The purpose of this article is to explain how you should judge people. In my past, I was always confused, back and forth with people I was dealing with
I experienced so many changing emotions based on one’s actions no depth included. So I told myself to analyze and sort out the hidden elements of this mystery, also help others understand this chaotic phenomenon. Why I call this chaos because I saw one’s actions which are only at first level with hidden relations neglected can drive you to the false conclusions and will draw a totally wrong picture of a person, and I am talking about black and the white difference here.
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I experienced so many changing emotions based on one’s actions no depth included. So I told myself to analyze and sort out the hidden elements of this mystery, also help others understand this chaotic phenomenon. Why I call this chaos because I saw one’s actions which are only at first level with hidden relations neglected can drive you to the false conclusions and will draw a totally wrong picture of a person, and I am talking about black and the white difference here.
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Sad day
I fought with my friend,
Broke my sure heart
I dumped my friendship,
With my burning heart
This made my day,
A very sad day
In my view,
I am unable to leave ,
My wrath has unstop grew
I am trying to weave,
My heart with few,
Of little pin with strive
My foe who once was friend,
Told me to send,
Some love to her and
He will keep that till his end
This made my day
A very happy day
The time when I was sad
Had been very bad
Now when I am gay
Time has changed to bay
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Sad day
I fought with my friend,
Broke my sure heart
I dumped my friendship,
With my burning heart
This made my day,
A very sad day
In my view,
I am unable to leave ,
My wrath has unstop grew
I am trying to weave,
My heart with few,
Of little pin with strive
My foe who once was friend,
Told me to send,
Some love to her and
He will keep that till his end
This made my day
A very happy day
The time when I was sad
Had been very bad
Now when I am gay
Time has changed to bay
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THE JOURNEY
Life has always been good with laughs
May be with a little flaws
Cherish the journey they say
But end is what stays all the way
Let's talk about school
Have to do the best, the major rule
Extra curricular is what I excel
Exams and marks not so well
Let's talk about friends
Different cities and it all ends
Best friend's forever?
You need them. Did they even call? No never.
Let's talk about relationships
Laughing out loud for everyone flips
Chase the memories they say
In the heart, bitter end is what stays.
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Life has always been good with laughs
May be with a little flaws
Cherish the journey they say
But end is what stays all the way
Let's talk about school
Have to do the best, the major rule
Extra curricular is what I excel
Exams and marks not so well
Let's talk about friends
Different cities and it all ends
Best friend's forever?
You need them. Did they even call? No never.
Let's talk about relationships
Laughing out loud for everyone flips
Chase the memories they say
In the heart, bitter end is what stays.
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Beautifully broken
She left when you needed her,
But you stood her up alone before when she needed you.
You say karma is a b*tch,
Maybe this is your karma hitting you.
Love is a beautiful word,
Equally the worst feeling.
Those who want never find it,
Those who get it never value it.
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder,
love is beautiful, everyone told her.
She loved me, and me alone,
Now, we are stranded alone.
Playing with her feelings,
I broke her heart into pieces,
Now we stay apart,
Wounds can be healed but not the broken heart. ©Asura
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She left when you needed her,
But you stood her up alone before when she needed you.
You say karma is a b*tch,
Maybe this is your karma hitting you.
Love is a beautiful word,
Equally the worst feeling.
Those who want never find it,
Those who get it never value it.
Beauty is in the eye of the beholder,
love is beautiful, everyone told her.
She loved me, and me alone,
Now, we are stranded alone.
Playing with her feelings,
I broke her heart into pieces,
Now we stay apart,
Wounds can be healed but not the broken heart. ©Asura
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No one can stand, you should support yourself,
Have to walk alone, hold yourself, thank you colleagues if you win ... then learn to correct it from your mistakes, even insist on doing it, if you have to fight for yourself
If someone loses, you should take responsibility for it only.
Yes, if you do something wrong then also be angry with yourself,
Give yourself some care, explain a little, even if you have some problems, cover the piece,
Then stand up boys by yourself, start again, if you feel bad in this phase, then later on they will
To refuse
No one can stand, you should support yourself
'You support yourself.
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Have to walk alone, hold yourself, thank you colleagues if you win ... then learn to correct it from your mistakes, even insist on doing it, if you have to fight for yourself
If someone loses, you should take responsibility for it only.
Yes, if you do something wrong then also be angry with yourself,
Give yourself some care, explain a little, even if you have some problems, cover the piece,
Then stand up boys by yourself, start again, if you feel bad in this phase, then later on they will
To refuse
No one can stand, you should support yourself
'You support yourself.
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