My little angel

The wait was over,
the emptiness was filled!
You came to this world,
like a shining star in my life!
Charm like the moon,
Gentle as a flower,
The lotus eyes of yours,
Made my surroundings still!
That moment,
realised the magique of creation!
You made me feel especial,
My adorable brother!!

#suan
#poem #love #brother #family #relationship #life #bond

#review

One of my first poems. Wrote it in my teens.
It could have been better, but wanted to keep it raw.

Would be glad to know your thoughts.