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Sad day
I fought with my friend,
Broke my sure heart
I dumped my friendship,
With my burning heart
This made my day,
A very sad day
In my view,
I am unable to leave ,
My wrath has unstop grew
I am trying to weave,
My heart with few,
Of little pin with strive
My foe who once was friend,
Told me to send,
Some love to her and
He will keep that till his end
This made my day
A very happy day
The time when I was sad
Had been very bad
Now when I am gay
Time has changed to bay
#iamsamhith #feedback
Sad day
I fought with my friend,
Broke my sure heart
I dumped my friendship,
With my burning heart
This made my day,
A very sad day
In my view,
I am unable to leave ,
My wrath has unstop grew
I am trying to weave,
My heart with few,
Of little pin with strive
My foe who once was friend,
Told me to send,
Some love to her and
He will keep that till his end
This made my day
A very happy day
The time when I was sad
Had been very bad
Now when I am gay
Time has changed to bay
#iamsamhith #feedback
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Only true sciencists could undertand my poem
Love surreal
Electron is moving alone
What is photon doing?
Quarks gave answer saying,
Photon is in date with neutron
Electron's heart brakes, he says,
"but, neutron is neutral na"
"don't feel sad for this" chemistry says,
"love is blind na?"
'Feeling sorry for you, electron'
Yours loving #iamsamhith
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Love surreal
Electron is moving alone
What is photon doing?
Quarks gave answer saying,
Photon is in date with neutron
Electron's heart brakes, he says,
"but, neutron is neutral na"
"don't feel sad for this" chemistry says,
"love is blind na?"
'Feeling sorry for you, electron'
Yours loving #iamsamhith
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Wage, rage and Mocking bird
My soul has started to set,
My confidence has drowned to wet,
Remember, it had burned once,
Leaving the ashes behind.
Myself have become a bird,
Not a simple ave type,
It’s a fire catched mocking bird,
With a supersonic wage.
Wage and rage has ended,
Fire in it has evaporated,
Satisfying of death of foe,
I have now turned to vulture!
#iamsamhith
#review
#poem
My soul has started to set,
My confidence has drowned to wet,
Remember, it had burned once,
Leaving the ashes behind.
Myself have become a bird,
Not a simple ave type,
It’s a fire catched mocking bird,
With a supersonic wage.
Wage and rage has ended,
Fire in it has evaporated,
Satisfying of death of foe,
I have now turned to vulture!
#iamsamhith
#review
#poem