simple as that. No biggie.
Drop dead, brain smashed like a pie thrown on somebody face, blood spatter all over the place in someone garden at level 1 of my resident building, but again like I said before, I will be in hell for eternity and that part is not going to be fun at all. The worst case scenario I ever imagine is by my bike and being drag under a trailer truck, and that will not be cool way to die. Body part all over the road, some stuck under the truck, organ all over the place smash into pieces. That really not a good way to die and still end up in hell for attempting suicide or maybe I end up become a ghost that hunt on the road and will become some ghost story for bedtime. I want some cool way to die where it doesn’t hurt, I didn’t know it coming and my body is fully attached in a coffin when people buried me.
Thinking about dying and terrible life, I have been thinking what about the other people who going with worse in life. How they stay sane? How they keep moving forward?
How?
All I can think as a solution to easy my life, to win a jackpot grand prize and buy a land on mountain cliff where it have a beautiful view, away from the bustling city with a small house with a transparent glass walls, alone and peace or maybe with my love one to spend the rest of our life together and maybe make one or two children along the way may add some joy in it. With all of that I only need go to town if necessary. That maybe can make me happy or maybe not.
Probably, when I win the jackpot I will end up with sport cars and sport bikes in the garage with some girls who not really love me, only for the fun and money. Maybe with the prize I won, I can work my ass up to become a billionaire make my way to be among the richest man in the world, to be known by the world so I have the access to meet Selena Gomez and maybe then I have my chance to make her my wife.
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Maybe.
Why her? It is not because of her songs or movies. Somehow her voice make me feel calm and happy. Her smile is enough to make me forget my terrible day and I won’t lie she the eighth most beautiful women in my life after my mother, my grandmas and my sisters.
Maybe then I will be happy. Who knows? Nothing work according to plan right. Only tv shows or movie does.
If life will be so easy, there will be no city, no jobs to work on, no money needed for buying, there is no modern world to be worried on.
Why the fuck did Eve took the forbidden fruit at the first place and why the fuck did god created the earth at the first place.
Oh yeah, they will be no me if all of those never happened. It all for a reason right? If it never happened then there is no today. If god did not created the earth god probably be so boring right now. If Eve never took the forbidden fruit, maybe both of them I mean her and Adam still playing with all the animal in the garden without the knowledge both of them were naked.
If we are the evolution of the great ape, why the fuck did we evolve become human with all this thought in our head, with all of our need today? If we are the human revolution, why the fuck we don’t stay as ape? Today we still be playing around the tree throwing feces at each other. Chase by the predator that trying to eat us.
Why the fuck gave up all that just to kill the earth today with all the rubbish in the sea, with the melting of the great glacier, with all the burning forest and with all this fucking global warming.
Well, that only one man thought, with his stupid point of view. Blaming all that happened to the world without thinking that he is the problem to begin with. Maybe if he appreciate a little maybe he can enjoy the world more or maybe if he going out from his room more often, hanging out at the bar more often like he used to be maybe he will not feel like this, you stupid lazy bastard and maybe he probably already meet the women who he think that will be his wife again by now, if he not laying on the bed all the time dreaming to be dating with some chick from all the movies or tv shows he watched. Stupid bastard. You know you are talking about yourself right? You are the guy who you are addressing stupid bastard. Well this make me feel little bit happy then before, so no biggie.
Well, enough for all today bulshit. Just go to bed and maybe tomorrow will give me new experience or I will win the lottery jackpot. Finger cross.
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Maybe.
Why her? It is not because of her songs or movies. Somehow her voice make me feel calm and happy. Her smile is enough to make me forget my terrible day and I won’t lie she the eighth most beautiful women in my life after my mother, my grandmas and my sisters.
Maybe then I will be happy. Who knows? Nothing work according to plan right. Only tv shows or movie does.
If life will be so easy, there will be no city, no jobs to work on, no money needed for buying, there is no modern world to be worried on.
Why the fuck did Eve took the forbidden fruit at the first place and why the fuck did god created the earth at the first place.
Oh yeah, they will be no me if all of those never happened. It all for a reason right? If it never happened then there is no today. If god did not created the earth god probably be so boring right now. If Eve never took the forbidden fruit, maybe both of them I mean her and Adam still playing with all the animal in the garden without the knowledge both of them were naked.
If we are the evolution of the great ape, why the fuck did we evolve become human with all this thought in our head, with all of our need today? If we are the human revolution, why the fuck we don’t stay as ape? Today we still be playing around the tree throwing feces at each other. Chase by the predator that trying to eat us.
Why the fuck gave up all that just to kill the earth today with all the rubbish in the sea, with the melting of the great glacier, with all the burning forest and with all this fucking global warming.
Well, that only one man thought, with his stupid point of view. Blaming all that happened to the world without thinking that he is the problem to begin with. Maybe if he appreciate a little maybe he can enjoy the world more or maybe if he going out from his room more often, hanging out at the bar more often like he used to be maybe he will not feel like this, you stupid lazy bastard and maybe he probably already meet the women who he think that will be his wife again by now, if he not laying on the bed all the time dreaming to be dating with some chick from all the movies or tv shows he watched. Stupid bastard. You know you are talking about yourself right? You are the guy who you are addressing stupid bastard. Well this make me feel little bit happy then before, so no biggie.
Well, enough for all today bulshit. Just go to bed and maybe tomorrow will give me new experience or I will win the lottery jackpot. Finger cross.
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Well, don’t wished for what you don’t mean. Anything can happened and that thing will change your life no matter how much you don’t like it, you cannot change the pass. This is how my view about my life change from suicide to surviving.
“New day same old nothing new. I woke up, go to work and wait the clock to reach 5pm. Only the different is, I took the highway route to go home, I have this aching feeling that telling me something is wrong but I am not sure what is. That time it kind of weird, I feel like I need to rush and I ride my bike at maximum speed and for unknown reason, my 150cc bike, which usually maximum speed is 135km per hour goes to 220km per hour and it feel so exciting for me since the road is clear. Out of nowhere, something appeared in front of me. That’s when I lost control and fall of my bike and slide all the way to the opposite direction of the road. The last thing I remember, I was about to get hit by a truck and that is it. When I woke up, I am lying in this hospital bed with all those peoples with camera in front of that door with some police officers outside and explaining this all over again with different people and you.”
“All the witness also said the road is clear then you just lost control for no reason and also don’t you feel something is off with your story Mr. Danie Kainos? Your bike scatter all over the road, the four by four Chevy that hit you? The cooling system burst, front bumper badly dented and the other car, Toyota Camry, follow from behind same thing happened. You hit by 2 car in high speed. The report from this evening says your blood is all over the place, when they put you in the ambulance, the report said you barely breathing and loss lots of blood. But when they clean you up in emergency room, they did not found any excessive injury on you. Two hour after the accident, you woke up like nothing happened. Can you explain that?”
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Well, don’t wished for what you don’t mean. Anything can happened and that thing will change your life no matter how much you don’t like it, you cannot change the pass. This is how my view about my life change from suicide to surviving.
“New day same old nothing new. I woke up, go to work and wait the clock to reach 5pm. Only the different is, I took the highway route to go home, I have this aching feeling that telling me something is wrong but I am not sure what is. That time it kind of weird, I feel like I need to rush and I ride my bike at maximum speed and for unknown reason, my 150cc bike, which usually maximum speed is 135km per hour goes to 220km per hour and it feel so exciting for me since the road is clear. Out of nowhere, something appeared in front of me. That’s when I lost control and fall of my bike and slide all the way to the opposite direction of the road. The last thing I remember, I was about to get hit by a truck and that is it. When I woke up, I am lying in this hospital bed with all those peoples with camera in front of that door with some police officers outside and explaining this all over again with different people and you.”
“All the witness also said the road is clear then you just lost control for no reason and also don’t you feel something is off with your story Mr. Danie Kainos? Your bike scatter all over the road, the four by four Chevy that hit you? The cooling system burst, front bumper badly dented and the other car, Toyota Camry, follow from behind same thing happened. You hit by 2 car in high speed. The report from this evening says your blood is all over the place, when they put you in the ambulance, the report said you barely breathing and loss lots of blood. But when they clean you up in emergency room, they did not found any excessive injury on you. Two hour after the accident, you woke up like nothing happened. Can you explain that?”
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